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Posted: 12 years ago
Will it be really out of the place if I say that this is the type of marriage I love? Arranged but so simple, where the two can be themselves and talk about anything and everything.. 😳

Itna simple aur sweet confession tha Geet ka. You know this means she is a very naive girl at heart who doesn't play around with words and emotions.. 😳 Chikna wala part was too good! Again showed the simplicity and fun if their relationship jismein Geet pretends to be a seductress and Maan the abla var! 😆 Too good Palin!

I can't say I hated the interruption of their sweet moment because it was important but I definitely disliked it! 😳

I hope Aarav gets well soon and the negativity that's taking root in his mind regarding his importance for his family is wiped off with his fever. 😊

I feel that this story is near completion. Is it, Palin? Anyway, I'm glad you updated! 😊
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

copyright hai marium...😳😳


chalo moi off...brattty u better get typing😳


Mujhe bhi nahin pata tha until very recently! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Yeh tu sabko My lord, my lord kyu bulati hai. I fell lilke Lord Voldy Moldy.😆

MEIN NAI DIVA BULATI HI..
i was just copying her..
You can never be that noseless creature...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is the kind of rapport a man and his wife should share. The camaraderie, the fun, the banter, the feelings that run deep, the...everything man.

It had me smile widely, with face in palms and give a dreamy sigh all through out the conversation and mind you I don't give dreamy sighs often 😆

Her chikne, and his don't you've brother and father line had me in splits, that my friend got mad at me. Ah, she got mad at me because she was telling her dukh bhari kahani and I was giggling. Oops.😆

Not to forget her ninja skills and how she kicks in his abs with her knees daily. Oh man he should be a saint to tolerate those kicks.😆

Her tears startled me too, and her explanation had me nod my head understandingly. I got that compliment too by someone. Lmao. But I didn't cry like Geet of course, I gave a hi five.😆

"Maan..I watch you very keenly when you are with Aarav and aaravi so I can deliberately kiss their cheeks at same place where you have kissed them...and tonight at dinner table,when you were drinking water,i could not avert my gaze from your adam's apple..."

Another dreamy sigh. Awwwh!

PS: Aarav ko ki hoya? Maan bhagooo!!!!
Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yesss yesss yesss you did it 😆... great job dear👍🏼...agar meri maaneet chitra mala ka aisa asar hoga toh main ye kaam bohot pehle kar chuki hoti😆
frst i was like yeh humari pallu ne likha hai yipppiiieee🥳 🥳 😆
now enough of my banter...back to business
wat to say chapter was delicious ☺️...finally d confession wid a kiss...i louuvvv u re😳
fantastically written...fr d frst time u hav written something like dis bt still there was a touch of yours in it ...i can feel it, smell it, taste it ...n m relishing it😆😆
beautiful portrayal of emotions how sweetly u did it yaar... m in love wid d characters

"i still remember the "Heena design" on your legs..."...oh pallu y he didn't mention dat how he was mesmerized by d ring imprint on her right cheek 😉😆
"dark desire",...."You are too good to resist,chikne.!!!." 🤣
n then here comes our man wid his tale of ishtory
"For God sake..leave me geet...Don't you have father or brother at your home???" 🤣 🤣
"You would..."... felt so much power in his words 😳
i hope aarav will be okkk...tujhe bachche par taras nahi aaya zaalim...i luv him so much plz make him fit n fine as soon as possible varna mujhse bura koi nai hoga😆...aur ye dhamaki nahi chetavani hai woh bhi pehli aur aakhiri 😎😆😆
❤️luvd it ❤️luvd it❤️ luvd it❤️
issspecial warm hug fr u janeman in dis freaking cold weather😆
aa ja gale lag jaa meri jaan, dil khush kar ditta🤗 🤗





Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Mujhe bhi nahin pata tha until very recently! 😳

i guess yeh mystery se related term hai...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Thanks Mayyo.
I'm just too embarrassed.😳
I mean it yaar, read at your own risk. and believe me I'm not being shy or humble. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. I keep thinking would I read it if somebody else wrote it?


I think hum sab aisa sochtey hain lekin there's nothing to be embarrassed about your story! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome


i guess yeh mystery se related term hai...😃


😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeh kya post karungi ki dhamki dete deta post bhi kar diya.
Wah Nanandji kya baat hai.👏
Abey reserve.
Though I haven't yet commented on chapters 13-21 i'll probably comment on this first and then go backward😆s
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally pyaar ka izhaar.. i love this maaneet. maan as shy and geet too bold..

awesome palin...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by mannubhardwaj - 12 years ago

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