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Hi guys.. now the next part…
Sun rays filtered through the curtains and woke Geet up.. Never in her life had she slept till the sun shone.. She had a very comfortable sleep and her body dint want to get up.. But she had to….She rubbed her eyes.. and then tried to get up…that is when she realized her position.. She was sleeping on her husband's chest.. and his chest was bare.. She blushed…getting up she sat near him smiling….he looked so relaxed while sleeping.. locks of hair was scattered carelessly over his forehead.. and his mouth was slightly opened… she placed her hand under his chin and gently pushed it, close.. but then it opened again.., making her giggle… the sound of her giggling… disturbed him as he turned around.., pulling her hand along with him.. She fell on him.. waking him up… he looked up.. clearing his dazed eyes… to see a blushing wife… on him… he smirked as he saw her shut her eyes… he felt so like kissing her and so he did.. He placed a small peck on her lips.. Maan knew this was too early for that.. And for now.. this was best…
Geet opened her eyes… wide as possible.. she was shocked and her lips formed a perfect 'O' Maan was amused by her reaction.. and those lips were calling for more.. before he lost control.. he spoke
Good morning biwi.. thank you for the morning kiss… he said… smirking… Geet blushed even more.. as she quickly got up and ran toward the washroom…he smiled.. at his shy wife…
He liked this.. he liked how things were growing… and he dint mind having this for life… was this how marriage was suppose to be??? was this how arranged marriage felt like??? He wondered still smiling.. he was going to give it a shot.. and then he remembered his plan.. he needed to talk to Dadi abt this.., thinking he got up and rushed to the guest room.. to fresh up..
Tho Dadi.. what do you think??? He asked as he laid on her lap.. telling her his plan…
Hmmm bohot romantic hai.. giggled his Dadi.. and Maan rolled his eyes.. no one could believe that this woman was over 70
Dadi.. he said in a stern voice…
Ok ok… accha plan hai.. I really like it… Ramu and his wife are already there.. so you will have their help also… Dadi added.. she was extremely happy with this idea… she knew that Maan staying in this house with Samira was bad news.. Both her grandsons will not be able to proceed in their lives like this… and now with Maan thinking so, things would defo be better….
Ok Dadi.. now I will talk to Geet also.. saying he left the room with a very happy Dadi smiling there…..
Geet was in the kitchen.., preparing breakfast.. She was feeling very different.. she was in a very cheerful mood.. she hummed a song softly as she chopped coriander leaves and then sprinkled them on top of the dish.. She dusted her hands and turned around… to see Dev coming into the kitchen…
Good morning Bhabhi.. he wished.. with a smile.. but the smile never reached his eyes.. Geet dint reply.. she kept staring at his face… he did look young.. but there were lines of stress on his forehead…. His eyes were surrounded by dark clouds… as thought they were crying pain.. and misery.. she could feel him being sad.. so unhappy… and his face.. so pale and tired.. he had not shaved… and looked like a man who had lived a nightmare..
Bhabhi.. he called her again.. his voice with concern…
Hmmm… wo. Aap teek ho?? She just asked.. unable to stop her self.. She felt miserable looking at this man who was her devar.. Though he was older than her… but still.. a devar was like a son to a bhabhi.. and she would never want her son to suffer alone…
He smirked at this question.. the smirk was not one of happiness or hatred.. it was of sadness and pain… kyu kya hua hai mujhe??? He asked her looking into her eyes…
Sab kuch.. she replied.. as she looked into his brown one.. much like his brother's… trying to read what his lips weren't reveling…
Me teek hun…. Zinda hun.. aur kya.. but leave all that.. tell me.. how are you doing.. naya ghar.. naya mahol.. he said… trying to put on a cheerful face..
Sab teek hai Veerji.. she said with a small shy smile.. She had never talked to other people back home… and she felt a bit nervous and shy to be talking to him…
Hmm…. Tho kya banaya hai.. he asked looking behind her… bohot bhook lagi hai.. he said placing a hand on his stomach…
Ji.. ayiye.. sab tayar hai.. she said.. taking the dish in one hand as she proceeding outside… Dev picked up another dish and followed her..
