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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


no update yet ...😭 😭 😭 😭



kal dedongi sobia ek din wait karlo🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
omg geet bahut zyada naraz hai
ab kese manayega maan geet ko??
as u said he should manofy her with his love not his anger
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
teaser:
ye kya hogaya geet ko mummyyy
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THANKS SO MUCH GIRLS😳
Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 24:

@DISCO:

Geet you look damn hot in this dress pinky said looking at the way geet got dressed. She literally pounced on geet for the way she came all late, while maan who was following geet since the moment she entered the disc listened to what pinky said, yeh dress acha hai?? Neeche ka kaha hai?? Maan bent down to glance at the little short she wore under the cream colored off shoulder top made of saffron cloth probably. Every single man present there was drooling on geet which maan did not miss and he knows telling anything to geet in this stage means its just a waste of his energy she will not budge.


When pinky giggled to the comment of maan, geet stomped in anger towards the bar counter to fetch some drink. She was about to gulp down the whisky maan held the glass in geet's hand to stop her from what she was doing, don't drink geet this is not safe he kept the glass down... acha as if you know she mocked with an angered face


Who will know it other than me?? Forgot the last time you drank he replied not that he wanted to hurt her but with a hope that geet will understand his point, yah you want to say I forced myself on you the last time haina Mr. khurana?? Just leave me alone, geet took back the glass to empty it into her stomach completely, she glared maan drinking it all the time. For maan he knows how geet's mood changes with time, the actual reason of him leaving her alone for six months seemed so painful but those six months of guilt led him to understand what feelings he has for her. He is in LOVE with her irresistibly and now he wanted to first manaofy her and then confess his feelings in a special way!! Life before geet was as if he was a dead man but now things changed with her presence around, damn those six months, his ego, of all his guilt which did not let him face her.


Maan knew he has to atleast try to tell his classmates about what geet is to him, tell them that she was and will remain special. Geet is not in her senses so it he thought he will confess his feelings, will make it memorable but who knew the way he will go and propose her leading to a misunderstandings between them.


He stood on the bar counter making sure this time nobody will speak nonsense about geet. Its he who was wrong, he wanted seal the mouths of his classmates for the way they say things to her.


Friends as you all know after all I did six months ago I am not worth pleading sorry to geet but its better late than never, I am sorry geet for hurting you, sorry for letting you down, cant we be the way we were earlier?? Cant the things change?? I promise this time, you will not be left alone main rahunga tumhare saath hamesha!! He stressed on the last word, geet stood rooted listening to those words of maan as all the people who were present there. Maan got down the counter with a firm conviction probably today he will be forgiven.


Oh o...
Teri akhiyon ka waar jaise sher ka shikar
Tera husn dhueydaar jaise jaltaa cigar
Teri akhiyon ka waar jaise sher ka shikar
Tera husn dhueydaar jaise jaltaa cigar
Tere pyar ka nasha kabhi aar kabhi paar

Geet did not turn she just walked away trying to make way out, she was not liking the party anymore. Maan tugged her into his embrace, jaws fell who were watching this mad couple who were madly in love with each other, more than that madly possessive about each other.


Tera pyaar pyaar pyaar hookah bar
Tera pyaar pyaar pyaar hookah bar
Tera pyaar pyaar pyaar hookah bar bar bar
Tera pyaar pyaar pyaar hookah bar


Geet wriggled out of the hold of him, which only tightened. This time when she succeeded maan indicated the girls to stop her. Seemed as if all the friends were ready to help maan with his mission, something which geet was liking too. The same girls who were teasing her, who were making fun of her are now helping maan to get them back. To the utter surprise sameera was one of them, she held geet by shoulder and pushed her towards maan. He winked at sam, thanking her. Maan's hand went to geet's abdomen, his breath fanned on her shoulder. Geet started to hyperventilate with the proximity, his fingers started to play with her skin above the satin material.


Tu jo naa ho mere rubaroo
Bin tere jeene se main daru

Hai yahi tamanna meri bas tere liye jiyu maru

Time seemed to stop for geet, she stood numb feeling happy for the words that just came out of maan's mouth. CLICK!!

Geet gulped hard not letting the pain to come out, not letting the love she has for maan to come out, she turned to embrace maan tightly after a long time CLICK!!

Nobody seem to notice the pictures that were being taken, the close poses of maaneet who were busy in each other arms. But when the reality sank in geet immediately left maan, showing him her back.


Tera huya jo deedar baaje dil me sitaar
Tera husn dhuyedaar jaise jaltaa cigar
Tere pyar ka nasha kabhi aar kabhi paar


What shocked geet was the way sam again came to give geet's hand into maan's. As geet struggled to let go off both of them landed on the couch which was placed in a corner of the disc.


Tera pyar pyar pyar hookah bar
Tera pyar pyar pyar hookah bar
Tera pyar pyar pyar hookah bar bar bar
Tera pyar pyar pyar hookah bar
O ho...


Maan looked around and kissed her on the forehead whispering a sorry!! With so much love and care, a change in expression, a change in behavior which she was liking even something different and special from before. But then sameera came to disturb the love birds only to drag geet out from the corner.


Jaage hum yunhi raat bhar
Hai hawaaon mai awaargi
Yeh kashish yeh deewangi
Hai tujhi se meri tishnagi


Maan followed geet holding her other hand, both maan and sam were in a plan probably a plan of manaofying geet. A man was watching all this from a lone corner, waiting for a chance to catch geet alone and here maan is all the while not leaving her even for a second.


Hai junnon ye sawaar main to bhoola sansaar
Tera husn dhueydaar jaise jaltaa cigar
Tere pyar ka nasha kabhi aar kabhi paar

Geet managed coming out of the pub escaping from maan when he was talking to sam. Nobody knew this is just the start of their khata meeta relation.


Maan: thanks sam for helping me I am sure geet ko main manaa longa kaise bhi karke she will be back to me he hugged her, sam too reciprocated its because of you I understood maan its Vicky my destiny, its Vicky my love. Agar tum nahi kahte toh shayad hi main samajh paati and I am happy with his love and I hope you get your love, your geet all the best!!


Tera pyar pyar pyar hookah bar
Tera pyar pyar pyar hookah bar
Tera pyar pyar pyar hookah bar bar bar
Tera pyar pyar pyar hookah bar


Geet called onto a taxi in almost an unconscious state, when all of a sudden somebody held her from behind by arm twisting it in the process hurting her. She screamed out in pain, he hit her hard on the head making her loose senses. By now maan realized geet left the party long, he ran outside and found somebody carrying her into a car. Dev by now understood there is no use of taking geet along with him he pushed her aside on the road and sat back in it to drive away and escape as soon as possible.

Geet!!! maan screamed seeing her falling down fainting, his heart sunk almost and the moment he held her she was literally burning with high temperature. Maan hugged her crying, unable to take the pain of the hand she was facing in the unconscious state too


Precap: The treatment!!😳


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ho gaya sweety see upar 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update

maan is reaIIY guiIty and nw he wants evefything t0 be spI

but why did dev wanted her when she gives him m0ney
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
maan manofying geet and confessed her
sam helping maan in mission manofying geet
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome maan manofying geet and sam helping him
dev is doing these for money he i such a cheap
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it thanks for the pm!

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