DIVINE LOVE MG SS Epilouge Page 161 27/6/2013 - Page 69

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Posted: 12 years ago


Waiting...
When will u update this...???
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PART - 11

THEY never been so expressive,but the thought of loosing each other forced them to give voice to their unsaid and strage emotions,which bound them strongly but they never accept them. May they dont have ready for them or they have doubt on their destiny. But some times fate planned something else for us which we never dreamed off. Same in their case. Maan's rage bring them closer and now they are indeed together. Maan's lonely and droughted life again going to smile just because her. Her sweet smile,simple but cute gestures,curageous nature changed his life.

And for her Maan is the first one who bring happiness and colours in her faded life. His care and concern melts her. Inspite of facing betrayal at evry step by the hands of her own,her heart still beats and uttered only one name, Maan. His simple touch made her decisions weak. She never desired anything in her life as she desired for him. The very thought of parting from him is proved killing to her but for his better sake she stoned her heart and just about to leave him,when he caught her.

How can he allowed his fate cheated him one more time. This time he won. He stopped her,stole her for himself to made her of him for lifetime.

Maan stands holding her in his embrace
Both silently love immencly each other that they only want others happiness. Geet's soft palm on his back strengthen him. He feels complete and calm having her with him. Maan broke the hug and tenderly kissed on her forhead.

'lets go Geet',he told her softly.

The faith she have on him not allowed her to raised que where. She nodded and hold his hand. Her evry move fills him with proud and his chest enlarged. Her trust on him gave him as he defeat the whole world,when she beside him,holding his hand confidently.

Both sat in his car and he drove to other direction. After 20mins of driving he finally stopped at the front premesies of temple. Maan came out and open her side door. He help her in coming out. Maan told her where he bring her and why.

'Geet i know the turmoil u going through. So today i end up all. We going to marry today with all rituals. Last night i over heared your converstaion with daima and arranged all things.',he entwined his fingers with her and stepped on the stairs of temple.

Geet's heart throbbed against her rib cage. The coming happines bring fear and joy both. Joy of entering in a new life with a person to whom she love most,and fear of unpredictable future. With each and every step she took her fear rosed. Will she able to handle all this. Will she able secure this for last. Will she cabale to initate with him? Many que and queries banged her head conti. When both is about to enter inside,Geet rooted to to her place,denied stepping furtherly. Maan looked behind and glance her in amusement.

'what happened?',he enquired.'Geet you want to do marriage with all rituals then...?',he cant get the reason of her worries.

'Maan pls think once more'.she suggest in a fluffered voice. Her lips turn dry and face turn wrinkled.

Maan hurted but ans contently.'you still have a doubt on me?'

'no.but my brother is your guilty.reh paoge apne gunehgar ki behan k sath?'

'ha.coz u r innocent like my Shreya. Geet i already commit a mistake and i regret on that. Pls dont raise my guilt anymore.',Maan said strongly,grasping her arms hardly.

Geet turn quite and steping with him. Daima alredy waiting for both there. She is extreamly happy when she got to know about his plan. Priest set up all things. Maan sit with her and priest start reading the mantras. Daima tied a knot. Maan smear sindoor in the partion of her head and tied a mangalsutra around her neck. Then both stood up for pheras. Maan hold her hand to support her throughout. Maan made her dream come true. Thought she aint see the rituals but they finally wedded with in a proper way now. Priest declared them married and both take blessing from daima as except her they dont have anyone.

All 3 returned to home. Daima went inside to bring thal of aarti and kumkum. She do aarti first and then Geet entered with her kumkum smeared feet.

Both entered in a new life,but are they ready for it? Geet sitting in shreya's room and thinking only this. Daima came to sent her in Maan's room. She persuading her but she is shivering and clenched her daima more tightly. She denied going to his room.

'daima pls let me sleep here',she pleads in pretext of fear. Though she accept him,love him,still she is not ready for him.

Daima understands her turmoil and dont want to force her,but on the same time she also thinking about Maan. She feels trapped btween both. Querling with her quandary she seeking for right decision when Maan came and ends all her worries. Seeing him she felt hesitated so Maan himself starts.

'daima aap dono ko ab aram krna chahiye',he said simply.

'lekin beta...',Maan cuts her before she completes as he is aware of her words.
He alredy read the restlessness of her body. 'Daima she needs you. And dont worry about me. I can understand she needs some time. Good night both of u.',he wished both and went away. Daima laid besides her and she came in her embrace like a small baby. Daima asked to her.

'beta tu sari zindagi aise hi rehegi.abi to teri shadi b ho gai.'

'dont know daima. I love him but...',she stops and hide her face in her. Daima patted her back and she went to sleep.

Maan standing outside of her room and saw her sleeping. Smile crept on his sculptured lips. She is as pure as divine soul,as innocent like a small baby and Maan dont want to snatch it from her. Inspite of falling insanly for her,he wants to waits,untill she herself agreed.

