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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for update from soo long pls update soon
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Abbe poochna bandh Karo n jaldi update doo...humph...
Me crying like dia...
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THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part







PART 36

silent readers if you cannot respond to my update then please dont read..they r meant for my regular readers and commentors


Maan looked at the envelope that was written confidential ..he knew that he did a mistake by not accepting his heart..and that had made his little baby suffer a lot..he will have to pay for the sins he did..diya was his daughter this was the ultimate truth… but was he only the one who was wrong wasn't it geet too…maan asked himself..he was again having a frustration building up..his little girl was suffering somewhere because of his deeds and she needs him.. that was the truth but she needs her mother too..she needs them.. today what doctor had suggested they will have to comply on it… he cant see his little angel in pain… he have to talk to geet maan thought… the sooner they will solve their differences will compromise to the situation the better will be the situation…

Maan looked at the opened photographs still the envelope was sealed it was three years maan hadn't opened it and whether he will open it he was not sure but today he will have to search those B***** who are with his so called wife…

Maan: geet if you have really did this.. then you are the biggest sinner since your deeds made me believe that diya was not my child… and you will have to pay for it I cant let you go away by cheating on me and if its all my mistake then I cant forgive my self… I promise I wont even come near you or diya..even my shadow wont touch you two….

Maan's guilt and his anger both were playing simultaneously .. but the mistake he was doing was not confronting geet … but he wanted to know all the facts now..he will dig the grave for the truth now that he had not done yet and made his mistake a sin….

Maan looked at the photographs … he immediately called someone …

Maan: I want to meet you now..its urgent meet me at XYZ caf within half an hour…

Geet looked at her baby she was all indulged with the family with her cute demands that were fulfilled by the family members very well..she was demanding and naughty just like maan …

Diya looked at her dadji with whom she was playing..she had made the great business tycoon ashutosh khurana a horse and he was very happy to comply to her demand..she was the little apprehensive seeing diya gelling with all but she was not able to think whatshe will do when they will have to leave KM ..geet was here just because diya needed her father cooperation to save her bust she cant stay here all life and that time will be the most difficult one for diya….

When geet saw that vishal was sulking looking at diya and his bade papa… he was feeling jealous his princess was playing with all expect him.. he looked at geet who raised her eyebrow…

Vishal slumped down on the couch near geet and made a cute puppy face seeing diya ..geet was confused why was vishal looking like he had got bitten by some thing….

Geet asked him….

Geet: what happened vishal… why are you brooding… are you not well… she asked and checked feeling may be he is having fever or something…

Vishal rolled his eyes seeing his naive sister in law … he thought that she has changed she must appear tough and strong but she is still the same geet..his shy nature doll looking sister in law who was afraid of him when he introduced himself to her….

Vishal: what are you doing bhabhi.. you are still same..i am fine… cant you see no one is playing with me..he said eying at diya who was very much in her horsey ride….

Geet looked at him with the poor confuse face…she was not understanding what he was saying…

Geet: h..h..u.hh .. what are you saying…

Daadima was looking at two..she cant differentiate between diya and geet know she was same… innocent and child hearted geet..she smiled and looked at vishal who was just seeing diya….

When vani , geet's mother in law came and looked at the two.. they were no less than children…

Vani: geet beta Vicky is fine..he is in a mad mood because diya is playing with your dad not with him…

She playfully wacked vicky …while geet was shocked..she made a face and looked at diya who was now looking tired..she was not well in the morning and know she was looking tired…

Geet : vishal you can play with diya tomorrow look she is looking tired.. I will make her sleep after giving her medicines now…

Vishal was alerted listening to geet..he looked at diya and immediately took her in his arms…

Vishal checked her..diya was feeling irritated… she snapped at vishal…. For intruding in her space he disturbed her ride..she made a face…

Diya: keep diya down..diya want to play..mumma…she made a crying face…

Geet took diya in order to console her..

Geet embrace her diya kept her head on geet's neck..she was feeling low.. tired … geet kissed her forehead…

Geet : baby you can play tomorrow… look its getting late diya and mr bunny are sleepy now… look mr bunny is yawning complaining that he wants to sleep..

