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Posted: 12 years ago
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teaser
nice...
Maan better ask for forgiveness from Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wah new thread congrats didu
nd teaser aawesome waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo for New Thread 👏
Nice Teaser 😉
ab update bhi de do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 10
RECAP: Geet hold maan hand in her fist tightly as she is watching some bad dream or something else is bothering her.
Maan see her hand which is holding him tightly so he took her more in his embrace to make her feel she is save. Some tears escape from geet eye and maan is now worried for her.
"I think she is in pain" maan thought.
Maan start to crease her hair and kissed her on her forehead to make her feel batter.
Geet starts to took breath in fast pace and her head filled with sweat drops and finally.
"nooo plzz noo" geet screamed and hugged maan tightly.
Her eye is closed in fear ... her rose like Patel lips is shivering badly... her hands wrapped around maan for her dear life... she is just so much scared... and her small body is perfectly fit in maan strong big body.
Maan is in shocked to see geet like this and hugging him like someone just going to hurt her and she wants to hide herself from everyone. After some some second maan also took her in his well muscled arms and console her like she is child.
"It's ok geet you are save here... nobody said you anything" maan said slowly in her ear.
After listening his voice geet hide herself more in his arm and rubbed her face in his clean shaved chest to seek some warmth. She is feeling an unknown protection in maan's arm. When maan see she is nowhere to be calm so maan tease her little to make her light.
"I didn't know... tabby is scary cat also" maan said in teasing way and left a chuckled to feel her sniff instantly after listening his words.
Geet come to her sense and see where she is... o god she is hugging same person who slap her in front of everyone without her any mistake. Geet come out from hug and see maan in his eye directly and her anger shoots up so much to see him here so close to her. Geet thought "how dare he hug me".
Geet pushed maan with her full force and maan is just sitting on the edge of the hospital bed. A little push and maan is stumbled back and hold bed side stool to save himself to be land on the floor directly.
"What was that" maan asked after saving himself.
"How d-da dare ahh" geet tried to shout something but in weakness word is not coming out from her mouth.
"geet what the need here to stress yourself haa don't you lay here silently" maan said and make her lay on bed.
"Where I am" she asked meekly to see herself in someone unknown room.
"Disney land mai" maan said sarcastically.
Geet show her eye to see him teasing her but maan ignored her and dialled veer number to come here to see geet.
"but where I am and why am I feeling so much weakness and above all that what is this mr sadu doing here ohh what is happing here with you tabby ... really if this mr.sadu even touch me again than I will show him my all karate skills" geet thought all this with so much confusion and anger to see maan here.
"Veer come here and check geet she is conscious now" maan said to veer in happiness to see geet back from that dreadful silence.
Maan see geet expecting eye for some answers. Maan understood she is feeling confuse with all events.
"So miss tabby" maan said but cut by geet meek voice.
"Its ms.geet for you from now onward" geet said meekly and adverted her gaze from maan.
"geet" maan said and settle himself on corner of bed and took her small hand in his hand.
But geet turn her face in anger
"I know geet you are angry with me and I have no right to slap you also... I know I did a mistake but believe me I am so worried to see you like that here on hospital bed so silent... geet please don't stress yourself because of me... recover soon... hmm and now veer will come and check you" maan said all this and threat her hair lovely.
"You go from here... and where is my warden who admit me here and why she admit me in personal ward... I can't afford this" geet murmured all this to herself.
"Your warden is now in jail and I am not going to forgive her at any cost and you are in khurana hospital so don't worry about anything" maan said to make her calm but all effect in opposite way.
"Why my warden in jail and why don't you tell at first place this is your hospital" geet said and tried to stand from there.
"What are you doing ... lay on the bed silently" maan said in little loud voice.
"No ... I want to go to my hostel and I don't want to be here in your hospital and on your expense and I will repay you which amount you spent on my treatment" geet said and wear her foot wear to leave from here.
"ahh" geet sat again on bed with a thud her leg is paining like hell and head also.
Maan ran to her side and held her to see if she hurt herself again or not. Maan forcefully laid her on bed and tucked her in quilt and stared her in anger.
"Don't you lie quietly at one place but you are tabby naa so you can play football here also in hospital bed... Dare you put your one finger also from out of bed" maan said all this gritted teeth.
"I want to go from here and don't want your pity" geet said with pout to see maan is scolding her again.