Next day Maan decided to made her habitual of this new place first. He start her training and introduced her with each and every corner of this house. He help her daily in remembring the things. She count steps in her mind. Some times Maan placed unexpected hurdles and trained her to tackle with them. Geet too respond accord of him. She learn everything quickly. With in 15 days,she learnt many things about this new place. This needs lot of patience but Maan never tired of doing this. He take help of Daima and both trained her slowly slowly. She learnt about the rooms and the distance and time she needs to go from one place to another.

In this many time she falls but on every fall Maan's strong arm protects her. He become her strength.

One day he got some call and he ran hurridly without telling her. She get worried as he dont replied her any call. Later at night he entred his home silently. Geet is sleeping on dinner table. In his wait she wont eat anthing. Maan caressed her head rested on table. He made a silent move to his room. Daima came to him and read his face. His muscles were taut and jaw clenched hard,having many tence lines on his forehead. He remove his shirt impatiently.

'beta bura na mano to kuchh puchhu?',she asked for his permission. Maan nodded.'beta baat kya hai subah se kuchh bataya nai abi aa rae ho itna der se. Hum dono kitna pareshan ho gaye the tumhare liye. Beta baat kya hai sab theek to hai na?'her voice showed her fear clearly.

'aisi koi bat nai hai daima.',he avoid her gaze and confirmed shortly.

'beta main janti hu chhota muh badi baat.pata nai mera haq hai b ya nai par,beta jhoot na bolo.maa hu or apne bachho ki ankhe padd skti hu.',she denied accepting his lie.

'daima wo...',he hesitating telling her. Her feared raised. Maan glance in her eyes and clenched hard his fists.'daima viraj is dead',he told coldly and daima turn stunned. She was felt like fall. Her knees turn week. Though she is hell angry on him but still he is the one to whom she grow up like mother. Her eyes welled up.

'nai beta...par kaise...mera matlab hai...beta kahi tumne to...',she hesitated completeing herself.

Maan angrily hit his fist in wardrobe's door and said frustratingly,'i wish i could. But unfortunately he died in a crash.'

in morning Maan recieve calls from his dectative to whom he hired for searching Viraj. He told him in morning that the flight is crashed from which he is travelling and all passangers died in that crash. Maan himself went to airport and confirmed everything. Maan is busy in tolding everything to Daima without awaring of her presence at the door. Geet overheared everything. Her countless sniffles made them aware of her presence. Daima and Maan get shocked seeing her there as they were thinking she is sleeping. Maan's presence awake her and she came after him. She sence his smell and came behind him and heared everything. Geet falls back on wall. She broked completely hearing this news. Viraj dont worth her tears,but being his sister,even after knowing his all sins,her heart cries aloud. She know it may hurts Maan so she immediately run to other side,hitting with many thing in way.

Maan understood the tormenting she is going through. He ran after her and supports her. Geet instantly wiped off her tears,keeping his feelings in her mind.

Maan filled her in bone crush hug first., 'Geet ro lo.main rokunga nai. Beh jane do in aansuo ko,kyunki jab tak ye tumhare ander rahenge ye tum saans nai lene denge. I promise mujha bura nai lagega. I agreed i hate him most. Lekin usi tarah ye b sach hai ki wo tumhara bhai tha. Ro lo Geet ro lo.',he forced her not to hide her tears and let them oozing out of her. Geet cried loud and burst in tears. She clenched his bare skin hard and cried. Maan hold her tight and not let her go away from him. He knows she need him most at this moment. He walked off to his room with her and made her sit on a bed comfortably.

'Maan viraj ki body?',she asked in her sobbs.

'nai mill skti coz pura plane burn ho gaya or uske sath hi sare passengers bhi. Kisi ki b body nai milegi.' maan sad friedgely having no emotions at all. His eyes were blank. If anything he can feels then its only her pain she going through...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

finally they are ritually married
love the way maan understands her turmoil

then viraj is no more good.
he just gave pain to geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it finally both married with rituals
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
so finally with every rituals maan married geet and dad was there to witness it😳
maan understanding geet's hesitation told her to be with dadi
so viraj is dead and geet also overheard it and broke down

waise i wouls still ask u is viraj really dead or its a ploy by him only 😳 itna to clear kar sakti hai na😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
so finally with every rituals maan married geet and dad was there to witness it😳
maan understanding geet's hesitation told her to be with dadi
so viraj is dead and geet also overheard it and broke down

waise i wouls still ask u is viraj really dead or its a ploy by him only 😳 itna to clear kar sakti hai na😛



ha Viraj sach me marr gaya or dadi nahi daima hai Geet ku wo.
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Posted: 12 years ago



So Viraj is dead ...hmmm.kahin ya fake to nahi...😲
I mean apne aap ko bachane ke liye ...drama..😡
Maan is so sweet ..taking care of Geet...n support her..😳
What next...???😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
Finally maneet married with full ritual
Maan giving time to geet to accept their relation .
Omg viraj dead
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part maan got married ritualy... But get is hesitated to start their relationship physically...
May be as time pases she may repocate... N the news tht viraj is death is hard to belive for me... May be u had store sumthng for us in future.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc part...
finally they r married...
so viraj is dead... bt i doubt it...uski body nai mili.!!!!so...

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