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Posted: 12 years ago
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UPDATING
Tonite...

Anyone waiting...😉
Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a very good starting...
n yes, its the best work among all of ur stories
ALL D BEST 4 ur future works...
waiting 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dipti_Sam

a very good starting...

n yes, its the best work among all of ur stories
ALL D BEST 4 ur future works...
waiting 4 d nxt part



Nxt part tonite...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A good news Awiting...
Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This OS is Specially For my Didu (umme) as her b'day gift...
Thanxx shalzz for lovely banner

First I would Like to thannkkk All Wo like dis OS 85 likes never expected...me really Blessed yaaroo...Luv ya..Cumin to update...

PART 2

Jasmine and dadi are amazed''After long time Maan n geet laughing whole heartedly after ages..Dadi n Jasmine See eachother n understood each other's unsaid words by eyes

Maan: Aap Dono akho hi akho kya baat kar rahe hi

DJ : Kuch nai

Geet : Maan'Chaliye Office

Jasmine: geet I wanna talk to U NOW...

Geet: Okhiee..

Both goes to room..

Geet : Boliye Didu'Kya baat hai'

Jasmine: Geet'U hiding something from me'

Geet :*stammering* na..nhi..Did..didu..Kuch..bhi..toh..n.nai..*loweing her eyes*

Jasmine : look into my eyes n say

Geet: Didu'u knoe nah abt me

Jasmine : yesshhh..Tats y asking'Bol n even u knoe wat em talking abt

Geet : didu'D First time I saw him un news u know wat was my reaction'when I entered d college the person with wom I collapsed wad maan'When I saw him'I just fell for him..my brain stopped working'I didn't realize that it was d same Ma(a)n wid whom from past 1 year em in love'Den wen he came n sat near me I felt dream cuming true..he is sitting near me..N I share my past with him..Unknown attraction I felt n said

Jasmine : Muje pata hai

Geet *conphused* Jasmine: Main jaan buchkar tere paas nai bethi bcoz I have seen maan was in our class n I wanted ur happinesss n sat somewhere else making him sit beside you'

Geet : par didu'IDK (I dnt know) abt his feelings..wat ifhe rejects me..

Geet open mouth seeing her with shocked but jasmine continued'Pagli'ab jab maan is near you..express ur feeling..before it gets late..

Jasmine : IDK he loves u or not but from his eyes I can say he feels something for u'n if he rejects don't be sad if he is destined to be with you..He will be..

Geet : thik hai didu

Jasmine : acha'now u r going to office with him'Its d right time u confess ur feeling

Geet : yesshh Boss * both giggles n hug..geet kisses her didu *

Meanwhile Maan roaming here n there tensed abt jasmine n geet convo as jasmine called geet with angry eyes'Dadi sees maan n says what's wrong with u

Maan : dadi.jasmine has angrily called geet..so bas for tat

Dadi: 'woaaa Headlines MAAN SINGH KHURANA WORRIED FOR A GIRL'

Maan : Dadi nothing like tat..she is my frend soo..

Dadi : Just frend ya aur kuch

Maan : DADIII

Dadi : chillaye mat'u know very u cant hide anything from me..if u try also ur eyes speak up'now speak up..

Maan : muje nai pata but I guess I am falling for her'I love her Dadi'pata nai kaise PAL ME HI usse be intehaan Pyar ho gaya'

Dadi : Muje koi prob nai hai'Infact I want her as my Bahu..

Maan *amazed with dadi words* ohkie..

Dadi: Wat ok..Did u say her'

Maan : no

Dadi : den wen vil do dis..Go do it'

Maan : par

Dadi : par var kuch nai'Don't worry MSK can do anything

Maan : Okk'ajj I will say her ..Dadi Mein n geet ajj late ghar aayenge so jasmine

Dadi : hum sambal leke..u go..All the best

In other room

Jasmine : Chal chalte hai UR maan n dadi will be waiting

Geet *blushes hearing ur maan * Didu..

