Pt13'Forbidden Fire'Thrd7 Pg1

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

first of all awesome update
nd d last scene was totally unimaginable of maan pushing geet
do do cont soon loving it more nd more
thnx fr d pm fr all the three parts :)
nd i hv read touched too :) its fab
thnx fr d part 4 pm too

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afsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Di plz open blog on wordpress

Plzzz

Awesum updates

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

difficult for geet to understand he helped or hurt her

but maan was right she should have done what he asked her to do that moment

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singh24

@singh24

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

He pushed her...

What type of man he is...?????😕

Geet is going to die...

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lehr

@lehr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

omg maan pushed her 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

hi thanks 4 da pms n intense updates! Maan tells Geet to go bt she does nt! Well written! update soon

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

congratulation for new thread
awesome, brilliant parts
loved them

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Mona

@mona1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

awesome parts loved them all continue soon thanks for the pm!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

guess i better go to your blog and check it our there too huh
what was that confusion
does he himself know whats he doing
and why
whats with the past
looks like he is even more unpredictable than i thought before
and once again you have robbed me of coherent thoughts
wow how do you do it dear
cheers for pm
okay so didnt see the end coming
why didnt she do what he asked her to do
and is she dead
or is she still alive
and what made the devil a devil
and is he really a devil or there something more at work here
okay i have gotta stop spouting nonsense here
sorry for confusing you with my comments

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago