Waiting For You#3 (Thread 4 Link @ Pg 142) - Page 37

Originally posted by: TaranaStyle

We are almost there... keep going!!
Mona... bp ekdum high ho gaya hai... raham karo.

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi sweety

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

AAj kkiiddoo ka kaam u karing 😆😛

Originally posted by: LILY111144

kiddooo gayab😭

laks bhi pta nehi kahan hei????

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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

haa lakshmi bhi gayab aaj 😕 chlo koi nahi m update deti hu 😊

Originally posted by: LILY111144

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Waiting For This 😳

Part 24

When next morning came and went both did not know. They were sitting there, mingling their hands in hands waited for Dadi to come back in conscious which she was not doing. She was not hearing their restless heartbeats their impatience pleads. Maan and Geet were hungry thirsty fatigued yet did not move a little from the place which had been occupied since last night. The sofa kept before room was witnessing their condition, cuddling them down in itself. It was night when doctor advised them to go home back as Dadi condition was better and improving. But Maan was not ready to leave her sight for once even. He denied.

"Bro you go. I will be here'' Dev who was in Mansion whole day came back and suggested them to leave for some hours at least which Maan again rejected.

"I will not Dev. I'm fine!!''

"Look Mr. Khurana Savitriji's condition is better now. I think you should go and take rest for some hours warna aapki tabiyat bigar jaayegi'' Doctor tried

"Kaha na mai thik hu. I can stay here for long. You all don't need to do worry!!'' Maan hand increased pressure on hold where Geet hand was mingled. She knew he needed some rest but had no courage to voice it out. When doctor looked her with expectation she tried but again Maan did not agree.

"Mr. Khurana please, if you don't need rest at least think about your wife! Mrs. Khurana!! Look at her how tired she is!! She needs rest''

Geet thought brought back some sense in him. He looked her who was looking very weak and wearied. Maan felt bad that he did not once thought about her and finally agreed.

In Mansion,

"Maan kuch kha lijiye!!'' Geet entered holding a plate in hand in Maans room but found it was empty. "Maan kaha gaye'' she thought. She came back and looked all around in study, terrace, rooms' halls but, no sign of Maan. She becomes worried where he went. "Maan!!'' she called

She found him in Dadi room sitting silent like was living his spent past with her. Geet felt ached her heart cried looking a strong hearten man was breaking down like a child for his mother. She went to him ..

"Maan chaliye khana kha lijiye'' she spoke cheering him up sat in front.

"No Geet I'm not hungry''

"Please Maan.. achha thik hai mai aapko khilati hu!'' she took a bite and brought before his mouth but he nudged her hand and stood up started going when Geet held his hand stopped him.

Your eyes have mirrors your face has sheen

Let me look through you in your heart keen

I can see you I can feel you

You are veiling yourself which is only my shore

Maan stopped by her hold but did not turn back. She own comes to him tilt her head looked him and gave a smile. Maan wants to give smile back but had grief had pain in heart which led him to block his show of yearns. He turned his head side concealed from her. She held his chin made him look her and let him see in her eyes which was holding so much love for him and him only..

If I am here your soul can't be thirsty

Of love which you are longing for

Will wipe whole hardship from your face

Being a moment of happiness and ease

Maan found a world of peace with her, around her like she was an angel possessed glee for him in her. He held her face within both his palms brought her nearer. She did not let her eyes bowed down nor concealed her expressions. Let him view her whole expectations with a glowing skin which was the impact of his touch on her. She closed her eyes when felt touch of his lips on her cheek, it burned, shaded flame colors. Then other and then her eyes.. Reflected same..

Please don't conceal Let it exhibit your desire to me

Please let you feel shackled in my arms

I am yours only don't think of anything else

Let me feel the same which you own want

Their senses clouded with closeness. His breath was heaving with his. Travel of few inches and they would reach to their favored land, world of their own hand made. Maan wanted to tour in this world when she stopped him and showed the plate "Pahle khana fir..'' she whispered covering his mouth with her hand..

"Fir?'' he husked teased her with his altered tone. She shivered with his breathe which was falling on her face when he spoke.

"Fir Geet!!'' He held her chin and raised her face up which had lighten up due to fire which started to combust inward her body. "hm!!'' his smile was making her die.. Her legs became weighty was giving her trouble to stand up on its own. He held her waist to give support in stand knowing she could not be able to do it herself now. He lifted her in him arm in jerk braking her thoughts suddenly.. "Ye..what're you doing Maan. Koi aa jaayega!!'' she spoke with feeble voice

"Kyu.. tumhe mere sath akele dar lagta hai Geet!!'' his eyes were breaking her every gathered bravery which she would use in her elude but Maan was making it near to impossible. He started to carry her toward bed. She felt tickled thrilled with the prevision and sat there snuggled in herself. Maan came nearer and sat beside. She closed her eyes pressed it tight lacking in bearing his eyes torture. He smiled "Geet.. Open your mouth''

She felt like she will die in blush so soon. Her face turned into scarlet nodded no. "Do as I said Geet open mouth otherwise..''

She with throbbing heartbeats parted her lips sinking deep down in shyness and mind was unquiet when something touched her lips. Few second took her to realize what it was and then in jerk open eyes and looked.. "Roti!!'' she spoke out then realization stuck and made her blush more if could possible.

"Why did you expect anything else??'' Maan made her showered more in her own made embarrassment. She could not take it more tried to escape but he did not let her.

"Now be quiet and eat first'' he demanded. Not to make her more embarrassed, he fed her a bite and then she, to him. After finished their food looking in each other's eyes Geet stood up to leave, go in her room when Maan shook his head made her stop near him. He made her sit on bed and himself kept head on her lap and closed eyes, tried to leave this woken world and soon, entered in his dreamland where could feel her near him completely with no impede..

Precap :Brij Meets Dev 😡😡😡

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