MG SS: A CURSE OR LOVE

Again that pain'that restlessness'' he was burning'his body was on fire'..his soul was burning in guilt telling him that it is the fruit'..

Yes the sweetest bitter fruit of your deeds'..

He screamed ''NOOO!!!!!! Please don't just leave me'' I can't handle it'. Why can't you leave me'. His eyes were red'..bruises and cuts on his hands ankles''why 'why you are doing this to me''.

Please go'just leave me'..

He screamed '

Doing vigorous tai chi'. But nothing can calm him'

Its his fate '.his own doing'..

That he has written in his life'' why did he'why did he voilated her'it was his punishment'the punishment of making her dead/''

Burning himself in remorse somewhere he knew that he can't come to an end'a peaceful end'how can he'when he is already dead hundred years ago'..

IMMORTAL..that's what he is'.

Those pure and divine words are just torturing him'.he curses himself all day every second'. Yes that's what he does'.. she was his soul'his shadow'the companion whom he could have cherished all his life with his love'with his commitment but no'he did what she always dreaded him to do'.

He killed her '. He was the reason of her painful end '' he was the sole cause of her longing for him'' he made fun of her pure and divine love''.he left her to die'..and he did ,'.

She left him'.she left him to make him know what he lost'.. he did lost himself'.he died a painful death '.. adeath which no one could even think off'' her love became a cursing for him'his realisation came when all was over'.

What an irony '.. when he knows the meaning of loosing himself in the ocean of her love then everything was gone'she was gone'.. and today again like every month of this day'' her love is torturing him'.. but to his fate'no pain'.nothing he can feel..thefeeling she took away from him'the emotion of having her with him..she took with her'..

He was crying'.it was blood that was coming'.his tears had turned into her blood that she left for him'' his wounds were no longer paining'but there is a deep ache in the hollow wounded plae where once he could feel something beating'that heart that beats for her''

Yes it beats for her'his love which he love'..his ego'and selfish motives left him nowhere that he couldn't even get a peaceful death''.

Even after being dead of some hundred years he cannot even get to her'' she left him to burn in his own deeds and and the biggest cursing is that he can't even mourn over his loss'.because she didn't want him to be weak'..

He feel again dead again those eyes which were filled with immense love for him came haunting'like saying that this is what you will get maan'..this is what you have reap ''. But my love is always with you'.. you know the way to get away from this painful life''.

Maan again amshed those mirrors hurting his hands'..this was the routine of his pain..his misery that he bear every month'.. the day when she died'the day when he left her alone to die'..

The day when he was being cursed to shatter a lovable soul'''

Nothing has changed'.nothing'.he is the same'.. the same MAAN'.who is repenting his deeds even after his death'.. who is just wanting for this lifeless body to be burnt into his pyre'.but No'.he can't be relived this easily'hurting someone is easy and when you have to repent 'you have to bear the same path with the hurdles of same love which has now turned into pain'..

The pain'. The agony that he will now face which she faced'.. his love will be tested again'

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Maan again smashed those mirrors hurting his hands…..this was the routine of his pain..his misery that he bear every month….. the day when she died…the day when he left her alone to die…..

The day when he was being cursed to shatter a lovable soul………

Nothing has changed….nothing….he is the same….. the same MAAN….who is repenting his deeds even after his death….. who is just wanting for this lifeless body to be burnt into his pyre….but No….he can't be relived this easily…hurting someone is easy and when you have to repent …you have to bear the same path with the hurdles of same love which has now turned into pain…..

The pain…. The agony that he will now face which she faced….. his love will be tested again…

It is true that our sins never let us grow….. the deeds we are done with somewhere caught us….that's what happened with him…..

He was an ordinary man…. A man who too dreamt of a life where his wishes will be fulfilled and it does…his life changed unknown to him when she entered in his life….chahat …. A pure form of love …she was his chahat but he failed to understand her devotion and life ….

Chahat …she never asked him anything….. sacrificed her life , her soul even herself to him…thinking of his love….

But maan failed……

He didn't understand that when you took something you have to repay….. playing and hurting will cause him hell he didn't even thought……

Today is the day chahat died….. leaving him in his remorse….her last words were still ringing in his mind…they were always there like his shadow……

" sachha pyar hi tumhe mukt karega maan….."

He opened his eyesand looked around….everything destroyed…nothing was in its place….. his eyes were blood red…his face was covered with tears.of blood..chahat's heart that bleeded……

He left the room…it was the routine ….his curse that he is paying from last hundred years….

