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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh.! Ur cruel Harika.! Cliffhanger par chod ke chali gayi...😆

I'm damn exited to know what geet's Haan means 😳 though I think I know what she means...

Please update soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
TEASER:

HAAN!!! Pyar hogaya mujhe aapse ussi raat ko jab aapne mujhe pehli baar chua tha. I loved every single night I spent with you!! I loved every touch of yours which had always showed your need, your desire but for me it was my love that I gave in!! Why did you come back now?? Yeh jaanne ki aapki bistar se uthke aur kiske bistar par chali gayi??


*SLAP*


Waise I have revealed the haan ka truth now guess who had slapped geet?? taani ji this is for you ji lub u 😳 very disappointed with my likes I need few more

PART 20

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk U ji... Geet k han k truth batane k liyeee... Wase mjhe pata tha phele se...😛N slap maan ne hi mara hoga geet ko.. Geet k dailoge suune k baad...😭😭
Edited by zaidi98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ouch
She did confess it it but added some nonsense too 😭
Msk lost it I guess..

Thanks for the teaser...update soon🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oomg i gues maan slap geet:(
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Posted: 12 years ago
you have given teaser, when you will give update dear
waiting please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
aawesum teaser...waiting eagerly fr the updt...continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved ur ff dear
Continue soon hope geet maan ke pass wapas aa jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART 21:


HAAN!!! Pyar hogaya mujhe aapse ussi raat ko jab aapne mujhe pehli baar chua tha. I loved every single night I spent with you!! He smiled listening to her confession, this was what he wanted to know this was what he wanted geet to say but when his happiness short lived when continued further... I loved every touch of yours which had always showed your need, your desire but for me it was my love that I gave in!! Why did you come back now?? Yeh jaanne ki aapki bistar se uthke aur kiske bistar par chali gayi?? Those words were a shock to him, he didn't know when his hand rose automatically to *SLAP* her!! Maan harshly grabbed her... holding by her arms


Maanta hoon for me it was a desire and you still feel I only desire you geet?? His eyes depicted so much of pain and hurt, she closed her hazels unable to meet raise them, he shook her not getting the answer... jawab do geet you still feel I desire you?? I agree it was my mistake...maine yeh janne ki koshish nahi ki what made to you to ... his lips didn't move unable to word her helplessness and he used it for his satisfaction. He feared her for the first time, even though he could ask her past life he didn't want to coz he accepted her being, he had accepted her past life too and that did not bother him, he just got carried away into his thoughts while Geet stared at him understanding his problem, be it another situation she would have taken him into his arms and submitted herself like every time she did but now its needed to break his heart. She had to choose maan or maa!! She didn't want go back to maan leaving her mother neither could she leave him... but right now her mother needs her more than anything that's the only thing she could think off. What an irony even the child inside her didn't come to her mind that the child needs its father too!! She made a stubborn face as if his pain didn't affect her she only made a strong face to retort back... its difficult to speak out haina maan?? Aapko bolne mein itni takleef ho rahi hai toh I faced it all mujhe kaisa laga hoga?? After that question she had lost it, she didn't want to continue, she feared her mother might come and get to know about everything, I ... Please yaha se chale jaye agar meri mama ne aaapko dekh liya toh... toh??


Geet's heart almost stopped listening to the voice that came from behind, maan's grip around her loosened looking at the person coming towards them in slow steps. For geet it was something she never expected, no her mother cant know this dark phase of her life. She would probably die before accepting such truth of her daughter, in no time maan left her and she quickly gathered herself from the shock and smiled at her mother... mama aap soyi nahi? Geet gulped hard and walked towards her mother hoping that she did not listen but least did she know, mother heard every single thing!!


HOSPITAL:

Mr. khurana she has lost her mental balance completely and its high time that we join her in the asylum, but don't worry she will be fine!! Doctor said while geet ran outside the room and sunk on the floor crying, breaking down for the condition of her mother... yeh kya kar diya maine babajii?? Apni maa ki aisi halat banadiya maine?? And then she was picked up by someone protectively into the arms, his heart cried seeing geet that way.


Congratulations Mr. Khurana geet is two weeks pregnant and both are safe bus geet ka khayaal kahiye she seems so weak, probably it was only maan listening to the good news of his life what is there to rejoice now?? She already knows it!! She lifelessly sat on the bed and heard her mother scream out. Unable to stop herself geet ran out to check her mother for once but she didn't recognize her!! Her daughter!!


A WEEK LATER,


She found her mother sitting with few other friends in the open park of the hospital, maan had admitted rano in the best hospital of the town and was given the best treatment. Even though geet and maan moved together back again their togetherness was nothing but just a talk in the morning and evening. Geet would only stay in the hospital, not for once did they speak about the baby but maan always made sure that she had her diet properly. She gave her mother the food she got, rano blinked her eyes and clapped her hands looking at the parathas in the box shouting thank you to her. Geet couldn't hold herself finding her mother so engrossed in eating not recognizing her daughter. She ran into the car to find maan in the back seat, his eyes reflected her pain. Geet did not expect him to come, he did just for her leaving his work. Geet joined him and kissed his face madly, I am sorry maan maaf kardo mujhe apni dukh mein I forgot you lekin aap mere liye yaha tak aagaye I am sorry she said in between the hiccups which came out


Jaan your mom is fine bus kuch aur din she will be fine completely phir hum unko ghar lejayenge I spoke to the doctor. It will take time, you need to be strong right now if not for yourself atleast for our child.


Life was indeed a thorny path for maaneet, geet still used to keep herself busy with her mother while maan just supported her. It was maan's birthday and geet recollected it the night, She felt so guilty for being ignorant, that's when she realized she is not at all bothering him. She thought about everything, since a long time they did not even speak out their hearts, did not share anything ... she was snatching happiness of a father from maan. As those flashes of maan caressing her tummy came back that too when she was sleeping, tears got welled up. His demanding side was something she was missing these days, the warmth which she used to get from him made her crave for him even more.


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He threw the overcoat aimlessly in the room and thumped on the bed, next was he felt a hand running on his scalp. Maan smiled and held the hand taking it to be an illusion, as these moments he missed since long. When he kissed her palm, he opened his eyes to find geet staring at him with all love. Geet shifted his head onto her lap and caressed his face with millions of feelings running in her heart ... sorry maan I forgot about your birthday!! Mujhe maaf kardijiye saying this geet held both her ears.


Both of them just got lost in each other arms like every time, reliving, recollecting their togetherness, their passion... maan ab aap fresh ho jayiye she pushed him and shoved his clothes... and be back in 10 mins ill wait for you geet got up missing the smile that spread on his cheeks. He tugged her back holding her pallo, her heart raced knowing actually when maan does such antiques. She blushed hard and pulled it back ... dadima aur main neeche rahenge aap aajayiye she replied and left.


He found the cake in the hall and the huge mansion being decorated beautifully. That was the reason the lights were off, maan looked at the two ladies who were sitting with the cake waiting for him. How much he missed to see both so happy together.


He blew the candles and fed the cake first to dadima, and then to geet. Dadima looked at the couple who went into the room looking at each other lovingly not even bothering her presence. She smiled and left as they made way towards the bedroom. Geet understood his eyes which were dark with passion. How will she not make out, she was facing the same still she wanted to voice that out what if maan stops himself!! Off late maan has been doing the same and she feared the same, gathering her courage she stared at him to command him...... love me maan!!


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago

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