Falling Stars UPDATED Pt 3/Pg 23 @ 17 Jan - Page 11

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Part 3



"Ahh!!'' Geet mouth reacted in reflex. She could not understand what just had happened and then she felt and found herself in someone's arms, in half falling position. She looked up and found a face, bend over her from some far which she could not understand why it was looking different or can say.. very dirty, covered with mud. The eyes on face was glaring her like it will eat her alive if get any little chance. "Ahh.. will you let me stand up on my feet!!!'' she yelled as her body was aching being in this weird position, half in car and half in his arms. He let her be straight. As it happened, she turned to him "Who the hell are you !!! '' cant you see I could have fell !!! ''


The anger on his face increased hearing her loud tone. "How dare you!! '' his eyes pressed in hers. "How dare you to shout on me..!! ''


"Why.. why cant I.. kon ho tum.. kahi ke raja ho .. !! '' she taunted


He came near her, glared her with his red burning eyes.. "Dont even try to mess with Maan Singh Khurana, girl!!! You will not have time to even regret later.. !!!''


"Really!! '' ' "By the way.. can you tell me who is this.. Maan Singh Khurana.. haan!!'' Geet mocked ..


Maan temper reached highest. He clutched her shoulder, pressed it hard make her cry in pain.. '' Ahh!! What are you doing.. it hurts '' she struggled. And then she saw him coming nearer. She stared him with doe shaped eyes with trembling fears. Maan came very near raised his hand to her slowly. Geet scared thinking he might hit her, she closed her eyes, pressed tight and then she felt something cold on her face. She fluttered her eyes not guessing what it was and when she knew, the very known red angered hue turned-on on her face.


She fought, made herself released from his grip, wipe her cheek with hand and saw , road mud were covering her face, all over and then Maan smirk. She fumed in temper.


"I had told you not to mess with me.. '' Maan smirked..


"heyy what's happening here.. who're you.. leave her!!! '' Geet friend Meera came running and then some more passing people. Maan glared all and then to Geet again and then left with oozing attitude.


"Kamal ka aadmi tha.. '' One random person spoke..


"Are you okay!! '' a man tried to come near Geet showing his concern..


"O ya. She is fine.. thanks!'' Meera replied . Both girls sat in car as they don't want to create any scene there. Geet was wanting to puke.. made faces with the tacky smell of her. "Meera.. jaldi ghar chalo.. '' She shouted. "Meera was too shocked and very angry with all incidents but she wanted to know why he did this.. "Geet.. what had you done with him'' She asked..


"Nothing.. yukk '. Meera lets go home ..hurry up..!! .. by the way.. did you see his face.. kitna ganda tha.. ''


And then Meera understood that, While Geet was driving , she carelessly took a turn, car splashed dirty water and mud to a man who was passing from there. "Ohh..so he was him!! '' Meera now knew everything, but did not say to Geet as she was already in mess.. They drove off to Meera house. "


"Why here Meera?''


"Because if Rano aunty sees you in this condition Geet.. it will become the headline of tomorrow news paper stupid!!.. today no body is in my home so you get fresh here and then you can leave for Mansion okay'' Geet nodded and they entered inside. Geet goes to washroom and took a fresh bath cursing Maan with all the ill-words she knew, luckily or unluckily it was very less in her mind-stock.


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"Maan Beta aa gaye aap.. '' Dadi asked seeing Maan coming back. He had been wiping his face but still some marks were there behind ears and on his shirt. "Ye kase hua !! '' Dadi shocked to see his dirty cloths and face.


"Nothing Dadima.. '' he did not give explanation as he never knew to do this. He left to his room, got fresh and changed in fresh pair of cloths.


"Maan aapka kaam hua !!"" Dadi asked while doing lunch with him. Maan anger rushed back hearing and then thinking about what had happened in office. He didn't reply.


"Maan I'm asking something''


He dint respond again. Dadi dint force further and understood, it was not done. She knew he never had shared his anger and pain to anyone. It was of his part only. The only thing he knew to give, was his own happiness which, he rarely used to find.


"Take some rest Beta'' She said..


"I'm fine Dadi.. you should take a nap.. aap jaaiye'' he smiled and made her sleep in her room. He came out and started to call some more companies in which, he could find the better deal of his business plan. This was the reason he was in Handa Ind. But now, he will not keep his step there, again. " They should be highly professional if want to deal with Maan Singh Khurana!!!'' this was the condition for him, to work with anywhere, which had led to so much problems almost everywhere he went.


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Next Day,


Geet was driving, going to collage, in full speed, carelessly. It was her habit to live life like flying in open sky, without any thought. She had no fear of anything cause she, was a princess of her father. This thought had given her the unawareness of any reality of outside. She saw Maan again, was stood and talking on phone on side of road. It was not so rush on road. The last day insult crushed her mind enormously. "Aaj toh isse chorungi nahi'' she gritted her teeth in revenge. She changed gear in highest.. speedup car in full and steered to Maan in super fast speed .. and a screech...


Car clashed hard to a lamp post straight ahead...


Precap: " Are you okay??'' He patted her face..

"Mai tumhe chorungi nahi'' Geet blabbered in semi-conscious..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow fabous
maaneet had a cute ni jo in their first meet
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
maan will do business with handa or not???
geet ka khud ka acident ho gaya maan ko nukasan pahochane ke chakkar mai
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Posted: 12 years ago
my maanu is a poor boy here. geetu is richierich. different n interesting. luved it. keep it up buddy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Oye hoye first meeting of maaneet...mein nok jhoks...
Lol geet bhi na...khud ka accident hogaya...
Eagarly waiting
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
maaneet cute lil fights r sweet. maan being strongheaded n egoistic.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is trying to save her.
But Geet is trying to take revenge on him.
Strange!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
haila lovu mujhe wo mudy mudy part bhut pasand aayi...hehehehe maan toh geet ki pura face mud se makeup kar di😆...accha hua thodi toh akal aayegi ...waise i love this love hate relation abhi toh haty haty chaling i know fir anke anke batt karenge.😳😳...wowww fir se cross connection ho rahi h geet maan ki per geet toh bang on the tree kar di......chal ab caring maan ko v dekh ne ko milega...
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago

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