The parent, NEW THREAD-PAGE 1,MAY 1,2013

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: amks

A heart touching story, reading this is completely new experience.
Each character you described is deep and the way you describe each one makes every character of real life.

The way you describe shoki's character has mixture of both good and bad , just like real life where we met several people who shows different aspect of their personality at different point of time.

It clearly shows,Both devil and angel are inside a person. It depend on person whom he choose and whom he ignore,

Looking forward to read further, please update it as soon as possible.

Thank you for your kind words...😊

and welcome to "The parent"..😊

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: punam2712
MAAN'S SIRJEE IS SHOKI
BUT HOW DID HIS DAUGHTER LAND UP WITH HIM AND WHERE IS GEET
MAAN WAS YOUNGER THAN GEET BY TWO YEARS
MAAN WILL BE A FATHER TO SUTA - INTERESTING NAME
WANT TO KNOW THE SIGNIFICANCE
SHOKI LIVED IN HIS GUILT ALL HIS LIFE - GEET'S INNOCENT AND SCARED EYES DID NOT LET HIM LIVE IN PEACE
SHOWS HE WAS NOT A MAN WITHOUT A CONSCIENCE JUST THE CIRCUMSTANCES
AND HE DID NOT GET A CHANCE TO PAY FOR HIS SINS AND MAKE AMENDS

You are absolutely right about shoki,punam...😊

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
So his Sirjee is the one !
No wonder , drinking is destroying !
Strange ! how behaviour changes in drunken state n yew do things yew cant even imagine to even think about !
Suta is Geet's daughter right ?
Now She has Maan as her parent !
Any specific reason behind the unique name ? {would be revealed in coming chapters..😊}
I love the way he reminisced about his native city, a sense of belongingness, a thinking that the place belongs to me was amaxing to read ! Well job Palin 👏 {Thanks...😃}
Thanx for the chapter :)

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

wow, what a brilliant update.

Though I was not expecting a leap but still hopefull to see Geet's POV through glimpses of past.

So Ashok Mehta aka Soki, lived a life of the man he was - moral except for that one moment of weakness which probably made him do a sin he himself is guilty of. Fear he saw in Geet's eyes and the disdain on rano's is rtched on his heavy soul forever. But if he was a monster for Geet, he was sirjee...an epitome of respect and care for Maan. I wonder will Maan have maturity to forgive him and respect the man he knew after knwoing the crime he did which he eventually will find. Will it be instrumental in bringing the closure to woman who probably will be stil haunted by her memories.

So he is going to be a parent...not a gaurdian but parent to "Suta".

I am looking so forward to this story unravelling as I keep on wondering different reactions...all plausible which Maan could have and move this story in different direction.

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: palindrome

I had heard the story from my Dadaji and as a child I thought it highly unfair. I used to question him how a person who committed so many crimes get the same reward as one who walks on the path of good his whole life.

We are children of the same God. Just as children expect the parent to forgive them, so should all humans expect this from God. These were his explanations Palin. Fogiveness indeed is divine.

Do you realize your stories are probably the only ones that take me back each and every time to my past and reconnect me to the values passed onto me? I think on each story I have had this connection with you.

🤗

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Replying to each and everyone is so tiring, how do you guys (Palin and Nisha Di and Avi and Onir and Yummy yum) do that🤢

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

@2 mins: Some of us like to chit chat...😆

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: dqno1
@2 mins: Some of us like to chit chat...😆

LMAO. The kind of thoughts readers come up with, and you being cautious in replying to them so that you won't reveal the story..it is tricky. 😆
I wanted to reply for WOL but watching the brilliant comments I gave up😆

Edited by .Maggie. - 12 years ago

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

LMAO. The kind of thoughts readers come up with, and you being cautious in replying to them so that you won't reveal the story..it is tricky. 😆
I wanted to reply for WOL but watching the brilliant comments I gave up😆

And here I was thinking that you were playing the eccentric author role...😆

Palin, Maggie is teasing me... do you thinkk my comments are OTT?

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago