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Posted: 12 years ago
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HELLOS
hello my beautifull readers
I am in love with MAANEET so much ..that i could not control myself from writing an Os on our beautifull couple
Hope you all like it.

Maan is going to hospital to meet his love geet...she is admitted in hospital from last 1 year...because she is in coma...when maan comes to know that geet is in coma..he becomes lifeless...want to end his life as he was not able to save geet...

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Maan and geet loves each other unconditionally...After 1 month..its maan birthday soo geet decided to give maan a surprise...she tells all his friends about the surprise party and told to everyone no need to tell maan as its a surprise for him...
..maan studies with geet in college but side by side he helps his father in the buisness...due to which he miss his classes regualrly..one day maan has off from office and so he decided to spend some time with geet..he calls geet ...and asked her to come to his home and they will go out...but geet is busy in doing arrangement...so she told him that she is busy with college assignement and tomorrow is last date of submission...maan is feeling bad ...but he said ok...

Maan goes to a mall to buy something for geet..and their parents...but he got a big shock..geet is in mall with his friends..and laughing with them...maan becomes so much angry on geet...but he dont want to make some drama in the mall..he goes to his home without buying anything...

In the night...maan calls geet and talked with her normally...he wants to know will geet tell him about her visit to the mall...but she didnt...

Its been 1 week of that mall incident...maan is noticing changes in geet...as when maan aksed her to meet him..she will say something..and ignore to meet to him..maan is soo much angry on her,,,but he is controlling himself to blast on geet...
Today is maan birthday and the biggest shock is that geet not even call him to wish him and he is very angry...in straightly goes to college in angry state...and his blood boil to see her enjoying with his friends..and goes to her and shouted on her and said she has no time to spend with him but with his friends...and directly asked from her if she loves him or not...or just playing with his feelings...

Geet is heartbroken...she didnt expect from maan to stay these things to her...and without answering anything to him she goes from there...his friends are shocked to see his behaviour...and shouted on him that he insulted his love ...and told him that she has planned a surprise birthday party for him and making arrangements from the last month...he is shocked and guilt started forming in him...he goes towards the parking area and sees that there is no car of geet..he knows when geet gets upset where she goes..so he also starts his car...in the way he notices geet car but biggest shock she is nowehere in the car...and goes in the jungle...and he listens someone shouting and the girl is geet...and he goes towards the sound and his blood boiled seeing 4 guys forcing them on her...he goes towards them and beat them black and blue...but the damage is done..as one day hit her soo badly..that she fainted there only...

He goes towrads geet and picks up her and run towards the hospital..after reaching the hospital..doctors take her in the OT...on the otherside maan is angry on himself as firstly he didnt believe her and secondly he was not able to save his love..doctors come out and told him that geet is in coma as lost so much amount of blood...and says sorry...maan is heartbrken...but he dont loss his hope

BACK TO PRESENT
Its 1 year of geet being in coma and today is maan birthday...both their parents comes to meet geet...they are heartbroken too and doesnt show anything to maan...as they dont want to hurt him
Maan prays to GOD everyday..and today he wished that on his last birthday they took away geet from them..but today he prays to give geet back to him and his prayer will get an answer ...

When maan reaches hospital..he noticed that doctors are running towards geet room ..he becomes more worry..he goes towards her room and doctors comes out and informed him that geet is out from coma...maan is soo happy...and he thanks GOD.
HE goes towards geet room and geet opens her eyes and becomes happy seeing maan and hugs him and both started crying and maan kisses her and said she will not wish him kya??
Geet wishes him and hugs him and sleeps peacefully in his arms...
End
hope u all like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os...but thoda fast track main tha 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os dear
superb
just loved it alott

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovd the os neek di, it was painful yet cute...
poor geet gttng blastd by maan nd then resultng it in her present state...
bt loved the endng. too cute.
sowiee for late comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovleyyy awww sad but fab
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet Os 😳

But bht jaldi khatam ho gayi 😆
Loved it

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