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YEH GALAT HAI 😭YEH GALAT HAI 😭YEH GALAT HAI 😭YEH GALAT HAI 😭
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Kiddo.. bas yr.. let me post dear 😆😛
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

ok payal i have to go now yar,bye...

ME TOO HAVE TO RUSH BACK YAAR HAVE TO STUDY AS MY EXAMS R NEARING JUST WANT TO READ IT BEFORE I GO BACK TO MY BOOK BUT SHE IS NOT UPDATING 😭I THINK I HAVE TO GO WITHOUT READING AN UPDATE 😭
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Kiddo.. bas yr.. let me post dear 😆😛

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Originally posted by: kkiddoopms

ME TOO HAVE TO RUSH BACK YAAR HAVE TO STUDY AS MY EXAMS R NEARING JUST WANT TO READ IT BEFORE I GO BACK TO MY BOOK BUT SHE IS NOT UPDATING 😭I THINK I HAVE TO GO WITHOUT READING AN UPDATE 😭

mujhay bhi aisa hi lag raha hai..kal read kerna paday ga
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Me waiting...

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Originally posted by: sona-rai

mujhay bhi aisa hi lag raha hai..kal read kerna paday ga

nahi now she is blaming me saying me to stop as if i am not letting her post the update 😡
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Part 14


Maan hugged her back, without giving a think. It gave him relaxation, a peace seeing her stopping her cry. But, did it heal the bruise of his heart too, he was not sure. He knew, indeed, was very confident that he started to love her but her said words, broke his thoughts in pieces. She confessed her feeling, her love just few minutes back yet, his heart.. why it didn't jump in joy!!.. " Just because she had no any other possibility, she had not any place to go she wanted to live with me?? Is she forced to love me because of all this marriage things which, she doesn't think, it happened? Ohh Everything is just so complicated.. so intricate.''



"Oh Geet!! why did you shatter the entire belief of mine , which I had been started to live in!! The belief which changed my life within two days!! Belief for which I hide things from Dadima who is my everything yet, I gave that place to you.. And you said this place is just mock!! No!! .. A relation for which I forgot my whole existence.. You said it never had happened!! And when everything had been destroyed you confessed that you love me!! .. Why it had to happen'



'' The chain of mental thinking broke when Geet, moved back from hug..



Everything was calm, quiet. The inner turmoil Geet was feeling had been vanished. Likewise a huge storm had passed away from there leaving a silence behind. Geet was happy. She could not believe what she said! How!.. She said she loves him ! Babaji!! "She lifted her eyes up, to see him. She was shying. As she had expected to be exhibited by him, she found nothing. She shocked.. In reflex moved back. It was not a silence of ambiance.. it was not quietness of surrounds but, she witnessed ruined hopes of deserving life.. The dark brandish inside his bright eyes. She could not understand why!.. She could not stare him for long, lowered her lashes. The air of room felt dense, thick of both.



"Geet! " Finally Maan spoke'



She gave her attention..



"I have an important meeting. I have to go. If you want can stay here then we'll go home together'' Geet nodded. Maan called Madhva and said him to open door. Madhva sensed heaviness in his voice. He opened the lock. Maan did not say a word just left from there, leaving a confused man in back.



"Is everything okay Beta?'' He asked Geet on which, she just smiled "Everything will be okay uncle '' She was confident. Madhva smiled, blessed her and left..



Maan was in his cabin. He had lied to her about meeting but he, wanted sometime for him, to think on all circumstance rounded together them. He wanted to explain the reason of his own feelings to himself. He remembered a word of Dadima when she said " Jab koi baat tumhe pareshaan kare.. to apne mann ko tatolo ki konsi baat tumhe pareshaan kar rahi hai'' .. He started to remember everything. The day she entered in his life. The moment he found her near his heart. The moment she was lost and the moment, he opened up his feelings to her.. everything started unnamed and then a phase came when he liked to have her in his life.. he own wanted her to accept him but when she did.. Everything became mist.. The base he was stood on, had been snatched savagely from the below. But now, when he knew she loved him, he couldn't make her unhopeful.. He dint even want to. He will give her another chance..He cant leave her alone..not anymore" The decision he took to keep her near always just for her sake. He stood up, went to Geet, who was lost in her own relevant thoughts..



"Geet! '' He spoke, gained her attention, with hopeful eyes.



"Geet I.. "



"Maan pahle mai aapse kuch kahna chahti hu'' She dint give him any chance to speak.



"Geet tum.. "



"Nahi Maan please.. Please let me speak this time. I want to tell everything.. Everything which happened in Mansion.. Why Dadi said that. Maan that day when in hotel ' " She told everything. Maan listened her quietly. He was surprised, shocked.. Astonished. How a simple thing turned into major complication.



"Maan I know my words broke you. Per mai kya karu. .it was true.. It's true that what happened between us I can't give it a name of marriage. No...it was not. I know what you felt for me was just a sympathy.. a condolence for my condition. You brought me here just because if you hadn't, Veerji would have killed me and you, didn't want this to happen. You did everything just because of humanity Maan but when the day I saw tenderness in your eyes for me, the day I saw that you were worried for me, I surrendered my every single feeling for you, before you Maan. Today, when I said we have no relation I know it pained you most but I can't want our relation to be stood on the fake base. .I want a strong ground for my dream castle Maan not a cloud, which would move every second with blow of a slightest wind even. But never think that anything forced me to accept my feeling for you but it's me only who has decided it. Maan anybody can dominate on my body only but not on my own heart until I won't give this permission to rule over it. And today I give this right to you, only you Maan but without any surmise as I want you to make your decision without any burden of compassion. "



Maan was stunned, profound knowing the hidden enigma of her heart. He had decided to give her chance because he did not want her to be alone.. "Was is just sympathy as she named it or really I want to give her love back!!'' he couldn't pointed out but now, when he heard her every single secret his heart started beating fast which had been slepping, before. His face did not show any expression but inner ward, he was happy.. Not only happy but relishing the moments he was having. He was stood there statue only could see that she was staring him with such expectation but his mouth felt weak enough to utter a word in reply..



"I know how I reacted was not right but I couldn't control and everything was just so complicated I just lost m '"



"Shh" her words stuck in throat feeling his warm finger on her lips.. she shivered from the core.



"Not more Geet..no. Don't say anything now, you don't need too. I know everything had become so difficult that we both could not think on straight way. It was not you nor me but the circumstance which made us like this,, situation like this complicated but now, when we both know what the reality is then I want to give whatever bond we have, make it stronger than any knot..



Geet stared him with such eyes, could drop a loveable drops anytime soon, hearing the love utterance from him. The words, which would heal the every wound of two hearts , was being waiting to grab by the one rapid running innocent heart..



" And this time, our family will be there with us to bless us Geet. I will talk to Dadi, Today !'' He closed his eyes to give authority of his words. She smiled with completeness.. She nodded to accept the submission he gave with his impassioned words. They accept gladly the beginning of new start in their life...


Precap : Shy Shy Geet ... Smiley smiley Maan 😳


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