Jasmine : oyyee ouee Meri sherni Bkush bhi karti hai'

Geet : chale..

Both descending downwards'MG sees other *eye lock* Pure love..Both see each others refelection..

Geet goes down d stairs n her leg gets twis..she was abt to touch d ground'But humare munda ke hote hue uski geet ko kuch nai ho sakta

Maan: GEETT>..he runs n catch but both falls down..

Maan lying down n geet on him..geet closed her eyes falling'Maan's one hand is on her waist holding her possessively


n other he forwards n take d hairs which was hiding him to c his Geet'By his touch geet slowly opens her eyes n sees his dark chocolaty brown eyes,..An Eyelock * famous maaneet style* Both busy in their own world unknow to 2 pairs of eyes watching them with smile..


Jasmine : ahem ahem..*coughs*

Oth come to their senses..geet gets up n forward her hand maan accepts but makes her fall n gets up now he forwards his hand

Geet *angry glare : Hawww'. U idiot'Ek toh help ko par muje hi gira dia'Grhhh

Maan : geet Sweety darling'don't be angry'we are getting late for office ..lets go

Geet : *angrily * chalo..

Both goes for office'it was about 7pm n KC is closed maan knew ..for geet they were going to office but maan had some other plans'In the car both were silent thinking about their new feeling called LOVE

Suddenly Maan stops

Geet : ktu hua'y did u stop d car dis we reach..

Maan : no..Woh .. I need to make call..just a min n moves out of d car leaving Geet alone..

Maan *calls * yes'Its MSK (pause) is everything ready*pause* we will reach der in 5 mins *pause* yes..check once..i don't need any mistake or else u have to face real maan singh khurana.. *cuts*

Maan Goes Ack n drives n in 5 mins dey reach at maan's decided place..

Geet : Maan Yaha Office kaha hai

Maan : geet office kab ka close ho gaya

Geet : den hum yaha

Maan : sshhh keeps his his finger on her lips'

Maan : aaj main bolunga mishty

Geet : yeh Mishti kun hai???* Angry*

Maan : tum

Geet : par main toh geet hu'

Maan : geet Mishti means sweet n tum who ho'

Geet : * blushes : Maan

Maan forwrdas his hand : may I

Geet also forwards n maan catches her waist posseively n takes her to very special place'.

Geet felt goosebumbs all over her body' Geet was shocked surprised excited all emotions running through seeing the arrangements made there'


Geet : Maan Ye sab'

Maan : sshhh' geet aaj main bolunga or tum sunogi..Ye sab Maine Specially Tumhare liye kia hai..Muje pata tum soch rahi hogi maan ko pal me hi kya hogaya..abhi toh masti kar rahe the n ab serious but geet I don't know Tumnne mujh par kya Jaadu kar dia hai..
Jab se tumhse mila hu pata nai tumhari awaaz har bar sunne ko dil chahta'tum hasti ho toh muje Khushi milti hai..Tumhari har aahat par tumhari har baat tumhari muskaan par mera dil kush hota hai'Yeh ehsaas Kab Mujhpe aayi pata hi nai chala'

Saline mischief in your eyes,
Small insolences,
Laughing in your smile,
Waves of dusk unfurled in your hair,
I will not forget you,
Not untill I cease to breathe,
Not untill I cease to live

You took your hand away,
You turned your shadow face pale,
You never glanced this way
You, I will not forgive
Not untill I cease to breathe
Not untill I cease to live

( credit SRK to translate Jab tak hain Jaan Poem)

Maan Goes on his Knees n holds geet's Hand n says dis


First time when I saw you'

I felt something special for you'

You made me a drooler, observer

Which I was never like that

I didn't realize My feelings for u

But I can say its Something special

D way You indirectly made me smile

It directly Touched My heart

Which I thought I never had

The Word Love is of feeling

Wich long back died in me

I cant easily Trust

But can say Ur My Crush

But Today Realised its more than Crush

Yeah Its an special feeling

My heart started beating

tats only for u ..Only u

Its Love'

Yeahh I love u Geet

I love you..

