Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Mujhe laga hi...bohot time lagega...
No prob...kal office me padh loongi 😉
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Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Mujhe laga hi...bohot time lagega...
No prob...kal office me padh loongi 😉
Originally posted by: -JEEVANA-
still typing ...
Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti
I have read your workand found something wrong with itbut I am not able to frame out what???something is missingyou will not believe I have read it 4 times just to find what is missingI am sure something is not in placeso I will have to wait for 1-2 updates to be sure that I am rightI will review it once I know for surethe story line is nice, a bit differentyou are telling about a girl's POV about life... how a girl feelshow she is perfect but not surehow she is cool but confusedthis Geet you have portrayed is very much like all girlsBut I miss Maan's part in heresomething tells me that Maan will not be able to do what he wantshe to will end up hurting heras she is always hurt in the enddon't be hurt dearestI told you i am a very serious criticif you want I will delete this posthappy writing... the concept is really very very goodI don't usually read stories when they don't click mebut this one I have read 4 timesShruti
Originally posted by: -JEEVANA-
acha kuch missing hai...par kya 😕pls do tell me ...phir main use include kardongi...I am actually blessed ki aap ne 4 times read kiya...maine khud teek se 1 baar padi nahi hai 😉i think i have to give Maan's POV to clear some confusion...aap CID ki investigation kyu kar rahi ho meri updateo ki...yeh suspense thriller thodi hai 😳you don't have to delete any word in your post 😛do continue ur critic review...it will help me in improving the story line 😃I am now waiting for your review on my OS tooo...pls
well i replied to ur pms many a times that ...that...you know...Originally posted by: drrose31
ahhh critic wala review in os too... 😉well well i told you in pms many a times that .. that ... that... you know ...you can do something more to this story ...read my pms again...to refresh your mind ...and oh am just saying like that
Originally posted by: -JEEVANA-
well i replied to ur pms many a times that ...that...you know...
read my pms again to refresh your mind ...& oh am just saying like that 🤣
Originally posted by: -JEEVANA-
mera net 😭
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