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Posted: 12 years ago



oye kudi tu kithe se aagayi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_jyothika

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH DADIMAA???AT SUCH A POINT OF TIME ALSO SHE IS SAYING HER "SAMEERA MANTRA"...OH LORD


i hope maan doesnt fall for this Emotional blackmailing...
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aagayi yaar de rahi hoon baba😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


mona!!! sweety thanks so much for the banner jaan😳
PART 24:
read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!


Maan bent down to look at them, it was written GEET HANDA on it. He opened it slowly to get the shock of life. ABORTION!! Maan just stared at the papers trying to make sure it was not hers, no it cant be he thought. Was it right?? Did he read right??


His eyes first looked at the papers and then at geet's sleeping form, his heart didn't believe no she cant abort the child. How can a mother do it?? No mother in this world can do that so easily. He sat beside geet on the bed unable to come out of the shock about the abortion wetting the papers with tears. He loved this woman so much, she is a drug... she has become his life unknowingly and when he got the greatest news she just broke those dreams ruthlessly. Geet opened her eyes feeling something heavy on the bed, their eyes met for god knows how many seconds maan did not had the courage to ask geet about baby but what if she says his baby is... No he turned his face. Geet wanted to hold on to maan tell him about the loss they had, cry out the pain that she was facing, her emotional turmoil heaved up, she couldn't speak making out maan's lost expressions. Breaking her thoughts finally maan had to open his mouth.


What did you do to my child?? He asked with an anger tone keeping his voice low, geet gulped down her saliva muffling the cries that were threatening to come out any moment. She did not had the energy left in body to voice out anything but the time came probably for confrontation what will she tell him?? she killed her own child, no his child with her madness?? Will he believe?? What did you do to my child?? He again repeated unable to take the silence of her but she had to reply him if not today she wont be able to speak to him ever her intuition was strongly hinting she finally gathered herself to answer him, maar diya maine usse apne haathon se she whispered breaking maan's heart into pieces, time stood still around he could not fathom the loss just in a fraction of minutes she had did so much ... how he wished he turned deaf before hearing what his geet just said.


Maan held her arms firmly... Kyun?? Kya galti thi uski?? Why did you kill my child?? Meri jaan maangleti geet toh dedeta how could you kill my...?? Kyun?? Kyun?? He shook her ruggedly, This was the least he could expect from geet. Even his heart couldn't take that forfeiture, how he wished he died thousand times, give his child his life and leave this world. When a father feels so much of emotions running in mind how could a mother be so cold-blooded!! And then again a silence spread, she looked at maan with a pale face which did not melt his heart, he had actually closed his heart listening to what geet said.


Har kyun ka jawaab nahi hota maan!! woh mere andar tha uska main kuch bhi karon meri marzi she said instigating maan further... what?? Baby was only yours?? Main kuch nahi lagta tha uska?? How could you kill my aks geet?? His grip tightened around her arms, she flinched still did not say anything... She deserved it, his wrath, his anger she had to bear today. She couldn't even have twitched, she did the biggest sin she couldn't even keep safe the child. But this time the pain turned into a stroke again, her mental balance completed vanished her eyes turned red with sheer hatred on herserlf. She got up the bed to push maan furiously ... Haan maar diya maine tumhare bache ko!!! maar diya maine!!! Din raat mujhe sone nahi deta tha, khane nahi deta tha!! Pagal kar raha tha mujhe har waqt mujhe maa!! Maa!! Pukaarke, tang aagayi thi main usse. Mere andar kya agaya mujhe jeene ka aas de raha tha issi liye maar diya. Isse pehle woh mujhe maar deta maine usse hi maar diya, I aborted the child did you get that?? And then a tight slap across her cheek, so he was right she did it purposefully. All she wanted was a physical relation, he had taken her to be a b**** for a minute. And manifesting maan right, She looked at maan dangerously, how dare you hit me?? She screamed on top of her voice dare me?? How dare you kill my child?? Tumne socha bhi nahi aisa kuch karne se pehle .... I hate that fetus of yours which resided inside me I hate it she said to receive another slap from maan you called my child a fetus agar kuch chahiye tha toh mujhse maangleti dedeta main bache ke badle mein ... why do you have to kill an innocent life?? how could you kill my... Ahhh he hit the table making his hand into fist, the glass broke and the pieces pierced into his skin but that did not make any difference, the mental pain was beyond the physical pain, he lost his senses completely. He dragged geet down, get out of this house, get out of my life you don't deserve to be here anymore jaha se aayi ho wahi chali jao you are a bloody murderer tum jaisi ladki kabhi bhi maa nahi ban sakti he pushed geet out. Geet just walked not protesting, she wanted to leave anyway. All her hopes to die went even more stronger.