Diya looked at geet with puppy expression she doesn't want to sleep now but for her friend mr bunny she will sleep…

Diya: mr bunny swleepy mumma…

Geet looked at diya made her understand…

Geet: yes..see mr bunny sleeping in chachu's arms…

Aww geet did a mistake diya got alert seeing her soft rabbit in vishal's hands..she jumped

in geet's arms just like a cute little monkey…….

Diya: mUmma Mr bunny…mumma mr bunny…

Geet was confused but vani quickly took it and give to diya… knowing her possessiveness for the toy …. Diya glared at vishal..(MSK 's daughter's glare)…

Vani looked at sleepy diya she told diya to make diya have her dinner, since it was dinner time she will arrange it …geet nodded , she wanted to help but vani denied….

The dinner was placed… maan was absent..geet looked for him..but she didn't knew that his habits were changed he was not the same maan she as used too….

Geet mashed the rice completely and poured some dal.. in the bowl.. she didn't made diya eat the chapatti since her gums were hurting….

One spoon diya took and when she was about to take the next ..her eyes were red and nose was watery… geet notice this..she hadn't checked the food if it was spicy since diya cant stand a little bit of spice just like maan….

Geet worriedly look at diya…

Geet: what happened baby…. Diya chocked she immediately made her drink cold water..and immediately tasted the food..it was spicy….

Geet: diya why did you eat if its spicy..she asked her but diya looked away..she never liked dal..she wanted her pasta…

Daadima looked at diya..she smiled seeing her cute antics…

Daadima: geet leave it beta..i will call nakul to make something without spice for her…

when she was about to call nakul when geet deied glaring at diya…

Geet: no dadima..she will have this..you cant have pasta all time diya..now open your mouth… geet mixed some curd and rice and made her eat….

Everyone was amused seeing diya's antics she was pouting looking angrily at geet..

Geet: these looks wont work on me..now open your mouth…

But diya was stubborn…. She didn't and geet forcefully made her tummy full….this was the hardest task for geet to make diya eat other than her favorite…

After the dinner , geet was taking diya upstairs to make her sleep..when she didn't wanted to go….

Geet: baby you know we are going to sleep here… its good..you will see big stars shining come mumma will show you..

She tried to pacify diya but diya was fluttering in her arms…

Diya: no diya wants to sleep in her room…. Diya wants to go home…

Geet: no diya we will not go home…..

But diya was not getting she was testing geet's patience ..when she didn't stop..geet yelled at her….

Geet: NO cant you hear me diya ..we are not going anywhere ..we are going to stay here...

geet yelled everyone was looking at her ..diya was terrified she was looking like a scared puppy who was having tiny little tear drops and the next second she burst into crying...

maan who was in his study when heard her sobs immediately came down..he was having the same envelope and was about to leave the place to meet someone but he forget everything as soon as his baby cried...

big fat tears were flowing ... she was holding her Mr Bunny too tight like she didnt want anyone to let it touch...

maan knew at that time he was having no right
on hearing her cries her daadi tried to make her calm but she just started crying more...
on her ..she was crying because her mother wanted her to make understand... but her needs no one looked...

maan was about to take a step forward towards diya but seeing geet he stopped knowing she wont like ...

but diya cutely hold his hand...

diya: diya wants to sleep with dadda...


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abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
i hope this time maan gets to know the whole truth
plz let him know the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
loved vishal cravings to hold dia..
n cutie dia is angry on him 4 touching bunny..
uff..geet made dia angry n she is crying..
maan left pics in study..
will geet c it
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
loved it...
waiting for next part...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm maan thinking geet cheat him.no maan geet tumko cheat nahi kar sakhti😕😕
maan want to confront geet.thats the good thing.wating for this.😊
awee dia make her dadaji horse😆😆
poor vishal cant play with dia😉.
dia cute cute antic love it🥳
awee geet scold dia nd dia crying😭😭.
maan came cant see dia crying😃
dia want to sleep with dadda 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope both get to know the whole truth waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update. hope maan finds the truth and repents for his mistake
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
let maan come to know the truth soon as possible

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