yesss yesss yesss you did it 😆... great job dear👍🏼...agar meri maaneet chitra mala ka aisa asar hoga toh main ye kaam bohot pehle kar chuki hoti😆frst i was like yeh humari pallu ne likha hai yipppiiieee🥳 🥳 😆
now enough of my banter...back to business
wat to say chapter was delicious ☺️...finally d confession wid a kiss...i louuvvv u re😳
fantastically written...fr d frst time u hav written something like dis bt still there was a touch of yours in it ...i can feel it, smell it, taste it ...n m relishing it😆😆
beautiful portrayal of emotions how sweetly u did it yaar... m in love wid d characters
"i still remember the "Heena design" on your legs..."...oh pallu y he didn't mention dat how he was mesmerized by d ring imprint on her right cheek 😉😆
"dark desire",...."You are too good to resist,chikne.!!!." 🤣
n then here comes our man wid his tale of ishtory
"For God sake..leave me geet...Don't you have father or brother at your home???" 🤣 🤣
"You would..."... felt so much power in his words 😳
i hope aarav will be okkk...tujhe bachche par taras nahi aaya zaalim...i luv him so much plz make him fit n fine as soon as possible varna mujhse bura koi nai hoga😆...aur ye dhamaki nahi chetavani hai woh bhi pehli aur aakhiri 😎😆😆
❤️luvd it ❤️luvd it❤️ luvd it❤️
issspecial warm hug fr u janeman in dis freaking cold weather😆
aa ja gale lag jaa meri jaan, dil khush kar ditta🤗 🤗
Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago
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