Roothe Piya-Manaoo Kaise # 4 Thread 5 link pg 150

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

this update was so good.Loved Maaneet convos.The first scene when Maan got lost in wet Geet was lovely.

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

the first word that made it's way through my gaping mouth while i was in process of gorging on your wonderful update was WOW!

It's awesomely amazing
and the way each of the lines described the situation was simply brilliant!

now i would say i had some real fun reading about the naughty geet tormenting our maan with her devilish tactics!😉
it was real long and
superb, superb,superb!
i loved it!
read and re read again and planning on reading it again and again and again!

maan is trying to keep his emotions in check but all i can say over here is "may god give him power"😆
afterall it's mrs khurana he is dealing with and when it comes to being stubborn she surely wins the race😉
great job geet! keep it up!😆
i would like to see some more of the naughtiness!

waiting eagerly for the next part
continue soon dear
apologies for commenting in late

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

geet trying in so many ways to pacify maan... and he is still doubting her... actually defending his feelings . hope to see maan melt more... loved the anklets scene...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

awesome update

geet trying all ways to pacify maan but ye toh kuch zyada hi bhaav kha rha hai

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

MAAN KEEPS GETTING LOST IN HER

IT WILL NOT BE LONG BEFORE HE SUCCUMBS TO HER TEMPTATION

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

hayyy... loving their awkwardness ...

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Shalve

@Shalve

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

WOW...awesome update...

naughty geet😈

aab maan kya karega bechara😆

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393794

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

wow

loved it the towel scene was so nice and I loved the dialogues as well but the best part is that its will be very interesting to c how maan would loose his control ;)

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

loved it...even though he was hurt, really hope maan gives their relationship a chance...waiting to see how maan will miss geet's naughtiness and shararathe

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Geet trying woo n seduce him.
Maan looking at her wearing just
The robe. Nice idea Geet. Maan
Loosing his control. He can't deny
The effect she has on him.

Glaring session at d table.
Geet getting hopes high.
Using another trick of ankle.

Continue soon.