Captured Love (8) [Thread 9 link pg.140/1]

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sumaiyariya

@sumaiyariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

today part is only about all dil ki bat.all r shocked nd happy that maan is change.sach bolu i love maan nd vicky bond.👏..hope maaneet will be sath sath with anamika😛

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

hi dear

itss like ages me comment here

as i left your ff

may be after second aur third thread

don't remember the reason

but last night i read you new update

and me like

how could i stop reading your ff

(you never pm me dear😭😭)

so i read it from start

and me just in love with this maan

yaay kya change aaya hai bande mein

so me think to write few lines for your ff

oops

sorry seems like already its look like small easy

but what to do

kafi lambi reading hui hai

to answer bhi long hi hoga😉

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

few lines forgeet from maan

meri chahto ko toh mein bhul hi gaya hu

khud ko bhi bhul jauga , agar tu chahe

par tujhe bhul jaau

yh to kabhi na hoga mujhe se

yeh chahe tu yah khud bhi chahe

tu ban ke laahu bah rahi hai mujhe mein

minn chir kar apna dil tujhe yeh dikha du

agar tu chahe

mein to saaya bhi tera ban jaau ,

yeh dil mera chahe

par je raha hu aise ke mera chehra bhi tujhe nazar na aaye ,

aakhir yahi to tu chahe

mein to chahu ke saari duniya se kahu ,

ke tu hai meri khuda

par guzar rahi hai zindagi chupchap ,gumshuda

jaise ke tu chahe

tujh se milne par bhi teri pabandi hai

teri yaad se mil lu ,

yeh bhi tujhe pasand na aaye

dil chahe pukaaru sare aam ke ,

tu meri hai

par jee raha hu ajnabi ki tarah ,

jaise tu chahe

ek teri khushi ke liye

sah raha hu duniya ki nazaro ko mein

agar tu saath ho toh ,

yeh duniya kya mere saamne ,

jo mujhse nazar milaaye

badal de maine mri zindagi

jee raha hu aise ,

thi jaise teri khawahishe

agar mera yah sab bhi karna kafi nahi tere liye

to kah de ek baar ,

mar jaauga abhi ,kyoki jaana tujhse dur ,

mere bas mai nahi

merna tere bin hai aasan

kar duga mein yeh kaam ,agar tu chahe

aur ab de ek moka mujhe

taki chum lu

meri zindagi mein je bhar ke tujhe

aur

zindagi kitni hogi hasseen saath mere

aa tujhe mere kwaabo se milya du

agar tu chahe

me done with my thoughts dear

please tell me about your view

me waiting for your reply dear

sorry for spelling mistake

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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shabnam

@shabnam22

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

count my like too...awesome update...
yash and meera can unite maaneet...

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
few lines forgeet from maan

meri chahto ko toh mein bhul hi gaya hu
khud ko bhi bhul jauga , agar tu chahe
par tujhe bhul jaau
yh to kabhi na hoga mujhe se
yeh chahe tu yah khud bhi chahe
tu ban ke laahu bah rahi hai mujhe mein
minn chir kar apna dil tujhe yeh dikha du
agar tu chahe

mein to saaya bhi tera ban jaau ,
yeh dil mera chahe
par je raha hu aise ke mera chehra bhi tujhe nazar na aaye ,
aakhir yahi to tu chahe
mein to chahu ke saari duniya se kahu ,
ke tu hai meri khuda
par guzar rahi hai zindagi chupchap ,gumshuda
jaise ke tu chahe

tujh se milne par bhi teri pabandi hai
teri yaad se mil lu ,
yeh bhi tujhe pasand na aaye
dil chahe pukaaru sare aam ke ,
tu meri hai
par jee raha hu ajnabi ki tarah ,
jaise tu chahe

ek teri khushi ke liye
sah raha hu duniya ki nazaro ko mein
agar tu saath ho toh ,
yeh duniya kya mere saamne ,
jo mujhse nazar milaaye

badal de maine mri zindagi
jee raha hu aise ,
thi jaise teri khawahishe
agar mera yah sab bhi karna kafi nahi tere liye
to kah de ek baar ,
mar jaauga abhi ,kyoki jaana tujhse dur ,
mere bas mai nahi
merna tere bin hai aasan
kar duga mein yeh kaam ,agar tu chahe

aur ab de ek moka mujhe
taki chum lu
meri zindagi mein je bhar ke tujhe
aur
zindagi kitni hogi hasseen saath mere
aa tujhe mere kwaabo se milya du
agar tu chahe

me done with my thoughts dear
please tell me about your view
me waiting for your reply dear
sorry for spelling mistake

Wow Nishu very nice!!!!!!!

Love it!!!!!!!

I want to apologize for not being able to pm you. I just realized that I didn't had you added under my buddy list. Usually, I request my readers to add me themselves since it is time consuming for me to go page by and page and add everyone. Sorry about that!

I sent you a buddy request, if you would like to accept me😳

Can I use this on my next update? It goes perfectly with current Maaneet situation!!! Loved it!

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

hi dear

no need to sorry

as i write in first comment

even i stop reading your ff

so sorry from my side also

its just last night i read all over again

and want to write something

for my thankyou

for your this great work

yes you can use it

as its your poem as much as my

becose your writing is the one which make me write this poem

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
hi dear

no need to sorry
as i write in first comment
even i stop reading your ff
so sorry from my side also

its just last night i read all over again
and want to write something
for my thankyou

for your this great work
yes you can use it
as its your poem as much as my
becose your writing is the one which make me write this poem