MG FF- PARINEETA THREAD #6

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

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ME FIRST 😛

awesome update ASH...

Geet madam back to her self..uff this Anisha still doesn't leave Geet to be happy

Edited by -JEEVANA- - 12 years ago

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

That was superb aishu...

A lot of improvements... I can see so much of positive changes in maan... for sure attending rashmi marriage was a good thing. It made him to get into the reality of life...

And the flashbacks... it gave out so many things... Anisha was insecure with Geet - Maan relation even post marriage... and that being the sole reason of Maan trying to comfort her and losing touch with people around... actually anisha failed to believe in her love... She should have known that maan would not have left her.. If she had believed in him and her love, she wouldnt be so much confused and in fear... And above all she failed to realize that it is not necessary that staying around or being in touch only keep relations alive.. Geet and maan relation never was bound by time or boundaries or distance, which anisha failed to understand... Separation never breaks a relation...

And coming to the present, finally maan is kind of back to some normal self... he has started looking around things, showing interest in family and people around him instead of sulking in his past...

I loved the way he tried to cheer her up by irritating her and the realization of her tension and trying to calm her in his own way... it was fab aish...

Update was awesome blossom and i really cant wait for the next one...

Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Beautiful story...

You have portrayed her emotions beautifully. She could be up one day and down the next day and there is so much emotion flooding through her, yet it all makes sense the way you make us understand her.

Maan's reactions are now getting very endearing. More than him not accepting her as a wife I was upset that they had lost their friendship. I am glad that friendship and care is back in full force.

I loved the way he instigated her to fight him.

You are a very talented writer because you take us on a journey each time into each emotion that your character goes through so wonderfully.

I am really enjoying this story.

Thanks for the update.

Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Thank you...amazing update.

Loved it.

Maan cares...

Wow Anisha n her insecurities...so she did know deep down in her heart...that she would loose Maan is Geet was around...and so she would not even let him leave her...

Poor Geet...feels guilty...

KIds are so cute...and loved maan's technique to get her out of her sad n gloomy mood.

Loved the poem it was a perfect fit...

THanks for hte update

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meettu

@meettu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

loved it

feeling so bad for geet

ya its good for caring for ur wife but avoiding ur friends or i say close friedns its not good..

finally maan is comfortable with geet

great

both angels are soo cute

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

I really don't think anisha could have lost maan even if geet was around

I guess it was her own fitur

hota hain.. insecurities

in the bargain.. maan lost all those yrs with geet

but I guess for geet it was good.. atleast she was saved of seeing her love with some one else

just imagine her pain of seeing maan every day with anisha & enjoy & laugh with their happy moments🤢

umm.. so maan is began to move on..

good for him

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#507

superb update

i feel like anisha baht insecure thi.. she is the main reason geet was away from maan

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

amazing part😊
precap..interesting

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

awesome update

i wish ki compare karte karte hi Maan ko Geet se pyar ho jaaye

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#510

awesum updt...god!!!anish is not leaving geet to be happy even after her(anisha) death...poor geet...maan cares fr hr...dia and namra r so cute...loved it a ton...continue soon...

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