MG FF:A torn relation pt link to thraed 2 pg 1 - Page 11

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Originally posted by: ambbiha

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~A TORN RELATION~


PART 5


Everything seems to be an illusion but this illusion was griping the worst reality of her life.. A dream that was brutally scared and her culprit was her soulmate who was actually responsible for a scattered life , the broken pieces cant be again mend again its original and if it will be somehow then the new fragile thread of her life will be having knot of once being betrayed..

"us kaanch ke rishte ko majbut dor se uss ankahen pyaar ko wo imtihaan dena hoga jo use usi ki sazza se baandh dega..

geet and maan entered KM..

She was like every new bride who was given that love and affection that a daughter in law receives'

There was no doubt that everyone in both the families were happy with this alliance..maan was just not a name..he is the richest and handsome guy for who the mother's seek their daughter's hand' and geet she was a simple..traditional , cultural girl.. a beauty that can make anyone fall for her but she ..she was too reserved and always is concerned about her family .. she can't even think of something that can disgrace the name of her parents.. and thinking about someone who will love her..or she would love someone was not in her cup of tea' but like all the girls there were too few dreams that she wanted HIM to fulfill'. A small corner in his life' a lovable life with him' but what will happen when the cruel truth of that unwanted night will came in the form of a nightmare in front of him'.

Maan and geet were doing everything mechanically' there was nothing they could think off.. no enthusiam..no anticipation ' no restlessness for him / her..but there was a certain kind of fear in her'

Naina settled both of them in the centre with a bowl of milk and roses.. geet and maan were sitting infront of each other..her eyes were still downcasted'not having any single bit of courage to see him' she can't'

" nahi dekh sakti thi unn aankho ko jisme sirf wo dard dikhta hai' ek pyaar ki jhalak bhi ek kadwa sach ban gayi hai.."

Naina : maan geet' aap dono ko ye anghuti dhungi hogi..aur jo ise pehle dhundega usi ki chalegi.

Maan was least interested..he doesn't even know this girl..it was all just to please his family' he had just asked his family to get him married as soon as possible and they selected her.. though he will have to fulfill all her demands and necessities as a husband' and he will do that for sure' but the HATE.. that is still in his heart and life' that anger which is leaving its venom in its life will somewhere not comply with what he is thinking'..

Geet looked at maan' they have to search that means somewhere he will be close to her again'but his closeness will leave her more terrified'

Geet lifted her lids to see him once' he was the same as he was' she can't forget that he is reason that she feels disgusted of herself' she loathe he body..this flesh'

Vishal cheered for geet.. though all wanted maan to win except vishal' he actually wants his sister in law to win'

Vishal: bhabhi aapko jeetna hai' bhai ko hara dijiye..dekhiye ga aapke saamne bhai ki nahi chalegi'.

Geet shied listening to him.. she was a girl and shying away was natural' BHABHI the word echoed in her ears.. a new relation.. she was now HIS wife ..someone's BAHU .a BHABHI' but she has lost herself in this process'

There was no emotion or feeling related being married.. being a new bride.. NOTHING' just a void in her life..all the things colourless like her'.

" though sometimes life tests our patience by putting on to toughest trail but the unknown pain can be healed by the owner of that wound before it turns to be painful to endure'."

Maan and geet were searching for the ring.. if the situations were to be different then the cold reaction of their will be somewhere romantic.. there would have been a eagerness , an expectation to meet her.. the naughty glint will be adorned in his eyes.. but today.. geet was sitting scared ..hiding that non wanted sorrow' concealing those pearls which were threatening to fall seeing her abrasser' those gashes were still green..and the hurt was visible in her eyes'.

Accidently maan's hannd touched hers.. geet suddenly looked at him fearing that what if she will be abused once again'. She doesn't know why she was made to endure all the pain and incurable hurt' and she immediately left the ring that was in her hand ' maan looked at her once.. she was averting her gaze'

Maan st: this bounds to happen maan to every new bride'

But he failed to see the loathing and hurt in those averted eyes' her body was on a sudden fire.. it was like she just want to get away from there'..

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

~A TORN RELATION~
PART 5


Everything seems to be an illusion but this illusion was griping the worst reality of her life.. A dream that was brutally scared and her culprit was her soulmate who was actually responsible for a scattered life , the broken pieces cant be again mend again its original and if it will be somehow then the new fragile thread of her life will be having knot of once being betrayed..
"us kaanch ke rishte ko majbut dor se uss ankahen pyaar ko wo imtihaan dena hoga jo use usi ki sazza se baandh dega..
geet and maan entered KM..
REST WILL CONT WHEN I'LL BE HOME

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