KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)NEXT THREAD ADDED

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Geet is feeling some unknown emotions for her kidnapper & which her brain is unable to comprehend whereas Maan could realise Geet is his mate as she is capable to give him peace

Awesome part

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mila1

@mila1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Woah long update but beautifully described Maaneet's mental struggle n pull towards each other. The update was hot...but i loved the morning part most...she was wrapped around her mate☺️ n was kinda loving it too😉...she didnt wore his shorts thinking he wud take them off her😆.
I will try to keep an open mind & focus on the whole story but

After all the wrestling she did it took only a small blow of air to wake him up. He inclined his face away from her neck while his nose scrunched in disgust, eyes squinting in bewilderment. Geet stared at him in amusement, he looked so cute just like…. just like Cotton.

After this can u blame me?... both the Cottons r giving me a tough time to focus on other things🤣

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Rukh

@RukhluvMaan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

wow...jis tarha se tumne kiss ko describe kiya aise tu kise ne kis bhi novel me..or is duniya me kisse ne bhi nahi kiya hoga...awesome...amazing...

and u r amazing writter...loved it...awesome..

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Outstanding!!!!!!

Actually I love the portion of every story when the protagonists deny to accept their fate,struggle to get out of the hands of destiny but found themselves bound ,like Maaneet.Both of them try to run away but cant,their natural connection pull them towards each other and they find solace with each other only.

I jst loved each and every part of the update,every.

Geet waking up in Maan's,erm,embrace,finding him cute like cotton,having a small quota of morning fight with him,being concerned for him,Maan's attempt to run away but ending up hugging Geet to calm down,forcing her and the teaching her to kiss him,their hmmm super carnal kiss and then Maan giving a reality check to Geet.Awesomly written.

Loved it.

Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Very nice...
Geet is still having her doubts... Poor girl... And Maan he is destined to her but hates her race...
Lovely... Both are together but tat would b the last thing they'd want to e6

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

gr8 update...

really superb one...

loved it...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

awesome update

mind vs heart. this is what happening with geet

deep down she have some feelings for maan but her mind is not allowing her to accept them

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Smexy update. 👏 😳
Me in awe
Aww geet compared maan to her cotton. 😳
Loved how u described that morning scene 😳
Poor geet maan didnt make anything to eat for her.
Geet felt something when maan was away. 😳
Aww he hugged her to console her. 😳
Now that really reminded the first khumari when they were on their trip to mukki right? Maan seeing her in his shirt got him excited. 😉
Yet maan is a real beast here, he didnt melt seeing her tears.
He taught her how to kiss. 😳 she learned fast or her inner desires controlled her mind. 😉
Love how u beautifully described maan's feeling. 😃 👏 very well written. I also always considered geet's pain, but maan being the 82 handsome young buddha is stuck with a human. 😆
Amazing part dear. Really cant wait for more. 😳

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Maan shuld be patient with Geet

I knw Geet isnt being easy but his is shock for her

Nice update

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GurmeetsMaha

@GurmeetsMaha

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#600

wonderful Update..in fact what I wanted to tell you, is kay I have been a silent reader but this story forced me to come and not only like but leave a message after every post. In my opinion this whole new concept based Story should be published as a Novel. Great Work and superb Effort. Keep it up