MG SS 'The Startled Maid' Pt 6 Pg 128 Thread2 opnd - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai



typed the update.. going for my niece's school anniversary function. will try to give update before that . today i m defintely gonna update..😉

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Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lekin abhi tak post kyu nahi kiya..😭
JeevanaP thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
its already 5...update kaha hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai



typed the update.. pgm will start at 4.

ok hv fun,watng 4 ur rturn😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hai lily me fine...what about u??? u too busy busy now a days????

@rem... no update today????😭

ys bsy schdule4 sm dys nd urs mrg ho gayee?
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for update

do cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hw ws function?
abhi updtng ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanku guys for the wonderful comments and likes and my heart welcome to all my new readers..😃

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Part 5

Omg! Is he really here? His face was all alive in my dreams after our first meeting. I felt like my knees turning into jelly. Hw he grew more handsome and hot within a day!! I saw him walking towards me with slow steps. Where is my tongue when I need it badly? His hot breath fanned my cheeks and he moved his gorgeous lips to my ears. I shut my eyes feeling him so close. I prayed that my body won't betray me. geet! Don't respond! When his lips touched my earlobe I shuddered forgetting all my warnings.

Why u left me?

I looked at him surprised. He took a step back and a smirk appeared on his face.

U noe hw much I missed ur food.

Oh really? Its so nice to hear from u!

I said sarcastically.

Thanku geet…

Why r u here Mr. Khurrana?

Aww.. u r not happy to c me here.. I m so hurt.

He said keeping his hand on heart. I ignored him.

Nw cumg to the point, I want my maid back.

What!

U heard me!

I appointed a maid for u. nw what?

He again stepped closer making my heartbeat faster.

I want u geet..

Hu-h!

Don't fly high geetipie! I want u as my maid.

He said smirking. I wanted to punch that smirk out of his face.

Sorry.. I don't work as maid. I own this company.

I said with attitude. But he gave me a teasing smile.

Toh us din kya kar rahi thi meri ghar mein.. who bhi meri kurte mein.

I felt embarrassed.

I noe geet.. all want the handsome MSK. Esliye even after owning this firm u decided to work as maid for me, rt?

Nw anger was coursing thru my veins..

To hell with ur thot Mr. Khurrana. Ur so called friend cum manager Adi wanted a maid for u and the girl I appointed backed out in last minute. I don't want my firm's reputation to b at stake. So I decided to cum that day as ur maid. Only for a single day! Since I found another replacement, I stepped out from that role.

I saw him lost in me!!

What?

Aur kaho na achi lagthi hain..

I think its time for u to go. From now onwards anna will be ur maid. I hope we won't cross each other's paths again. Nice meeting u.

I strode towards my chair and took some file pretending to be engrossed.

It was nice meeting u geet.

I looked up from the file to meet his handsome face for the last time. But then his naughty eyes were saying sumthg else.

Mark my words sweetie.. u will be in my house as my maid within 2 days.!!

He said winking and walked out. Seems like I m in big trouble!

Maan's POV

Oh god! She has so much attitude.. just like me.! i knew that she tasted her own food when i realized that some pieces were missing. and when i gave that teasing remarkher cheeks and nose flared in anger.. uff... I felt like biting those. I noe Mission geet handa is going to be too tough. But I want her at any cost. Dear geet! U have no idea wat I m going to do! It may hurt u at the beginning but I promise u will thank me at the end.

Geet's POV

I was winding up things for the day. Today was so hectic and I need to crash my bed soon. At the end of the month I would be able to buy this place. Feeling contented I took my bag to leave when the phone rang.

Geet handa speaking..

What do u mean by giving us a single day to vacate the premises?

But I was ready to give the full amount at the end of the month.

What do u mean by 50 million dollars?

But..

Before I could speak further the other side cut the call. All tiredness left me. I felt like the whole world is going to crash down. How could they cheat me! I drank the whole jug of water placed in front of me. I can't leave this place. Hw will I tell mom. Aryan! May be Aryan could help me. I took the bag and hurried towards house.

I saw Aryan in deep thots. My mom was shocked at first but then as always she looked determined. Aryan called the owners and told that if we are ready to give the amount more than that then they will sell it to us. But wat surprised us was they were not willing to reveal the name of new owners. Aryan tried to arrange the amount but he couldn't gather half of it.

I walked defeated to my room. I noe Aryan can handle mom. Now I need to be alone for sometime. When I lie down fear was beginning to grip me. I can't take a loan from bank since we already took it for extending a room for work. Money lenders were a bad option. Finding a different location is also not an option since this was an ideal one for my firm. Suddenly I realized I was running out of options. A tear made its way to cheek when the phone rang.

I don't want to talk to any one rt now. But since its an unknown no I thot I should take it. may be this call will help me from my pblms.

Geet handa speaking..

Hello my geetipie.. dreaming abt me?

My heart missed a beat at his seductive voice. But now I was in no mood to hear his flirting.

Mr. khurrana. I m in no mood to talk to u rt now. Bye.

I was abt to cut the call when his next set of words surprised me.

I heard that u r in need of financial help.

How did u noe?

My name is Maan Singh Khurrana dear.

So?

U noe I can offer any help for my geet..

He and his flirty comments!

No thanku..

I m ur only hope.

Even if u r the last person on earth I won't come to u.

I cut the call frustrated. But then again phone rang. This time it was my friend Sasha.

Hello sash..

Hai geet. I heard a news..

Ya I noe and its rt. some damn company bought my place.

Do u noe who bought it?

Nope. They r keeping it as a secret.

But I came to noe that its Khurrana group.

I was startled.

Come again..

Ya.. the famous maan Singh Khurrana. Dad went to a party and there he came to noe abt it.

I dint heard the rest since I was comprehending wats happening. I cut the call mumbling a gdn8. Suddenly my phone beeped with msg.

Welcome to Khurrana Mansion Ms. Geet Handa urf Ms. Maid. My kitchen is missing u badly..



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Posted: 12 years ago
me first😳🥳
lov dis flirty maan,hell behind geet,geets attitude super.maan hs left no option 4 geet.ab to km jana hi padega.bst updt til dt,rems u make me more desperate 4 nxt prt.ab nxt sndy tak wait kaise hogi
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