An immortal…a dead body is living with her curse…." HIS LOVE TURNED VENOM FOR HIMSELF" but he didn't regret ….every passing second he love her ……. Chahat that was the name engraved in him…..

Sometimes a small curve on his face when he remember her …with him…. He decieved her but she loved him…her love that he didn't reciprocated till she was alive became a curse…..

MAAN SINGH KHURANA…whom the world fears..no one knows about his background it was just in last few years he emerged as a leading personality…. No one ever asked him….his temper his anger that he masked to hide his true torn self……

It was twelve ….. no one in his senses would go out…it was chilly …cold winds were blowing the atmosphere was not sooting but hauting….. he was walking…his speed… is fast comparable to any normal human being…..he reached a place and opened the huge gate…no one was there…no one….a place…. Covered with trees which were mostly dried….. screeming sounds were coming…..

He can't bear it……closed his eyes….his body shuddered with the tension that was seeping in him…. He wanted to cry to ask forgiveness from his long lost love but nothing was done…..taking slow and heavy steps he reached the hall…everything was there….a big hall….portraits were hanging on the wall…..

He smiled seeing her smiling in the portrait……

But the smile vanished when his punishment started..his body was piercing with needles…unknown ache was there….this pain he never understood……

It was not the loss of the girl who loved him….but it was the love that was waiting for him….. he was known…..

He slowly went to the big curtain hiding a room….and removed the blind…. To see a flower blooming there…it was a white rose…..on her grave….. CHAHAT ( 1850-1870) and the adjacent grame written MAAN SINGH KHURANA ( 1847-1870)…. He looked at the grave where his name was encraved with black ashen letters…. Still from more than hundred years his grave is waiting for him …. While his soul has left him when she died……

Maan went to the flower …..

Every month on this day he found this flower on her grave…it was smiling and blooming like her…. Everything saying to him…." Maan I will die for you….. I can't bear our distance…actually that's what happened….she died….because he was not able to show her that he loved her………….

Maan didn't touch it….. next day it will dried off and will slowly leave its place…..

Maan: I don't want to hurt you chahat now….. I can't …. Jo bhi mene kiya ….. I can't reverse it but I will make sure that I will pay for my sins ….. tumhare pyaar ka mazak udaya that maine….. zindagi ne mera mazak bana diya….zinda lassh bana diya…. Mar kar bhi zinda hun main…..tumhare paas toh nahi aa sakta lekin tumhare liye dard ke in palon ko she kar tumhare pyaar ka ehsaas to le sakta hun……. Saare dard kam hain…iss khudgarj zindagi ko tadpa kar khud ko ye ehsaas dilana chahata hun ki jiss pyaar bhare dil ke maine hazaron tukde kar diye jo sirf mere liye dharakta tha aaj wo dil dharakna bhul gaya ..tumhe khokar maine apna pyaar toh paa liya lekin jindagi ki sabse anmol cheez ko diya …

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Here at the same time two girls were cuddled up in their duvet…since it was very chilly …. So the girls were chatting….

Girl one: pyaar ….. are you crazy ye sab kitabon me acha lagta hai…kisi ke liye apne aap ko kho dena….

Girl two: agar pyaar ibadat ban jaye….. toh sau zindigan kurbaan uss ishq par……

Girl one: geet tu pagal ho gai hai….. inn sab baaton ko chod aur ye soch kal orphange me jo programme hai uska arrangement kiya ki nahi…. Ya you are still waiting for your true love to do sweep you off your feet and take you to his world…and phir saare kaam karwa lena usse…..

Geet: almost the prepations are done…… I have invited top most personalities from their respective fields so that the students will feel that they are no less then them…. And haan….. jo mujhe apni jaan se bhi jyada pyaar karega uske liye main ye jaan bhi de sakti hun…. Ye baat sach hai….

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So how is this sweets

I was feeling bored so thought to type…..

This is something that popped up into my mind …don't know about its future though I know its end….. so do tell me if I should continue this or not….

NOTE: maan is not a vampire but an immortal( a dead body without its soul living on eatrh for more than 100 years…)

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Originally posted by: zariya123

maan immortal yarr
pkyek ki yaad dila di

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

congrates for ss

loved part 1 & 2

superb update

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

Originally posted by: poonamgarg

very nice suhi dear👏

well written loved it😃