MY INNOCENT DOLLFF#2/CH9P13/thread 3 added pg 1

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

part 8
nice part...
poor Geet...
feel so sorry for her...
hate Maan so much...
cont soon dear...

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

amazing update di

maan is so lost in his guilt

he dint know that his one act can do so much devastation

how could he know it too

geet alwayz acts very rough n tough

but in reality she is a glass doll

who is very sensitive n can break with anyone's mere touch

maan was possessive about her

when he saw the waiter staring at her

he couldn't control his anger

n geet was there to bear the brunt of his anger

though i dnt blame maan

he was after all just possessive about her

but what he did was bad

he went over in his anger

which ended up hurting geet too much

the hospital is in such a mess

itz not even fit to be called a hospital

if they can't treat the patient properly

then there is no use of taking that patient

as in such unhygienic conditions that patient's health will just deteriorate more

maan has never seen such things

and itz affecting him even more

coz he can't bear the fact that geet is in such a dump

because of him n his act

maan craved for nothing in his life

except his parents time and love

which i guess he was always deprived of

maan dint even let the ward boy touch geet

he cares for her but just doesn't know how to show it

veer is confused seeing his bro worrying for some unknown girl

but he doesn't know that this girl can change his bro completely

maan is in MSK mode now

veer has to save geet at any cost

warden is so cheap

she doesn't care that tabby health is at risk

just because of her carelessness

but after knowing what MSK can do

now she wants to go show maan that she cares

so cheap n disgusting

veer's words surely created an impact on maan

waiting for the next update di

update soon

waiting eagerly

muahhh

luvvv yaaa

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myramabin

@myramabin

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

wow next maan will take care of tabby cant wait

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

she needs care...she needs love...

hope she gets well soon...

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Maan is so upset seeing Geet in that state.. Hope Tabby will be good soon...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional update! Maan shocked seein hospital n Geet's condition! He takes Geet to KH! Veer tells Maan dat Geet needs care! Maan reflevt on wat happened! Well written! update soon

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Nivedita

@Sailor_N

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Dat dirty place is not worthy to say hospital...
now dr. & warden is gone...
what Maan do with dem god knows...
Geet's condition is still serious...
do some thing babaji...
nice update...