If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 100

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Avi and Apa: I feel main do badon ke beech mein baith gayi hoon! 😆

Originally posted by: Susegad

Chalo accha hain, bohot kuch seekha denge tujhe.😆

Originally posted by: had2bu

True 😆

Nisha yeh story aap sun chuki hain in palin's part which I wrote

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

till now I was observing but I have to say Wat do u mean Avi ?😕

Originally posted by: had2bu

Kiran and Raj in untangling the knots in palins life partner
😆 jab we met - true story including the besura singing. 😆

Thank God no maya aunty

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Mariam🤗

First of all, a standing ovation because I absolutely loved this part. Girl, you are nothing short of brilliant.

This, coming from you, is nothing short of a very big compliment! It's almost too good to be true that the writer I'm a fan of is writing such words for me. 😳

There are so many elements here. Where to begin? Okay, let me just start from the start. I'm doing a bullet point list today.

• Anaya and Maan's mother 😊 I have to say this: awww. Such a sweet, fun relationship. Like mother and daughter or long lost friends. Bechara Maan. We always have that one friend our parents seem to like better than us 😆

As a matter of fact, most parents tell their children to behave like their friends because the friends are better-mannered than their own children!😆


• Hmm, does Anaya have a thing for Maan?

Only time can tell! 😉


• Maan's mother's new friend. Dare I hope her to be Geet? I'm not wishing for anything, lest you throw us a curveball. But Momma Khurana has a new friend and Geet has a special friend… (please please please let them know each other! 😃). Ahem… I'm not wishing for anything ;)

Wise decision of not hoping much though I can see that you're having to pull back your heart from hoping. 😆


• I do love the little routine they had going. I could feel all the spark and excitement from Maan's side and how they were slowly becoming more familiar and comfortable with each other. If nothing else, they are certainly building the foundation for a good friendship.
  

Are they really going to be friends when they aren't forced to spend time together? 😃


• Ayush! 😆 Kabab mein haddi. Not sure whether he actually likes Geet or misses Maan. Or is actually just very bored and in need of some variety. I'd like to see where this is going.

Well... Let's just see. 😆


• Like Maan, I felt a little lost when they had no reason to see each other. I do hope that their camaraderie won't evaporate into nothingness after the party.

That's something you'll have to wait for...


• Geet's friend... hmm, no comments, I want to see if there's something more to this or I'm just picking up threads where there aren't any.
  

You gave me something to think of here. 😃


• Oooh the little teasing beginning of the party has me excited 😃 I'm ready, Mari Mari!

The party is giving me a little headache at the moment. Not sure how it's going to come out!

So sorry for the very late reply. Suffice to say, I loved this chapter. Aaand... thap thap thap! ;)

I'm glad, Z! And no apologising! 🤗

Originally posted by: Susegad

Hmm, now I really, really want to hear this story Avi.😉

Originally posted by: had2bu

And I want to hear your Jab we met story...I already told you mine, so you tell me yours...