Don't show me your face again he closed the door, and went back to room with the papers in hand regretting all the moments he had spent with her he cursed himself for the lust turned love which had taken away the life of his child. Outside Geet fell down as her head spun with acute pain and then next she lost her consciousness.


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I am sorry Mr. Maan khurana your brother has slipped into coma and I donno kab tak woh normal insaan ban sakte hain!! It will be a pure luck if he comes back to the world soon the doctor said looking at vicky's face who was sleeping deep with coma while sameera cried bitterly and fainted with a fatigue. His accident was a shocker to the whole family while dev was the only person unaware of this news


The doctors had to test a weak sameera and finally state her pregnancy which was no less than a bombard on dadima. She slapped sameera hard on her face as the frustration overtook her, she was still coping up with geet's abortion and here she is pregnant, kiska hai yeh bacha?? Pehle geet ab tu tum dono mein koi sharam, hayaa bacha hai ya nahi?? How could you sameera?? Dadima raised her hand again but maan stopped her getting alert with the surroundings... Yeh vicky ka bacha hai dadima now don't you dare do anything which you did to geet he said spitting fire!!


Mama aapne mujhe maar kyun diya?? Coz I am a fetus?? Geet could see the blood and flesh of the fetus, the ungrown parts of the baby tortured her to no level ... nahi bacha main tumhe nahi maar sakti how can I separate the blood and flesh of mine from myself ill give my life to save you and then she came got up with the anesthesia still working on her little bit... I killed you I am your murderer maan is right mera bacha she hooked up the bed pulling away the needle from the wrist harshly and her blood oozed out dev!! she screamed literally going mad breaking the medicine bottles on the table. Dev came rushing inside to see geet pulling her hair wildly going insane to be precise and hugged her almost lifeless body crying badly while she still wriggled with the energy left in her body... don't touch me you will die too like my mom!! Like my... A lump formed in her throat to say the word baby. It took three nurses to hold geet and make her sit and then a sedative to let her into slumber. Doctor called dev to talk to him personally, Mr. dev this girl has completely gone mad now with the loss of the child how could you be so irresponsible?? She needs to be treated immediately, tum logon ne already bohut late kardiya don't do this anymore I have a lady doctor in my mind just take geet to her I am sure you would able to save her.


Dev thanked him unaware that his next step of taking geet away to some other city for treatment would lead into a fiasco which will haunt maan and geet for a long time.


Precap: same!!


A teaser which I gave

Dadima: maan please sameera se shaadi karlo you have lost your child atleast you would be able to give love to sameera's child please dadima pleaded holding onto maan and cried bitterly.


P.S: will not ask for likes coz from now my updates will go slow as i am busy with my project and studies also my job still if i cross 220 likes atleast will try to update faster do it atleast otherwise ill wrap up this story soon i am serious!!

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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i didn't read the full update as i read ur teaser in fb nd warning
nd katti katti katti katti katti
i won't talk to u
me crying 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭
i m throwing everything which is coming in my hand
i m very very very very very angry on u😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

i didn't read the full update as i read ur teaser in fb nd warning

nd katti katti katti katti katti
i won't talk to u
me crying 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭
i m throwing everything which is coming in my hand
i m very very very very very angry on u😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡



tu fb mein hai?? meko nahi pata sia bola nahi kabhi bhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
no words to say

c an understand their pain

but a sincere request Harika i dont want maan to get married to sameera at any cost.. this is wat i want but ist just a reuest

superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely painful emotional update dear.. me crying, cant see my maaneet like tis.. i hate u god for doing tis to my maaneet.. te way my maan was broken hearing his baby is no more and te way geet shouting and showing her frustration was so painful emotional.. te way my maan pushing geet out and te way she fainted.. without knowing anything, my maan living in hell and geet in hospital and now my maan have to marry sam?.. dev taking geet for treatment?..oh god..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome yet painful
Destiny is going to play something with Maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago

ye kya ho rha hai!!!!!!!!!!!

maaneet got separated, vicky ka accident ho gya, sameera is pregnant with vicky's child, geet ka mental stability ki band baj gyi!!!

& precap me daadi maan ko sameera se shaadi krne ko keh rhi hai

harika dont play with our innocent mind...

inne saare shock ek saath!!!!!!!!!! *THUD* 🤢

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