Arrey yeh kya kar rahe hen aap she freaked out…
Kuch nahi bhabhi.. just helping you.. so that I can get food soon… saying he brushed her off and entered the dinning.. where Samira was sitting filing her nails..
Samira.. tum bhi is ghar ki bahu ho.. I understand you don't know how to cook.. but you can at least help bhabhi in this…. He told her.. Glaring at her…
Samira jumped at his voice.. she got up and looked down… she felt humiliated.. Dev… how dare he humiliate her in front of this gavar.. she thought..as she gritted her teeth… to stop from shouting back…
Dev… Maan stopped him.. is this the way to talk to your wife??? he shouted
Exactly bhai.. she is my wife.. saying Dev kept the dish on the table and left the room…..
Everyone was shocked to hear this.. Dev never spoke like this to anyone.. leave his own brother… what is happening to my family Dadi thought as she looked longingly towards the empty chair near Samira.. After sometime, the members started eating.. Samira too finished her breakfast and left for some important work… Maan left to see to his plan and also mind the office.. and Dev..he locked himself inside his room… Dadi signed as she slowly moved into her room dejected…
Geet looked at the plate in her hand.. it was her food.. but she dint feel like having it.. she remembered the way Dev looked and felt really bad for him..and him being hungry.. made her guilty.. She felt the fight started cos of her only… she felt really bad for causing problems in the family… she filled another plate and placed both of them in a tray… and took it with her.. she decided to pacify her devar.. as she made her way to his room, knocked it and entered… Dev was seated on a recliner.. and had his phone in his hand…. She thought she saw a small spark in his eyes.. but it died immediately making her think nothing of it… she placed the tray on the table…
Challiye Veerji.. khana kha te hai… she called him.. as she opened the tray placing the plates out…
Nahi bhabi… I'm not in the mood.. he said..
Accha.. she asked dejected…. Teek hai.. me ne bhi nahi khaya.. book bhi lagi hai.. she said patting her tummy and pouting…. Le jathi hu….She then acted like closing the tray when Dev stopped her..
Ok.. come lets eat.. he said… as a small smile lightened his face…he understood she was doing drama.. but somehow he felt wanted.. and it felt so nice to be wanted….
Geet smiled…. And took the plate and gave him.. both the bhabhi and devar ate in silence but the silence was very comforting.. Today after long time, Dev felt a bit better.. his guilt though, pricked him like a needle every min of a day, he felt better today.. Was it her motherly care or was it her childishness… he dint know.. but it was smoothing…
Dadi.. smiled.. and wiped her tear as she left from there…
Geet… she is just perfect.. she thought… thank you Babaji.. she prayed.. and entered her room….
Maan came home by 2 in the afternoon.. he had cleaned the house.. and had bought necessities…. His plan was to live with Geet in 'Gokul'… his house.. their house… from now on… after what Samira said he had thought about it for long and had concluded that.. Samira and he cannot live in the same house.. He understood that his feelings for Samira was nothing but attraction… but this was not the same with her.. so he would not live in the same house with her.. This would be easier for both of them… and especially for their respective spouses… he remembered the argument that happened in the morning… he signed.. Dev.. was not normal now a days.. he knew he needed time.. and this decision will defo give him that…. he entered the house and saw Geet clearing the table.. and felt a bit odd.. he dint understand why Geet chose to do such chores around the house..That day also he saw her cleaning their room.. why?? He dint know.. there were servants around to do all these things.. but after her coming into this house, he found her doing all this…
Geet… get me a cup of coffee… he called as he marched up the stairs.. Geet ran into the kitchen and prepared a cup and entered the room…she placed the cup on the table and turned to leave…she was still feeling shy after morning.. her nervousness made her to leave the room…
Geet.. he called.. and she stopped.. close the door and come here.. sit.. he said patting the place near him…
Geet gulped.. as she remembered the kiss or to say the peck of the morning… she did as he told her and sat down… he then held her hand..
Geet… he called.. and she looked up.. into those brown eyes… pack your bags… he told her… and she looked at him terrified.. in a min… her brain started thinking.. She thought Maan was sending her out of this house.. she shivered…
We are leaving from here.. he told her.. as he looked into her eyes.. as thought reading her mind..