"You are not going anywhere till you are perfectly fine and for your kind your information I purchased your hostel to samajhi" maan said with hand on his waist.
"What why you purchased my hostel... hell with you now I have to leave hostel too" geet said in anger.
"chup bilkul chup!!!! Take rest here we will settle all this after you recovered fully" maan said with so much finality.
Geet also don't have so much energy in herself so she also didn't argue and closed her eye because of weakness but some tears made start to flow from her eye to being helpless and took help and money from this man who slap her insult her... she wants to run away from here but her body is betraying her.
"geet" maan said softly to see her in tears.
But geet took turn and hide her face in pillow and cried more which pained maan to see her like that.
"What happened geet" maan said and took her head on his lap.
"I want *sob* to go from here *sob* and don't want to *sob* take your help let me go please" geet said all this with sob.
"Ok ok listen... you are not taking my ok this is your salary part as per KC policy hmm" maan said all to see directly in her eye.
"But I left you stupid job" geet said with her nose eye.
Maan bend little and said her in her ear "well you can't leave MSK without his will".
Geet filled some shiver in her body to see maan so near to him but she is tabby after all so she signal maan to bend again and said in his ear "well you can't stop tabby without her will".
Maan smiled to see her arrogance and attitude but he knows his way also.
"But dear you are employee in kc till now" maan said with smirked.
"Well I am not as I reigned already I thing you forger go and drink some bornvita for memory" geet also said with same attitude.
But their conversation is disturbed by veer who come there for geet check up and shocked to see his own bro is fighting with a mere girl and girl is lying on his lap casually. He rubbed his eye one or two time not believing on his eye even one bit.
"Are you planning to stand there whole life" maan asked to see veer is stand like statue near gate.
"No — oo - no bro, I am coming just vo" veer tried to form a sentence but poor soul so much scared from his bro.
Maan glared him and he is directly near geet bed and start to check geer nerves. Geet giggled to see a well built doctor is scared to the devil msk so much but "why he is calling him bro".
"So Miss geet how are you feeling now" veer asked softly.
But geet see first maan as she is seeing all first time so much good good doctor and a big hospital room... two nurse is standing there for her... she felt little nervous when veer asked question to her but maan blink his eye to ensure her.
"geet he is my younger brother veer" maan introduce veer to geet.
"Is he also khadous like you" geet asked to maan like this is normal.
Veer eye popped out to listened khadous word for his bro and his bro just standing there and giving glare to geet who just glaring her bro with double intensity.
"After all what is happening here" veer starched his hear in helplessness.
"ahh umm" veer tried to catch both attention who are busy in glaring each other.
"I am fine doctor now I want to leave from here" geet said to veer.
"what you want discharge... not even think to keep your feet on earth till 10 days you are so much weak ok" veer said in little doctor type anger.
"But I don't want to be here specially in khurana hospital" geet said with pout and held her nose high in front of maan.
"Then think this hospital name is something else like patil hospital simple" veer said with chuckled and laugh on his own pj.
"haa haa this is best pj till now" geet said sarcastically.
But maan cut their stupid conversation to see they will start here like Tom and Jerry if he doesn't interfere.
"Don't worry about her... just tell me how is she now?" maan said sternly.
Precap: more fight between maneet...
Disappointed with like 330 to directly 304
And please one word comment is hurt too much... just same word again and again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res ///

EDITED...

Awesome Update Mohita 👏👏
Loved It 😃
Tabby is a sherni 😉
Veer is so Cute 😆
Simply amazing 😛
Edited by Sheen-Coolkiwi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
geet hug maan nd maan hug her back..😛
finally geet ko hosh aya 😃.lolhosh ate hi jagra start 😆.inka kua hoga kuch nahi ho sakhta😕..MSK se pala parah hay tabby abb 😆..i love their fight.😉..lol ye veer shock to see maan like that😆..well veer ye srif starting ahy agay agay dekho tumhare bhai ka guess karlo😉

agar maaneet ki beech aise cute fight chalega them me wanna see their cute romantic fight 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lol..
hehehehehe
comments du kya
mere reaction to pehle hi bata diye meine
hehehehehe
waise i like veer part
poor soul stuck
between two mads..

Edited by rubykatariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update
So finally geet got her conscious
Loved maneet cat fight n veer n geets little convo
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such a lovely maaneet fight...😃😃😃😃😃 veer is seeing his bro dif side...wonderful update yaar..tabby is tabby never change..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb part👏
maaneet fights were cute...bechara veer scratching his head looking at his bro

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