SS: Marked As Mine updated pg 12 pt 3

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What Happens when a sweet innocent girl has been marked by a creature. Once marked, she will be his forever...He has marked her to be his forever. Noone else can touch her. Her heart is his. Her scent her body, her life is his. He has marked her and now noone can touch her...


Maan a werewolf ..Alpha male, leader of the pack

Geet an innocent 20 year old first year uni student..

Meera: Geet's best friend.

Adi: Maan fellow werewolf friend.

Vikram: werewolf, Maans enemy wants to overthrow him. Has tried and failed.. Has been banished

Prologue coming and Part 1 coming soon x
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Part 1


It was a hot day and Geet was waiting for the bus to take her home from University. She was a young 20 year old beautiful average girl. She lived with her best friend Meera and was studying business and finance at the University of New Delhi. She sighed as she looked at the time. It was almost rush hour and if the bus didn't come before the rush hour, she might not even get a seat.

Meanwhile across the street, Maan was walking with Adi looking for Vikram a rogue werewolf in the pack. Werewolves lived with humans and looked like humans. They would transform during hunting time into wolves to hunt for animals in the woods. They never attacked humans. They also had a few powers as well. Humans did not know of their existence. They lived in conformity with humans. Maan was trying to find Vikrams scent when he smelt something so alluring to addictive that his mind went hazy. He turned to the left and saw a girl. She was beautiful. Dressed in a light green salwaar kameez with her hair opened. She had light brown eyes and was smiling talking to an old lady . Maan heart starting beating loudly and his hormones went into overdrive.

'Adi' He growled. Adi was shocked as he heard Maan's wolf growl. Adi turned to Maan and said

'Sir, you can't transform yet.. Its broad daylight and it's a public place' Maan looked at him and then the girl and said

'Her.. She is mine.. I need to mark her.. the wolf in me has chosen her.. I need to mark her..Before anyone else does..Vikram will know that I want to mark her.. He can feel my scent..She is mine Adi.. I will take her to be mine..' Maan said trying to control himself.

'But Sir, she is human'' Adi proclaimed.

'It doesn't mean humans cannot mate.. I can see her heart Adi'That means.. she is my mate.. she is my partner for eternity.. I am going to mark her today right now Adi' Maan growled. Maan quickly before he even knew it was behind Geet. The bus at that moment came and Adi saw Maan follow Geet into the bus. Maan kept sniffing Geet. He could smell her sweet scent and could smell the scent of her blood. He was allured by it. He knew he had to have her soon. But before that he had to mark her. He could smell a horrid scent nearby meaning Vikram was near. Maan realised he had to be careful as he marked her. He saw Geet take a seat and looked at her.

'May I sit here?' He asked looking at Geet. Geet smiled and looked at him and replied

'This is a public seat.. why are you asking me? Off course you can sit here' she smiled as Maan sat down. He smirked as he knew very soon he will mark her. He will have her without her permission.

'Hi Geet' She introduced herself. Maan smiled and replied

'Maan Singh Khurana' Geet eyes widened in shock.

'The Maan Singh Khurana..Khurana group of Industries owner..' Geet proclaimed widening her eyes.Maan looked at her hazel eyes whom were only allowed to see him.

'Yes why are you surprised' He asked. He looked at the time and saw it was getting dark soon. Within 3 minutes will be sunset. He tried to read Geet's mind and realised her stop is in a few minutes.

'Ha your in a bus that's why.. I mean your car?' She asked innocently. Maan smiled and was happy that this beautiful innocent girl will be his forever.

'It broke down.. Anyways Geet what about yourself?' Maan was finding it hard to control himself. He could feel Vikram was very close by. He had a feeling he was waiting near Geet's stop.

'Me, well I lost my parents 10 years back.. and don't be sorry, because I know they are with Babaji and are better up there .. And I live with my best friend Meera.. and Studying Business and finance and want to get married before I'm 22 and still waiting for my prince charming.. Think I just gave you my autobiography and my stops here' Geet said smiling. Maan looked at her and said

'Geet let me accompany you' Maan said. Geet looked at him and was worried. She knew he was a well known businessman and if anything happened to her, if he did anything to her, then he would go free because of contacts.

