Wo pehla ehsaas... Part 4/ pg 61

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Aowiieee, just cant describe how beautifully the entire was brought up of an arranged marriage.
Haayee, cutey maneet. Loved them both to the core. 😳
Hope this Love after arrange marriage proves as beautifull for both of them.
Maan's background setup about him living in an appartment like a normal human being was the highlight for me. Something extremely new. 👏
Oh ho abb bechara Maan kya karega, 😆 Fisrt day izzat ki dhajjiya 🤣
Hope he saves himself from the embarrassement
Continue soonnn 😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

hi dear...congrats on the new FF/SS! All da best! Lovely prologue n cs! Pt 1 was superb! Wonderfully written! arranged marriage! Maan thinking if Geet will adjust to a life without so many luxurious as altho he is rich he lives simple! Geet cribbing n Maan smiles at her gestures! Maan worried war he reaction will b! update soon

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

It's a wonderful start not idiotic at all so don't worry!

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Smily

@angel_smily

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

amazing concept

superb start

thanks for the pm

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nostalgicmoon

@nostalgicmoon

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Frm d starting Its nice jaldi update karo

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Awesome concept..
Love u Moni dear for such a cccuuuttteee starting...
Hhhaayyyeee...Maaneet newly married.. 😳
Both r ssooo ccuutteee..
Eagerly waiting for the nxt sweety.. 😊