Ek anjani dor PT 17 PG 138 AUG 18 - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved geet and dhruv
they relation is so sweet
beautiful update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update Suhanna...I m lovig the track the flow is awesome ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update..

Geet & baby's bonding is awesome..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow such a nice story. Just read all in one go. Superb bonding btween geet n dhruv. Waiting for maneet c meet. Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fazimah3008

Wow such a nice story. Just read all in one go. Superb bonding btween geet n dhruv. Waiting for maneet c meet. Update soon



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PART 10


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Well after having milk baby slept in the comforting embrace of his mother..he was holding geet's finger while sleeping.. and his face was covered by her soft dupatta…he was slowing breathing that was actually like a soft humming tune..


And not to forget his cute antics..once geet tried to pull the dupatta but he didn't let her… infact he just burrowed himself in her.. his soft body just melted in his mother's embrace… geet was thinking that may be he will finding it difficult to breathe ..so she again tried to pull the dupatta but he being her son he was aggressive and next she found him holding the duppatta tight in his fist making it difficult to let it go…

Nidhi had left them she had some important work so she left but only after confronting geet about meeting baby's doctor .. she made her understand the necessity and importance of the golden opportunity of the job she was offered and by consulting with baby's doctor she wont neglect her duties or her love towards him infact it will help him may be a better atmosphere will help him…

Geet looked at dhruv and decided to head towards the doctor as she had already taken the appointment…

Here at CHAIL a place near shimla..

SAME DAY EARLY MORNING

Maan had got to know about the vague chances of having his baby alive.. he knew that it is next to possible to found his lost child but it is not impossible…

The detective have given him the news that his wife was traced at a chail which is about 45 kms away from shimla… though maan knew that surbhi is clever to leave any of her whereabouts that he could found but the latest information about her doings had left him stunned..she was a big planner.. she not only had taken his most precious soul with her and not only this she left the baby to die..and know she was manipulating his business deals…

Maan was standing with the new details that he had discovered just today..but still many important qualms were missing .. he knew there was something big that she must be planning and that was the reason she didn't wanted their child… she was all self centred .. maan thought bitterly…

The loss that he had encountered in all these six months was actually due to her.. the monetary loss was nothing in compared to the innocent soul he had lost.. but still his wife whom he once tried to accept with his life and love proved to be a huge mistake…she was not less than any slow poison who was planning for his death…and indeed she must have planned that too…

Maan flipped the pages of the details…

The first project that went into loss was the project he wanted for their unborn child.. it will on his/her name but that wretched woman had made it a big dream… he couldn't believe that she was responsible for changing the quotations …

Maan closed his eye absorbing a familiar pain and anguish within him.. he took a deep breathe..

Maan: maan what is done is done you can't change it neither you can start a fresh now… you need to start tie all those dots that she had broke.. those broken threads will only lead you to your baby …

A tear escaped from his eye.. he was standing near the fireplace from where the warmth was soothing his cold life.. the coldness that has gripped his soul can be only soothe his shattered life…

His whole body was shuddering with the pain that his little life must have gone through.. since the time detective have told him that his baby was made to face the worst phase of the life the most awful weather … he just couldn't hold his senses…

AT 2 PM

MHI HOSPITAL…

Geet was having baby who was still sleeping.. well dhruv was all sleepy and lazy..it was slightly down in the temperature and it was likely for snow fall so geet had consciously covered him in a blanket … and not one but two..and he was sleeping.. with a baby cute smile on his face.. geet kissed his forehead .. and went to meet the doctor…

Doctor checked baby and he started crying feeling cold and lack of his mother's warmth. .. the doctor took his weight and checked his heart beat… the baby was having a certain glow on his face … the way geet was disturbed seeing her dhruv crying she herself was looking that anytime she will cry… even the silent tears had started to gather in her eyes…

Geet : shh..baby chup ho jao.. mumma yahi hai..mumma ka pyara beta..shona beta ..rote nahi he.. baby dekho doctor aunty dhruv ko check kar rahi hain..mera beta toh brave hai na..he will not cry..baby no… please shone mat ro…

The doctor smiled seeing geet trying to make the crying dhruv calm.. though it was usual routine check up but still her every nerve and fibre just started quivering if a single touch hurts her baby…

Geet immediately took the baby and placed him near her heart silently patting his back… he was crying and her heart was tearing with his one cry…

Geet: ssh.. nahi rote bacha …mera shone beta .. dekho dhruv aha beta hain na..good babies don't cry shona..look if dhruv will cry then doctor aunty will say that dhruv is a bad boy..he cries.. finally when her crying dhruv didn't stop she asked her babaji to make him stop…

Geet: babaji.. please dhruv ko chup kara dijiye..i cant see him crying.. please babaji

Doctor was looking at two so lovingly even she is having a daughter of two year but still she was not able to shower this much love to her child whom she nurtured in her womb for nine months….

Doctor: baby you are so lucky to have her as your mother …

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He cooed the baby in his strong arms.. the baby instantly came to his embrace seeked his warmth.. a calmness spread over their face…

" baby where is your mumma.. you know good babies do not stay alone…"




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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
maan's wife has caused him all troubles
geet and dhruv scenes were cute and the bond was unbreakable
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shri12

Awesome part
maan's wife has caused him all troubles
geet and dhruv scenes were cute and the bond was unbreakable
waiting for next



thanks a lot dear 😛

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