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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Fantastic update Aash
👏 👏 👏

U made me cry while reading😭
Geet crying for her Maa was so natural yet heart wrenching🥺
She is so lost nobody to look upto
lonely in the crowd

So much pain
both fighting there respective wars
both trying come up to terms with their tainted past n dicey future😒

Geet trying to put up a brave front
and Khotta getting angry for what😕
on second thoughts does he ever need a reason😡

Dimaag ki batti der se jalti hein
aur tab tak raita phel gaya hota hein

Geet left😲🤔


Merry Christmas
🤗 🤗 🤗

Continue soon
Waiting for New Year Surprise
😃😳



Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
do u hv bucket?????
2 actually...
4 wat????????
silly...one is full of my tears...
other one full of rotten eggs n tomatoes...4 ur idiotic MSK...
gadda...ullu...nalayak...moron...jerk of biggest kind
etc...etc...etc...
still comparing geet n sameera..
hey babajii...wats wrong wid dis guy????????
aankhoon [woh bhi madak jaise ] wala aandha...
precap seems gud ull think i m crazy...nope i want maan 2 feel pain of seperation n rejection...
again jerk...jerk...jerkkk
nice update btw...
mmmuuuaaahhh...
ps: its new day now...
MERRY CHRISTMAS...

Edited by lively-piia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Sharma ke Chuppi me haan hota hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sweetkj


yes the one who is talking..!! 🥱


The best at whatever I do😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
I didn't notice NP in the picture until I read your note below it! 😆

Geet is a woman crushed. Brutally! Sympathy is what I feel for her because I don't think I can ever empathise her pain! How it feels when you've reached a limit. A limit for the test of your self confidence. A blow to your confidence and the limit to endure..! How it feels when the feeling of being unwanted surrounds you. When everything and every person in life you've ever wanted to be with, intentionally or unintentionally, treats you like an unwelcome burden or intruder for so long that you can't take it any more. I cannot, ever for a moment, blame her for not listening to Maan this one time. It's ironic, though, how I've always learnt that just when you give up on something, you're the closest to your destination! The same happened here. Just when Maan accepted his fault and planned to make everything alright - again - Geet gave up!

Jitna bhi Maan ka part tha iss chapter mein, I felt a myriad of emotions towards him. I was amused when he had the nerve to blame Geet for being irresponsible. I was clicking my tongue when he started to be irrational in his anger. At that point, I remembered an elder saying 'ghussa aatey hi aqal khidki se baahar chali jaati hai'! Then his ego came in, preventing him to clear his stance, I got angry on him! Typically MSK! Then when he was remembering his past (sort of), I pitied him. The man had to go through so much that he can be - though not completely - justified for not being able to trust another woman! And when he came to accept the fact that Geet wasn't at fault, I felt respect for him. No jootis for this! 😆 But he was man enough to accept his fault! 😳 When he was talking to Geet's sleeping form, I so wished that she was awake and listening to him say those words! Alas! Some things aren't meant to be!

I can say that this isn't near the present yet! Geet might have gone somewhere but she'll be coming back! After all, a lot still has to happen! 😃

Thanks for the update, Aash! I loved it! Beautifully written! 😊
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sweetkj


acting...!! acting..!! 👏
me acting kar rahi hu.. 😲

mere emotions mere sentiments.. all this is acting for you..!! 😲😡😭


👏

Aap movies me kyu nahi try karti😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Late latif doc...

Diwali update Christmas maine de rahi hai

Diwali kaha se aaayi 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Itni excited hogai k naam ki spelling bhi correct nhi likhi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: WhitePearls

why the extra butter😲 not that m complaining 😛

U need all the butter u can lay ur hands on Cindy😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Sirf bookmark hota hai ke padhti bhi hai😳

haan main tum jaisi hoon... padti hoon, like karti hoon magar comment nahi karti... jaise ki tum meri karmas of love ko pad rahi ho magar kuch ata pata nahi 😡... afterall hum dost hue toh ek jaisi honi chahiye na 😃

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