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Posted: 12 years ago
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mona!!! sweety thanks so much for the banner jaan😳
PART 23:


Geet was about to fall when dev who was entering the mansion supported her ... yeh kya kar rahi ho dadima?? Geet ke saath aap aise behave nahi karsakti ... nahi karsakti?? Najaane kiska paap paal rahi hai and to hide that truth she got ready for the marriage with you all out of the blue, mujhe soch lena chahiye tha ganda khoon ganda hi rehta hai woh kabhi paak nahi ban sakta


Dev: bus kijiye aap apni hadh ke aage bol rahi hai jise aap paap keh rahi hai ussi paap mein maan ka bhi haath hai, dadima eyes widened listening to what dev said. She didn't know how to react, all the while geet and maan were ... how could maan do this?? The principles she taught him all went in drain. How brutally he murdered all her dreams, she wanted maan to marry sameera and dev to geet. Were they playing games?? Her head seemed to spin with the acute pain her heart has to face.


Shocked haina dadima?? Yeh paap dono ne hi kiya hai!! yeh bacha maan ka hai aur aapka koi haq nahi hai ki aap kuch bole beech mein. I request you to stay away from this matter, its on maan and geet to decide what will they do to this kid!!


While dev took back geet to her room and made her sleep, kuch chahiye ho toh bol do geet he caressed her hair as unknown tears made way reflecting the pain which geet is in, he could not take more and left the room closing the door. Geet got up staring blankly at the ceiling caressing her tummy, was maan's love not enough to change her feelings towards herself and this child is just making her giving her a bad hope to live not die. No she cant die, no, no, no every wall, every single thing in the room echoed with her pain mirroring it the same way, with the same intensity.


She caressed her tummy wildly, I cant give you life baby I just cant ek na din main mar jaongi phir mere saath tum bhi!! Nahi main tumhe marne nahi de sakti!!


Probably this was the reason her mother did all that to save her!! Till now her mind was like that of a girl, a teenager who always thinks about oneself and now this sudden step into motherhood was giving her a new hope to live. But she cannot change the fact of her life, her death. Geet was in a dilemma probably not now not anymore she thought, nahi maine apni maa ko nahi maara I was wrong. Agar maa ki jagah main hoti toh shayad main bhi wahi karti, apne bache ko bachane main bhi kisi bhi hadh paar kar leti. Khud ko maardongi lekin apne bache ko nahi.


I was never at fault, it was the situations... she cried on the fate which is playing game with her life. Maan was out of station probably in some outskirts of city, he was busy with the work...dev did try to call him tell him but couldn't reach him.


Geet would eat her food well, take enough rest but she cant change the fact of her being ill. Her emotional ups reached the peak while she sat down in the washroom again crying for the life inside her. The emotional high led to the stroke again, she just ran out of the mansion unable to control the extreme want to live ... She didn't know what overtook her, the watchman looked at geet amazed. He remembered the day when she did the same thing and maan had to go behind her. He feared geet might hurt herself this time too.


Just then she stepped on the raised platform on the left side of the road to save herself from the speeding truck that just passed, she got tripped and fell down hitting her stomach to the rock that was placed there. Geet screamed in extreme pain, the rock probably pierced into the skin and then her vision went blurr. She fainted finally, the watchman called dev!!


@HOSPITAL:

I am sorry Mr. dev we couldnt save the baby she had a miscarriage!! Geet who was scared about the life inside her caressed her tummy and was about to come out heard what the doctor just said to dev. She screamed listening to this revelation.


No, aisa nahi ho sakta mera bacha mujhe nahi chod sakta dev it just cannot happen, the stroke overtook her again. She was going insane with the trauma, this child was giving her a faint hope to live and this news out of the blue began to hit her hard somewhere. Geet literally pulled her hair smiling madly, nahi mera bacha mujhe nahi chod sakta saying the same thing again and again. The doctors had to give her an injection and make her sleep.


The next day dev got geet home back along with geet, the whole mansion seemed calm... Dadima and arthi were out on some work he thought. Geet was numb there was no expression since the moment she lost the baby. This seemed to be even more painful, dev thought of calling maan but again he would anyway come home in the evening so he dropped the idea. While he took geet to her room, the hospital papers from his hand slipped which he forgot. He sat beside her until geet slept. What was her fault at the end?? Why god is being so cruel to this girl??


@ NIGHT:

The moment maan arrived dadima called maan to her room, he wondered as to what happened. He immediately went to her, she was sitting on the sofa holding her head. She heard maan's steps, looked at him. He was shocked to see the tears in dadima's eyes... Kya hua dadima?? He caressed her, the tears were killing his insides. Never in life did he expect his dadima to cry this way and then the next set of words made him realize its coz of him.


Dadima: geet aapke bache ki maa banne wali hai maan!! His breath got stuck, what did he hear just then?? Really!! Is he going to be a father??


Aap dono shaadi kar lijiye she continued... please leave me alone for sometime, dadima slept on the bed showing her back to maan. His legs automatically dragged him towards geet's room, he never expected this happiness will come to him so soon. The fact that both maan and dadima were unaware of that the CHILD was no more!!


When the door flung open maan found geet sleeping on the bed like a child. He wondered how can a child be a mother now!! He wanted to hold her in arms, hug her, kiss her for giving this special gift of life. His child, the word itself gave him an unknown sensation, his heart swelled with pride. He walked inside to step on the papers which fell from dev's hand previously.


Maan bent down to look at them, it was written GEET HANDA on it. He opened it slowly to get the shock of life. ABORTION!! Maan just stared at the papers trying to make sure it was not hers, no it cant be he thought. Was it right?? Did he read right??


Precap: A revenge!! A regret!! do i really dont deserve likes?? peej 250 yaar😭

Teaser which I gave peej check out!!

Haan maar diya maine tumhare bache ko!!! maar diya maine!!! Din raat mujhe sone nahi deta tha, khane nahi deta tha!! Pagal kar raha tha mujhe har waqt mujhe maa!! Maa!! Pukaarke, tang aagayi thi main usse. Mere andar kya agaya mujhe jeene ka aas de raha tha issi liye maar diya. Isse pehle woh mujhe maar deta maine usse hi maar diya, I aborted the child did you get that?? And then a tight slap across her cheek.


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
wat was this yaar

a total jatka

nw wat
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
oh no...geet miscariage...now what gonna happen
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely painful update.. te way dev supporting for geet and te way geet ki happiness for her baby was so lovely.. but why destinty playing with her like tis.. te way geet lost her baby and te way dev consoling her and te way geet ki madness was so painful.. without knowing anything my maan cuming to meet his geet and knowing tat she is carrying his baby and his happiness was so painful, now my maan came to know abt her abortion .i love te update dear
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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total u turn..she came 2 know about baby.sooon the baby is no more..nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
superb upd.
loved it fab.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8 update & interesting teaser,cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Geet had a miscarriage! Bt Maan thinks she had an abortion as per teaser! Well written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omggg
first geet preggy n isi update mai miscarriage omg
babaji me😲😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg geet lost the baby 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
precap is scary

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