Geet widened her big eyes… as she heard this.. she dint know what, why and where they were going.. she nodded her head and did as told.. she packed her bags.. and Nakul came in to do Maan.. She politely refused Nakul and sent him off.. she did her husband's packing also.. Maan just looked at her intentionally…He saw her carefully placing his things, neatly and in a perfect manner…. After sometime.. she zipped the bag and declared silently that she was done… Maan who was till now ogling his wife, came back to the present.. He nodded and led her out of the house… he then went down and saw Dadi waiting…
Geet beta… dadi said hugging… I'll miss you.. she said as she wiped a tear…
Dadi ma.. I'll miss everyone.. Geet said looking around…
I know bete… she said patting her cheeks.. I wish you all the best… for a new home and a new life… Dadi wished as Geet and Maan touched her feet… that is when Geet realized.. that she was leaving for a new house.. she looked at Maan for a min.. and then turned the other side… she was really shocked.. she dint understand why this was happening.. did she split the house.. she thought.. horrified.. was today's argument so bad, that her husband decided to take her away from here??? She dint know.. as she worried her head.. following Maan…
Come inside.. Maan said as he entered their house…Geet knew this house.. This was the first house she had entered.. and now she was gonna live here.. alone..
Few people followed them into the house carrying the bags.. and placed it in the room.. Geet opened the bags and started arranging them.. by the time she finished it.. it was nearly 7… she dint see the time.. She was just doing her work… mentally scolding her self, getting guilty.. Maan kept looking at her.. He was confused by her behavior… little did he know the amount of insecurities she had… he looked at the time.. and then smirked..
Geet… I'm hungry .. kya banaya hai.. he asked her.. in a serious tone.. That is when she realized she had not planned anything for the night.. she looked at him.. blinking.. and scared.. will he shout at her?? Will he hit her..?? like her family.. she wondered as she saw him advancing towards her… she kept on looking at him.. as she mentally prepared for the blow.. She closed her eyes expecting one.. but nothing came… she opened her eyes to see Maan standing near the opened cupboard and getting out a sari..
Ok.. change into this.. fast.. we will eat outside… he told her… and walked out.. Geet looked at the beautiful blue sari.. for long time.. she then took it and wore it.. after 20 min she came out and Maan was standing.. talking to someone on the phone.. but as soon as he saw her.. he cut the call and gave her a small but rare smile.. He then led her to the car and they drove to the restaurant….
The first day of their new life.. they ate in a restaurant.. Great.. she thought.. this is absolutely Great.. she cursed her self.. but outward.. she looked calm as a cucumber.. Maan dint know what was going on in that mind of his wife… it looked at thought she was deep in thought…. he seriously needed to get her to open up.. he thought as they entered their home after dinner….
Precap: Dev knows…. Maaneet moments…..
Hey guys.. another update.. it was just like a filler.. nothing special happening.. except for showing you how insecure Geet is and a bit abt Dev and Geet…
hope it was ok… always open for suggestions.. I did get a really good one recently by Preeti….so thank you.. you'd know abt that later on….
Happy parts will be there… next two or three and then that is all… then the story takes a turn…
I have done with the next part…. But cannot post it.. as I dint take it in my pen drive…
Do like and comment…
Dono when I'll be able to update next.. hopefully soon….
Bye guys….
part 10
nice part...
so Maan wants to have a peaceful and happy and love filled life with Geet...
he better get to know about that cheap witch Sameera soon...
poor Dev...
but liked the rapport between Dev and Geet...
hope Maan sees this too and not misunderstand kyunki is chudail par koi bharosa nahi...
a cheap low class Sameera is behaving like born in Royal Palace...
cont soon dear...
Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
beautiful story ! came across today and loved it ! samira is such a scheming lady...wanted to trap both maan and dev but got none...dev is far from her and maan...he just moved on from his attraction...! loved maaneet moments and his decision to live seperately...waiting for more and more of their cute moments ...
Originally posted by: shubhi_s
thanks for updating
loved itatleast maan will b away from samira😡 and close to geet😳😉wating for next update
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