MG OS COTW Wk 11 OS1 pg 119 Thread #2 link pg1/119 - Page 51

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devil_muse

aap bhi write karo na 😃

hum sab padenge 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
trying to think some story...does anyone have anyidea???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

eee uuu aaa!! aiii waaa uuu weee.
In Lucky's language, please write, coz I want to read.😆

really what can i write???? 😆 it won't have sense 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
am giving it a try
i wonder if it'll be containing 50 Words 🤣
well i dunno what aiiieeewiii to use, so just using vowels
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Posted: 12 years ago
bfff i wrote 5 lines and i got stuck
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Posted: 12 years ago

milke😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

bfff i wrote 5 lines and i got stuck


waiting give us ur work soon👍🏼
Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ey hi lovelies😊 you ppl nt ready to give me a os.So here am to torture you with my so called writing skills.i was tooo desperate to read a os on lucky so i wrote one myself...😃 you ppl didnt give me one so go thru my torture🤣🤣🤣
All kind of chappals ,rotten eggs,n tomatoes are welcome.🤢🤢🤢 So here you go get ready with something to beat me up👏Lucky's accent i hav tried to give my best😕


😳😳MISSION MAKING MAAN MY HUSBAND😳😳

Arghhh!!!!! Can anyone say he is a human???No ways.No one will dare to say..He is such a robot..How could someone not see his oh so sexy secretary.👏

Hold on I must not say that myself.ok not so sexy but atleast cute,beautiful secretary.?

Have to take him to a eye specialist.I have been my head over heels since Daddima has showed his photo to me as my groom.but this idiot duffer dushtdhanav is not even ready to look my photo.
Its all because of my stupid brain am here has his secretary.and getting blasted up everyday.See my fate I should have been sitting in my room demanding my mom for some hot snacks to match my fav dailysoaps.

Atleast let me call Daadima decide Geet.

(Geet belonged to one of the richest family and she is the only princess of her house.When Daadima met her in a charity show she came to a conclusion that she is the ne for Maan .The rishta has been decided once the Handa's accepted proposal from Daadi.By that time Daadi had brokrn the truth of Maan not accepting to get married and not even saw geet's photo once even after Daadi pleading him.But daadi consoled them saying she will blackmail him somehow bcos she has the hope on geet to make her grandson a human from machine state.
Handa's were little reluctant but accepete when geet was on her one leg to get married to her Ziddi MSK.Thus she formulated a mission"Making MAAN her husband".As per the idea she joined KC with the help of daadi as Maan's secretary..)

"Daadi its geet here".

Bolo beta.How are you and your mission making "" Maan my husband?"" asked Daadi with a chuckle.

"Urgh Daadi you are also teasing me.I never belived when you and My family said about your pota THE MSK.I never thought he is the new avatar of LORD ANCHANAYAA .He is such a dusht dhanav not even glancing me once.Why cant you convince your pota in marrying me?"

"See who is talking that? I said him to emotionally blackmail him but you only said your life partner should love you with all his heart and get married to you and not because of some emotional blackmail."

"Yes daadi I do remember but never thought your pota could be this kadoos.I could feel he is having some feelings for me but that dumdhead is not letting it out.After all who could resist the charm of GEET HANDA.Not even my Dusht dhanav"

Ha ha beta remember your giving names for your would be husband.
Ya ya as if he is ready to marry me tomorrow.He is not even budging a little.Nt even looking in my eyes.How could me this much bubbly cute sweety girl can fall for your dumbo pota..Its all my fault in doing background research after smitten by his looks made me stand here.Argh I never ever in my dreams thought I would be head over heels for anyone and who would believe that going to marry this machine"🤣

Daadima really loved Geet for her outspoken attitude so never bothered when she called her grandson with names.
Suddenly Geet heard a cold voice.

"Geet what are you doing here.I don't pay you to talk unnecessarily to some one over the phone." Maan who was all the while standing in the doorstep of her office room screamed at her.

