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Posted: 12 years ago
but updating now... :)
i hope u all will love it :)
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'Repulsive'
Short Story
part 3

Maan my hus...'
'anyway... Yes the house was to clean!'
'everything is to clean for you. You are so messy!'
'exactly!'
'Geet nodes her head in disbelief, and walks up to her cupboard for her side bag where she had her passport. She took her red passport out, and looked over for the purse and the card inside. Than she took her apple laptop, to book the ticket online.
'I am just looking for Internet connection, umm... I will call you back soon as when the ticket is confirmed. I hope it's a decent place. Is it near university?'
'yes very close to the university!'
'near medi campus?'
'yes baba!'
'ok... I will call you back soon!'

Geet cuts her call, leaving the laptop and her passport along with her card on the bed, wondering where is Maan. She wanted to tell him before booking her tickets. She pulled a face as there room was empty, plus she wanted to know where was his wifi connections & password.

Geet pulled a face than walked back, she wondered around for a while when eventually her eyes fell on the Internet connection box.

Geet booked her tickets, non-return one. She wanted to let the family know that she will be leaving, Friday, 6am.

Geet felt extremely bad and uneasy that her marriage first day in this house and she is already planning to leave. Actually it's confirmed that she will be gone by this Friday. So this left her with 3 days in this house.

A servant walked in to call her for breakfast, Geet made her way down.

Breakfast table was full of people, she wondered how this big family lives together? Maan was sitting on the head chair, busy eating, and her chair was just next to him. She silently sat down, with variety of breakfast. She took orange juice than a toast. Her apatite wasn't allowing her to any more. Maan just looked at Geet with surprise and rest of the table.

'I - usually -don't -eat breakfast!' Geet forcefully smiled to answer everyone's questioning face.

'oh...'

'that's bad!' Naintara distracted. 'bhabi-ji!'
Geet felt odd with such responsible name. She is only 21.
Umm...'
'a medical student, and you should know better than us!'
Maan instantly looked up. She was actually smart. 'medical student?' he suppose to whisper, but his whisper was to loud. Everyone looked at him with little surprise.

'debar-ji... That's bad. I thought with the lost night... You probably have exchanged many lost words. But that's clearly not the case!' Naintara pulled her eye brow up in a disbelieving manner, than looked back at Geet and her body to observe any unwanted mark. But simply there were nun. Naintara smiles... 'seems like... Rath ki sath.. bath bhi baki hi...'

Geet looked down in embarrassment, knowing exactly what she was hinting towards. She avoided Maan's eyes, who she can see was on her.

'I am finished!' Maan snaps and walks off. Geet looks at his disappearing figure than at her mother in law, who barely looked bothered about the whole incident. She smiled at Geet and told her to finish her food.

Geet was hesitating to enter her bedroom after the unwanted incident at the dinner table. Was making out or body pleasure this important? She questioned her self. She have grown up seeing her friends adultery since age of 16! It's only her who is 21 and still a Virgin, but she always thought her husband had all the right, which is Maan, than why she was refusing now. What he must be thinking? Why should she care? Curse is still there, she will not have love from her husband, pleasure of body and child, that's what Indian men wants!

For Geet consuming wasn't that important, maybe it's for him, but not for her! And what type of family is this? Geet questioned her self again? Who talks about another couple private life? And she does not even know her to talk so openly about her and her husband's bedroom affair! Omg!

Geet controlled her anger and steeped in, wondering what's up with this people. Mother was nice, and Naintara the cunning devil or cunning Devil the Naintara.

She walked in, Maan was standing with some file... She wondered was he about to consummate there relation! Now! She fearfully looked at him, than down, than up again.

'Maan!' Geet called out. She wanted to confess her thought before he takes her to bed.
'yes...' he dropped his folder, spinning around.
'I know w-hat you probably thinking...' she came straight to the point.
'you do?' Maan confusingly questioned.
'yes! & I don't have any plan to-' Geet lost her words of how to put the word I don't want to have sex with you!
'I think we should start to make our way!'
'start!' Geet widens her eyes... Looking at the bed that laid across the other side. Still covered in fresh red rose smell...
'let's go...'
Geet gulped her saliva with fear building within. Was he about name there relation with shame. Oh it's to bright the sun is still out there... At least at night it's dark.
'now?' Geet questioned again to double check...


'yes... We have to... Than why wait?'

Who said we have to? Geet questioned her self again. She was just about to make her way to the bed when a loud knock froze her foot step. It was no other than Naintara. Maan excused him self out, indicating he will be back to Geet.

'bhabi-ji...' Naintara smiled mischievously. 'how was the night... I mean first night in our house?'

Devil Naintara... Geet mumbled. 'it was alright!' she smiled with a loud answer.

'good! I have a gift for you!' she took out a wrapped around box, reasonably big. Geet smiled and accepted.
'open!' naintara insistes.

Geet looked at the red rapper, and slowly opened the pack, but soon as she saw the package of the product her eyes flew open. In embarrassment her face became red and her leg started to shake. She couldn't even look up to her eyes...

'condom hi...' nt smiled...





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Edited by FireSafireFiree - 12 years ago
Dilsay thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one ...Iliked the condom part lol...
Me posting my comment in both here at IF and in blog ...what else do you want ...
I desperately want to know what is coming next ...😉😳☺️
plz update soon...
Dilsay thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muski you are on line... how are the cuties ...
any plan to update 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome awesome

Loving it
Wat is maan planning umm wondering
FireSafireFiree thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Nice one ...Iliked the condom part lol...

Me posting my comment in both here at IF and in blog ...what else do you want ...
I desperately want to know what is coming next ...😉😳☺️
plz update soon...



i just reread to.. lol.. i am like omg .. when did i write this part😆
i couldn't stop laughing...
now i wonder.. why would u give a stranger pack of condom... hmm
lol😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay


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Muski you are on line... how are the cuties ...
any plan to update 😉


Kaya updating how can I miss it
Me here reading hi hi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Awesome awesome

Loving it
Wat is maan planning umm wondering



next update😉
which is soon😉


thank you for reading... and my umma to u and the babies :D😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp


Kaya updating how can I miss it
Me here reading hi hi




😃

i feel shy😳


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Posted: 12 years ago

Better make us shy shy
With ur update 😉
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