For Dr. Khurana, with love, MG SS, pg 177,178 - Page 117

Originally posted by: ritzy09

awesome updates dear...

first of all sorry for late comments and short as well...my keyboard has gone for a toss and hence commenting from onscreen keyboard is a pain...but I can't stop myself from reading and commenting anymore so somehow will try...

Last chapter was wonderful. I could relate to Geet's emotions and her fear after listening to all that bakwaas. But fear not, Dr. Khurana was there with his medication. Not only he did chutti of mrs Sharma but also erased all her fearsa nd insecurities with his love. I especially loved the part where he stayed back understanding her need...

Epilogue was again hot, passionate and happenning...a special night made even more special but thier sweet nok jhoks, nakhras and off course Maan's idea of massage and Geet's idea of pregnancy hormones ka atyachaar...

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I also read the note about another SS...please yaar bring it on...waiting eagerly already

for the SS dear



Superb SS dear



loved it to the core




Beautifully written

Maan a loveable n caring husband as well as a Dr

oh no Geet had a miscarriage n only family members are aware of it and poor Geet had to listen to all the rubbish talk of Mrs Sharma n her companion in the function


but loved the way how Maan handle the situation n understand the unsaid word of his Mishti

Geet informing Maan gud news tht she is expecting n Maan this time was more n extra careful toward his Mishti

Epilogue was totally Awesome

lovely scene written by u n it was totally passionate, the message scene - the way Maan acted of having backache, Geet informing Maan tht once again she is expecting was too gud -

"Kya hua Maan, aap chilla kyun rahe ho... tabiyat kharab hai kya... why are you looking like this...", she ran over to run a hand across his face worried for him..

"Pata nahin Geet poora body hurt ho raha hai...Sugar bhi low hai... I am feeling so weak... mera kya hoga", moaning and groaning he removed his shoes and socks and stretched on his stomach hiding his face in the bed.

The countdown in his head started 1...2...3...4

"Koi baat nahin...", she tried hard not to let the disappointment show, "... aap bed pe so jayiye, main kapde change karke aati hoon, thoda rest kijye you will feel better soon".

#Oh no, aisa karegi toh natak ka kya fayda...#

"Nahi, Ouch... Oww...", his drama gained tempo, "...Pehle mujhe massage de do, phir chali jaana Geet, bohut dard ho raha hai", he added making puppy eyes.

"Par Maan mere paas koi balm bhi toh nahi hai, kaise karoo...", she tried to reason with him.

"Tum apne haathon se kar do, or you sit on my back... tumhare weight se bhi accha lage ga...", wanting her near he accidentally blurted out the last part.

"Weight se, kya matlab hai aapka; Main moti ho gayi hoon kya, kya keh rahe hai aap, mera weight ek kilo bhi nahi badha hai, samjhe aap", she had turned a nice shade of red fuming and looking away from him now.

#Oh no, yeh gaadi toh wrong track pe chali gayi#, he quickly tried to back pedal.

"Geet tumhe sirf apni padi hai, yaha main dard se tadap raha hoon aur tum kuch bhi keh rahi ho.. ", he looked at her with sad eyes sticking his lower lip out a bit.

" Mujhe aap ko ek baat batani hai ", she said tucking herself more close to him.

"Bolo na Geet, main sun raha hoon", he smiled at her lovingly.

" Mujhe aap ke tabiyat ki fikar hone lagi hai ", she smiled to herself now.

"Kyun, kya hua hai mujhe, ekdum fit and fine toh hoon, dekho", he lowered his face to ask her puzzled.

"Aap ko phir se do do multivitamin leni padegi... ", she smirked silently, pressing her lips to stop the giggle that was ready to erupt out of her throat.

"Phir se matlab, main toh abhi bhi roz multivitamin le raha hoon", he answered her.

Suddenly it occurred to him what she was saying. Do multivitamin.

"Geet, sach..., Mansi is going to have a brother or sister... Thank you Babaji" he hugged her to himself kissing her on her forehead. They held each other content with the blessings showered on them. Soon she turned slightly away to look at him.

She had an impish smile on her face now.

"Aap samaj gaye na maine aap ko yaha iss sunsan farmhouse mein kyun bulaya hai", she was totally enjoying giving back all the teasing in spades now.

"To give me the good news aur kya ho sakta hai...", he countered.

"Pregnancy ke saath kuch aur bhi hota hai Maan", she raised an eyebrow, looking him up and down.

"kya, ... kya matlab hai tumhara Geet", he said falteringly. He had guessed what she had meant long ago but this nok-jhok with her and a teasing relaxed Geet was just too precious to let go so fast. She wanted to tease him and he welcomed that happily. He wanted to savor her playfulness, his mishti, his love, the mother of his child, no children.

"... pregnancy hormones...", she raised and lowered her eyebrows rapidly, copying his comical style.

"Dekho Geet, yeh sab late pregnancy mein hota hai, pehle se nahi", he rose from the sofa putting distance between them.

"Main ek doctor hoon, mujhe yeh sab pata hai.. tum abhi se mujh par attyachar nahi kar sakti...".

Secretly tickled to death by his naughty wife, he continued his playfulness with her as he tried to run away from her.

"Main complaint karoonga, dekho yeh sab galat hai, meri bhi kuch izzat honi chahiye", his hands crossed over himself as if to protect himself.

"Tum mujhe aise use nahi kar sakti, meri complaint har ghar tak pohuchegi".

She chased after him with a pillow in hand while he ran for his life around the sofa.

"'Main pregnancy hormones se pidhit patiyon' ka morcha laga doonga, hum Prime minister se milenge Geet", they were playfully running around the sofa now.

"Agar kissi ne na suni, toh mein Parliament mein yeh issue uthvaooga".

The story was a total roller coaster ride from love, romance, passion, trust, understanding and care




Would like to read how Maaneet meet n fell in love with each other n their marriage

wow simply fantabulous SS dear.

Loved it to d core.

I am speechless.

Each & ever moment was outstanding.

Thanx for this wonderful SS.

would love to read how they met.

Tfd pm.

Oh my my my!! What a terrific OS!! Mind blowing dear. Really loved the story, the characters you portrayed thou mainly on Maaneet, the plot and mainly the way your described every scene. Superb.. Thanks for writing such a such.. Where were you all this while… Is this really your first time on Geet Forum! You should continue writing.. Amazingly written…Well done..

Originally posted by: had2bu

I don't know whether people take the time to read others posts, like others post or even go out of the way to comment on others posts anymore... From the mass exodus of writers leaving the forum it certainly does not seem so.

I do know that without you reading a lot of my drafts and reassuring your crazy BHB that everything she wrote is not crap, I would not have the ability to post it all. For someone to take so much of an effort for another, I think only you can do that. No wonder SOL threads are a home to all of us who migrate here to hang out with you.

*blushing prettily n lifting collar at all the praise*😳😳😳 Are i didntt do anything..i get added benefit od reading it before hand😉😉😉 selfish me😃

Thanks for everything Aashu...🤗

🤗 no thanks

For all the joy I have felt in putting my work out there and getting tons of happy moments..🤗

For me to give back to all the writers whose work I enjoyed including you🤗

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