Ur Mine..Only mine

I love You My Mishti...

( kinda Poem I wrote it On Crush but came as love...everyone as an inspiration to write...My inspiration for Poems Is EZA my angiieee after i read her "a walk to remember")

Geet felt so blessed Hearing Dis words'n said

The time I saw u first

I was mad Over you'

But it was a dream.., not an reality

D dream felt a live streak

Tat made me shouted at my peak

In reality when saw you

Felt I am a day dreamer

D blow given by you

Made me realize u r there

Beside me.., with me.., For me

Though From years I loved u

Never thought of expressing

As I fear tat I lose u

But after your gestures

Your love for me

Made me talk laugh giggle

After wat my past couldn't

I have lost every bit of my senses

When I have a glimpse of u

The smirk lingering in ur perfect M-shaped lips

Naughtiness Roaming around dark chocolaty eyes

Can Kill me Everytime'

I cant stop myself

From you to Say

I LOVE U

I love u Maan'

Yes'Madly Truly Deeply I n love

With my Dhak Dhak

U raise my heartbeats

Ur Moti desires u..

Wants u at every path of her life'at very moment after

Dis Special moment

U r Mine'n am urs'

No one can depart us'

Saying dis geet Hugs maan Tightly'The Most Divine Hug'..


Maan : I love u geet

Geet : I love u too Maan

Maan makes geet face up n moves forwards'.Den Maan Gives a kiss on her forehead


Geet den kisses on Maan's cheek'


Geet : Maan Main Apko tab se pyar karne lagi jab aap business of the year banne the aur aapke photo n name newspaper n tv main aane lage par kabhi socha nai ki muje babaji apne maan se milaayege

Maan : Mishti shayad hum dono ko milane ka mauka dundh rahe the babaji aur aaj tumhare babaji khush honge muje n tume saath dekar' Tum muje bahut pehle se pyar karne lagi par Muje Toh PAL ME HI tumse Pyar ho gaya'.saying dis Maan takes Geet Lips for a Smooth Liplock


Which god knows how many hours was it..Finally maan broke it as both were getting breathless'Geet toh all Sharam se pani pani types ho gayi n hide her self in maan's arms'


Geet in his embrace says I love u Maan'

Maan : I love u too'

Pal me hi jab pyaar hota hai uska ehsaas hi kuch alag hota hai...Unhe khud nai pata tha ki ek din mein dono ek pyara sa bandhan main ho jayega...Maan jiski duniya khud se hoti thi ab uski duniya uski geet ki ek muskurat se chalti hai..Pal me Hi usse Geet se pyara hua...Pal me hi sab kuch hota hai bas uss pal ko sambhal kar rakhna chahiye aur wo pal ka isstemal achai ke liye...

Part 1

Hope u all Loved dis OS ...

I have given this OS for Twitter Competition...Hope u all vil be beside me even there...I ws damn excited toh de dia...


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PS : Font size choti hai...badi ni ho rahi hai...bare with itt puleejjj

DO say how u liked This OS...Dis OS is special to me...

Thankzzz n luv ya...

vanshi

Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
luvly
daadi ka name to badal k cupid rakh dena chaiye...shez too gud at it😉

to tum wo pic is os k liye dhundh rhi thi...nice update dear😊

👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
i loved it ..from the start till the end
the concept n the tile both r soo damn dreamy ..

pal me hi ..

actually loved the whole OS
n ur narration was cherry on top ..
that moti n DD part was damn hilarious ..n the Mahi moments uffizi
i am missing them soo badly ...:(

waise sach mien DADI hu tou aisi ...she didn't questioned him once
n Jasmine ...waoo she supported her soo well

loved it dearo
thnx for sharing

ALL THE VERY BEST 4 ur EXAMS

luv ya
sobia
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
lovely & cute os
thank u
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
That was so lovely confession..
Superb os..

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