MG FF:A torn relation pt link to thraed 2 pg 1 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just great dear ...loving this very much looking for next one
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~A TORN RELATION~

PART 4

She was like a doll you can mend her like you want .. Dressed elegantly she was just waiting to take her to that life which was no less than a nightmare .. A fake smile that can never be reach those shiny orbs to shine them..

Here in KM , maan was getting dressed he was too expressionless when his dad and daadima were actually admiring him.. Daadima cupped his face..

daadima : maan hum jaante hain sab kuch bahut jaldi ho gaya hai par ye hum sab ke liye acha hai , bhool jaiye unhe jinhone aapko tod diya hai.,

maan was silent as always his silence was killing..

maan : mere liye kuch bhi maine nahi rakta na aaj aur na hi kal..

this was the entire fact of his life.,.

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The baraat had reached , the reception from handas was much admired by all.,

the bride was brought down by the friends and her mother.. Some eyes were glistening with the unshed tears that their daughter will leave them but she was like unaffected.. The rituals got started they were sitting infront of holy fire which was the surrounded by the hyms and chants of the mantras..




The seven vows with seven sacred rounds with each phera maan was silently making his , taking a silent oath to be with her in every step of THEIR life , to fulfill every duty and responsibility as a true companion , to respect each and every word spoken by her and to be her true soulmate .. Who will always be with her .. But the oaths seems to be fake with no meaning when the life which are tied by the sacredness of soul are already made shattered...

the priest told him to tie the thread of trust and belonging , to fill that parting with the red vermillion ,

beauty her life with adornments that she will have all her life.. Her mother lifted his ghungat her eyes were withdrawn those pearls were emotionless blank with no desires to be fulfilled no expectation from her better half...


Time came that she will be parted from her birth relations just to get along with whom she is bonded by her birth...



tears seems to have dried the sweet expected ache had turned to a wound that can never be cured ., her mother cried telling her giving her last advice to learn to sacrifice...

They reached KM and the couple was welcomed maan's mother did the grihaparvesh... Everything for mechanical for her... There was a fear , her mind and she was shiverring under his proximity his nearness was affecting her...

Geet had fixed her gaze down not wanting to see him or see his eyes... Naina just like a doting mother in law asked geet to come inside...



naina : geet beta daaiyen pair se ye kalash girakar dono andar aa jaiye...

Both of them entered the mansion , geet dipped her feet in the red water which actually marks the coming of goddess laxmi in the form of a daughter in law ...


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WILL UPDATE SOON


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SUHAANA


Edited by sweetsaloni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
maaneet are marrie now awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely update.. my maaneet ki marriage was always make me goosebumbs, wow lovely cute scenes..oh god now my maan ki revenge to his geet, love ki revenge..i love te update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome

Fabulous

Liked a lot dear

Continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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geet doing all things mechanical..poor girl..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
nice part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update ..waiting to know will maan recognice geeet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome parts ..

So now maaneet is married .. 😃

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