"Aeyloo Agayi apkoo hiltler pota.He is going to take my brains out.See you soon Daadimaa.Love you.Muahh Bye"

Maan who came to Geet's room to give her a ear full for keeping her phone busy was all mesmerized by her animated talks but suddenly he got anger seeing her talking with someone so dreamily.To bring her out of LALA land he screamed at her.

He was seething in anger when he saw her blowing up a kiss in phone.To say the truth he was completely bowled by her beauty when he saw her for the first time in office but after all he is MSk .He was never born to get into the trap of love.So it was his way to scream at her secretary to keep her away from him.

But poor he the minute she step out of his sight he would terribly miss her.He will have some random reason to get into her room and sneak her secretly.To give his ego a blow he went even crazy about her seeing her cute naughty antics of chewing the pen,cribbing to her babaji,furrowing her brows in concentration.

He came out of his thinking hearing a snapping sound from his front.He looked upto see Geet standing ryt in front of him with her killer sexy looks.

Maan keep a grip on yourself.Your here t blast her for talking with someone on phone during office hours not to drool over her.

"I asked you some question and you never gave me a answer back"

"Maan sir it was not a question it was a statement."

"Now ask what question do you have?"

"With whom were you talking in the phone?"

Geet chirpily added "your Daadima"

"Kya?How do you know my daadi?"

Argh geet don't blabber on seeing your dream man. "Wo what I was saying it sarcastically.What job I have with your daadi?"

"Then who was it?"

"Wo in the phone uh wow o?"

"Geet….."

"yar I was speaking to my boy friend" without knowing what to say she said those words.

"What ?do you have boy friend?" he was shocked to the core.He never expected this.

"why?Should not I have one?" chirpily answered him sensing his insecurity in his eyes and smelling someone burning out of"J"

"oh no nothing" with that said he was to retire to his room.

"Par sir you came here to ask me something ryt?"

He totally forgot the reason of coming to her room.he dono what to answer her.He was confused beyond limits."Nothing serious Geet."

"Sir shall I get you coffee"

"Ya get me after sometime" came a ice cold reply from him.
As soon as h went away Geet felt bad for lying him but was happy seeing he is jealous .She decided how to get succeded in her mission "making Maan my husband"

Then she called up Daadima and explained her whole plan.Daadi was happy feeling that her Maan has feelings for Geet.

"Par Geet who will be your boy friend."

"If maan asks about him we can decide it Daadima.Until then why to bother about it"

"Congrats Geet Keep going on in your mission"🤣

Sighing happily Geet enterd Maan's cabin with his coffee .He was ready to pounce the poor prey who entered his den but seeing it to be Geet he kept quiet.

"Sir your coffee.Anything else needed."

"Mehra accounts file"

"I'll get it sir."

"What is he doing?"

"Sir, wo as far as I KnowMr.mehra owns a steel industry sir."

Maan was angry to the core."I was asking about your so called boy friend Geet.And why the hell he needs to call your office phone.And don't you have anyshame.Chi chi kissing someone in the phone."
Geet was on cloud nine to see him super duper JEALOUS.She controlled her smirk and answered him with the same attitude of his "Sir mind your language he is not some one he is my boy friend and as far as kissing him in the phone I would not do that if he is in front of my eyes.She said with a little smirk. He is taking care of his father's business.And its my mistake that he called in the office phone because I was angry on him and not attending his calls so to convince me he called up landline.He is such a cutey handsome guy who goes any level to convince him. You know he even said that he is going to take me to a date tomorrow full day.How sweeyt na?.Wo sorry sir I was speaking out of necessary thimgs to you.I just carried way when I talk about him.I'll get you the file sir."

With that said she excitd his room and watched him through the blinds of her office room.She confirmed by the restlessness he have that he is madly in love with her.She mentally hi fived herself thinking that she is indeed a good actor.

Maan called Geet and said her that she has to come to work tomorrow even though its being a Sunday.Geet screamed over Phone saying he is inhuman and muttered all curse even after he knowing she goes for a date calls him for office.At last with the defeat he hung his phone.
Argh Maan atleast express your feelings now other wise she will never be yours.What can I do ?When I see her words are not coming out of my mouth..Ok tomorrow stalk her and see who the **** is her boyfriend and make her dump him.Ya good Maan ..You are too good in planning.
Maan called Adi and asked him to postpond all of his tomorrow meetings to other day and informed he will not be coming to office tomorrow.Geet came to know his plan from Daadi as Adi is the official detective of daadi after Geet made her way into the office.

