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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Mujhe laga hi...bohot time lagega...

No prob...kal office me padh loongi 😉

ha abhi tak sirf 200 hi hai...😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -JEEVANA-

ha abhi tak sirf 200 hi hai...😔

Vapis a, b, c, d...200 times likh de...LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
ho gaye kya 200 words type karke...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have read your work

and found something wrong with it

but I am not able to frame out what???

something is missing

you will not believe I have read it 4 times just to find what is missing

I am sure something is not in place

so I will have to wait for 1-2 updates to be sure that I am right

I will review it once I know for sure

the story line is nice, a bit different

you are telling about a girl's POV about life... how a girl feels
how she is perfect but not sure

how she is cool but confused

this Geet you have portrayed is very much like all girls

But I miss Maan's part in here

something tells me that Maan will not be able to do what he wants

he to will end up hurting her
as she is always hurt in the end

don't be hurt dearest

I told you i am a very serious critic

if you want I will delete this post

happy writing... the concept is really very very good
I don't usually read stories when they don't click me

but this one I have read 4 times

Shruti
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti

I have read your work

and found something wrong with it

but I am not able to frame out what???

something is missing

you will not believe I have read it 4 times just to find what is missing

I am sure something is not in place

so I will have to wait for 1-2 updates to be sure that I am right

I will review it once I know for sure

the story line is nice, a bit different

you are telling about a girl's POV about life... how a girl feels
how she is perfect but not sure

how she is cool but confused

this Geet you have portrayed is very much like all girls

But I miss Maan's part in here

something tells me that Maan will not be able to do what he wants

he to will end up hurting her
as she is always hurt in the end

don't be hurt dearest

I told you i am a very serious critic

if you want I will delete this post

happy writing... the concept is really very very good
I don't usually read stories when they don't click me

but this one I have read 4 times

Shruti

acha kuch missing hai...par kya 😕
pls do tell me ...phir main use include kardongi...
I am actually blessed ki aap ne 4 times read kiya...maine khud teek se 1 baar padi nahi hai 😉
i think i have to give Maan's POV to clear some confusion...
aap CID ki investigation kyu kar rahi ho meri updateo ki...yeh suspense thriller thodi hai 😳
you don't have to delete any word in your post 😛
do continue ur critic review...it will help me in improving the story line 😃
I am now waiting for your review on my OS tooo...pls
Edited by -JEEVANA- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -JEEVANA-

acha kuch missing hai...par kya 😕
pls do tell me ...phir main use include kardongi...
I am actually blessed ki aap ne 4 times read kiya...maine khud teek se 1 baar padi nahi hai 😉
i think i have to give Maan's POV to clear some confusion...
aap CID ki investigation kyu kar rahi ho meri updateo ki...yeh suspense thriller thodi hai 😳
you don't have to delete any word in your post 😛
do continue ur critic review...it will help me in improving the story line 😃
I am now waiting for your review on my OS tooo...pls


ahhh critic wala review in os too... 😉

well well i told you in pms many a times that .. that ... that... you know ...

you can do something more to this story ...

read my pms again...

to refresh your mind ...

and oh am just saying like that
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31


ahhh critic wala review in os too... 😉

well well i told you in pms many a times that .. that ... that... you know ...

you can do something more to this story ...

read my pms again...

to refresh your mind ...

and oh am just saying like that

well i replied to ur pms many a times that ...that...you know...
read my pms again to refresh your mind ...
& oh am just saying like that 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -JEEVANA-

well i replied to ur pms many a times that ...that...you know...

read my pms again to refresh your mind ...
& oh am just saying like that 🤣



🤢 😡 TRYYY
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya hua??

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