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Posted: 12 years ago
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EPILOGUE

And the time came, the moment came, A night arrived which would create a magical play itself in the life two people who had been tied in unbreakable bond, just before a few hours before. The night of togetherness of Maan and Geet. The moment of their beginning of new life.. a step on way of their new journey..

A home like a dreamland. A room had been prepared beautifully. A place had been decorated with the lights and perfumed candles. whole space had been covered with the glory of red and white flowers together with shining and shimmering little glass-mirrors, which was raising the yearns in two racing hearts who were feeling a new sensation. A fresh emotion was taking birth in them, which was making their breath skittered and hooked.


The bride, Geet was sitting in the middle of bed, gracefully, hidden in heavy bridal attire, with burning heart and shy mind. her face had excitement and anxiety. she was not sure what is going to come ahead and was very nervous, till he comes. Till Maan comes her breath could have taken rest but now, it was impossible to breath even. "Ohh Babaji... " a incomplete pray came out from inside her closed lips who had been sealed with her love... her Maan.

The moment their breaths got touched by each others they become re-borne. They felt the beautiful smell of each others simulating breaths. Geet was feeling like she had been kept on fire. Her skin was blazing with the touch of him on her entire frame. Maan was making it feel her more with the uncontrollable desire of his within. it was spellbinding. It was perfect.. It was beautiful to be feel.

They laid down on the velvety skin of white sheet which was ready to cover them in her embrace. The pleasure of exploring of two bodies was not less then glimpsing inside the soul of each other. Maan kissed her head, tasted the flavour of her face.. Each and Every roundness of her body was in the list of his have. It all was his and his only was employing the night incredibly perfect. Geet who was feeling and observing his steps till now, was ready to take the excitement in her hand. she with same pleasure took part in observing her Maan being an obedient fellow, which she had learned from him. The night came on its peak. The two humans were ready to become one and they became. With a memorable second, they stepped into an unforgettable relation. No one could make them separate ever. The journey of their love had completed and now a new name would be added in this name of their bond and that would show the completeness of this love travel. And when it happened...

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After Two Years..

"mamma..."

"Maan see... she said Mama.." A jumping Geet excitedly run to Maan who was in his study, as usually engrossed in his files. "Maan see na!!! " Maan lifted his eyes to two most adorable faces, stood in front of him.

" Geet!! who said 'Mamma'.. You or she? " He chuckled when saw the very known pout on his little wify face who was standing with their cute littlest daughter in her arms, who had the same pout on her baby pinky lips.



"Maan aap fir mujhe bana rahe ho'' Geet showed her anger on which their little princess giggled.. Geet glared her. "Dekha..dekha.. now she is too in your team!''

Maan was dearly enjoying this pretty activities of his sweet family. He came near and eyed his daughter and then both two kissed the most priceless member of family.. to Geet, on her both sides of cheek... Geet smiled.

Before the two little angels could understand a flash sparked and this precious moment had been caught in frame of camera by Maan.. A self click .. with the Papa stood behind them, taking his family.. his world.. in embrace of his arms...A perfect picture of a perfect family...


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww lovu very beautiful epilogue...the perfect ending for perfect love story..olle olle maaneet baby was sooo cuteee chooo chweet😃...bilkul maaneet ki tara...happy family 😃...well done lovu👏👏...ud was magical ff ...behind this ff has lots of memory saddy , happy but each n every memory close to heart coz every memory made u more devoted to write n I know ud will come back again with big surprise ...😃...
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

awww beautiful story comes to its end

it was wonderful journey of both of them

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww it was so cute update

Maaneet consumating n becoming one soul

Maaneet becoming proud parents of a little princess

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Perfect ending for a perfect story..
So lovely.. will miss this story a lot..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow that was a classic epilogue.. as i always used to say when it comes to Maaneet am certified besharam 😉 but loved the way you wrote about start of Maaneet's journey as one body and soul.. it was awesome..❤️ loved it. Hayee Maaneet's angel so sweet 😊 too good a super tight hug 🤗and a strong kiss to you for this wonderful FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the epilogue finally they r one against all odds...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely very beautiful epilogue...the perfect ending for perfect love story..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the epilogue.
Beautiful journey of maaneet very well potraid.
U r a wonderful writer.
Keep writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago



LOVELY STORY ... with LOVELY ENDING

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