So they both now planned on geeting Geet's boyfriend.

Daadi was scared hering her scream in the phone.

Daadi give me a HI Fi.I found a poor soul who is gonna see the wrath of my hubby tomorrow.Aww Poor lucky.

And she explained daadi "actually daadi he is a mute person and in love with one of my friend Daisy.This guy was caught red handed by me in my college scam trying to leake out the que papers.I personally know him and vice versa.I have him in my hands bcos he doesn't want Daisy to know about his misdeed.So I can use that Poor soul as my boy friend.

"She was laughing over her plan and Daadi was worried for that Lucky.
The next thing she did was to reach Lucky's house.

He was like"eee uuu " .

She explained him her plan and after this help she will never cross his love life.

He was scared to even look her devilish smile.He know some how he got into the hands of this devil.But to save his love he accepted even after knowing all the consequences bcos she was ready to call up daisy if he is not going to accept.

NEXT DAY:

It was the torturous day for Maan.He got up early n the morning and was waiting at a little away from Geet's house.Geet saw this from her window and informed the present state to her partner in mission:Daadima.

She next called Lucky who was on the verge of breaking down after knowing fully about MSK.

As planned lucky reached Geet's home in a brand new car and horned.Geet came down from her house and hugged him.He was scared to retaliate back when she asked him to do so.

He was lik "nu nu nu nu nu u " shaking his head.

Geet said in lucky's ear Daisy and that all made him to hug back.
Maan was burning to see his Geet hugging some random guy .wait did he say His Geet. 😳Of course she is his only his. He will make her his today.He followed them to wherever they were going.
They had gone to window shopping.Geet made sure to make lucky hold her waist that angered maan more.Geet was looking at a ring in a jewellery shop and noted in mind to Maan get her once she gets his love.Then Lucky and Geet headed to a caf .

Maan followed him even there.He saw the anger seething in Maan's eyes which is noe hidden behind newspaper..

Lucky was pleading him by his so called speech.."aeee luuu nuuu baeee"

But geet didn't lend her ears at all.She was clear to make Maan propose her tdy and she made all the plans for it.

Atlast as a part of her plan they reached what looked like a party hall.It was decorated as if a party is going to be held there.As soon as they entered there Maan started to swerat at whats going to happen.He dono what came In to him when he saw Lucky taking Geet and leaning on his knee.

He just ran to them and got hold of lucky's shirt.He was scared to death.

"Sir aap yahan.??What are you doing?"

"Tu chup bilkul chup"

Am not gonna make this fellow propose my girl.See he is so sick holding ur waist in public.He is not in love with you geet.How dare he touch my geet?He is just flirting with yu.With that Maan was about to thrash him when Lucky started pkleading "ohhh ooo aeee luuu nuuu eee"

Geet was doing bhangra mentally .Lucky was horrified with the thought of what to come.To lucky's rescue came Geet;'s parents and Daadima.

"What did you say beta your geet?What does it mean.You have fallen for my Bahu??"⭐️

Maan was startled by daadi's voice and turned to get a shock of his life to see Geet hugging Daadi and screaming in joy "ooo MISSION SUCCESFULL"😃😃

Then Daadi explained everything to confused Maan.Poor lucky ran from there in the time gap to save his life.
Maan just pulled Geet ears and said"your are going to pay for this after wedding"

"Wedding but u didn't propose me yet."😡

Geet was shocked😲 to see Maan going on his knee and gave her the ring which she adorned in jewel shop with his words of '"I LOVE YOU GEET..Enlighten my day with your happiness"😳😳

Geet gave him a shock by capturing his lips in a soul steering kiss…

NOTE:
Do ignore grammar and spelling mistakes bcos am borne to do that😳😳 Leave ur likes⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey very cute and lovely OS...

if u write anything more then pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

bfff i wrote 5 lines and i got stuck



write soon...eager to read...

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