'Me.. I' Geet stumbled. Maan knew what she was thinking. The sun had now set.

'Don't worry Geet. I just want to talk to you' Geet nodded and put her hand in her bag and held the pepper spray tight. They both got of the bus and Geet and Maan walked towards her colony. Maan sensed Vikram was very near. Maan growled. Geet heard him and looked at him.

' Mr Khurana are you alright?' Geet asked a bit scared of him. She noticed that his eyes were going dark and his demeanour was changing. His face was becoming rigid.

'YOUR MARKED AS MINE GEET' He growled furiously at her before grabbing her in a lone corner and biting down with his sharp teeth breaking into her neck biting and sucking her blood. Geet was scared lost and shocked.

Maan smirked as he tasted her blood. She was now marked as his. He lapped up the flowing blood and closed her wound. But the mark of his teeth were there. Maan smirked. Geet looked at him and smiled

'Mr Khurana.. what happened?' Geet asked. She had not realised what happened nor that Maan had marked her.

'Nothing Geet'I think your home now' Geet smiled and waved bye as she went in.

Maan turned around and saw Vikram.

'Vikram I win'.' Maan smirked

'No you don't .. you might have marked her Maan.. But I will get her'before you make her yours..her virginity will be mine and your mark will have no effect'' Vikram growled. Maan lept into his wolf form making sure no one was near and attacked Vikram as Vikram did the same But as Maan was more powerful Maan won the fight. He turned back to human form and said

'Tomorrow.. Vikram this time tomorrow.. ' Maan stated as he lept to Geet's window.

PRECAP: Geet in a mansion locked in.. All she could see for miles was a meadow.


Part 2 pg 7

Part 3 pg10


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Edited by sweetysumaiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome yaar..
just fab start
so pm me
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Oooh! A supernatural story! It was very well written. Can't believe that just marked her like that.Looking forward to reading the next chp.Update soon😊
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great start dear

good to see you here again
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intresting 😊

continue soon😃
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welcome back
that is awesome
and update possession as well
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part 1
awesome dear...
its gonna be passionate...
cont soon...
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Awesome
Cont soon
Do update ur other works
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys this SS will be short... I shall update soon.. Hopefully weekend... About 8 parts maybe 10.

Promo

'Hello is anyone there open the door' Geet called out scared not knowing where she was and how she got there. She knocked the door worriedly and fear started to grip her heart when she heard a rustle and the turning of the key in the lock. The door opened and there stood two girls dressed in peach dresses. One girl was holding a white dress and another girl had a tray of fruit.
'Sir asked us to convey his apology to you for not being able to see you at this moment, he is overseeing the preparations of tonights ceremony which shall begin at sunset in a few hours. We have brought you some fruit for your nourishment as you will need it tonight my lady and also please be dressed in this.' One of the girls passed the dress into her hands. Geet looked at the dress and was amazed it was beautiful. However she was still confused to what was happening.
'We shall be back to help you dress for your ceremony, but please let me lead to you to the bathing room to prepare you...we shall assist you in...'
'Wait wait hold on, whats going on? Assist me to what have a bath get dressed? What ceremony? Why am i here who is your sir?' Geet quesitioned the two girls.
'Why Maam your bonding ceremony tonight, you have been marked by our alpha cheif and you shall bond with him tonight and mate with him as you now belong to him'
'What...bond marked, mate what are you talking about, i am not sleeping with anyone... Marked what mark what are you saying'
'You are to be bonded tonight, in other words married to our sir as he has chosen you to be his,, with or without your permission and noone can defy or run from him nor his rule.. You are here in your new life forever. now maam please let us help you' The lady replied.
'Go to hell' Geet shouted as she pushed the two girls and ran.

Maan was watching this and smirked 'my bride is fiesty,.. Will need to tame her down...oh she doing a runner.. She can't run from me.' He smriked as he walked towards her scent.


Geet reached the door when an arm grabbed her waist.
'Sweetheart your mine' He pulled her towards his chest kissing her throat. Geet was unable to move as he paralysed her to his will,
'Ladies get her dressed we have not much time, dusk approaches and Vikram and his other rogues are coming' Maan passed Geet to the ladies.

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