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Posted: 11 years ago


part-21



wow lovely emotional.. te way geet felt she is alone in tis world, maan u only brought her from her shell and again u urself pushed her.. te way dadi asking abt geet and my maan avoiding was lovely .. te way dadi ki outburst making my buddhu maan to realize wat he did in his gussa was lovely emotional.. now my maan babu is going to manofly his geet but will she accept him again like before..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
hopefully now maan will understnd geet
atleast toda toh footage khana banta hi hai geet ka isly todi nok-jhok k bad geet ko maf kardena chahiye.
And more importantly maan ko bhut pyar se aur ache apologise karna chaiye geet ko 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan ne to hights hi paar kar di ab kya fayeda. Now he is regretting coz use truth pata chal gaya hai.. Dadi ne sai sunaya use..
But i want him to repent properly and Geet wont forgive him easily this time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its so painful yaar... Mujhe roona aa raha hai part 20 n 21 padh ke... How can he do this to geet... Geet kitna care karti hai daadi ka aur maan ne usse itna kuch suna diya ;(
update soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good atleast Daadima realised there's something wrong
thank God she's knocked some sense into Maan
but Geet is too hurt and due to that she's gone back into feeling lonely
What's the use of repenting now
An arrow once released and Words once said cannot be taken back
So Maan will have to do a lot more to win Geet's heart back now
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-2 2

Maan jindagi mai rishte banana bht asaan hota h but une nibhana bht mushkil, bht kam log hote h jine jindagi mai itna acha humsafar n itna pyaar karne wala humsafar milta h,pls maan bhagwaan ne aapko jo mauka diya h use gawaiye nahi,,,kahin aisa na ho jab tak aap samjhe tab tak bhagwan aapse apki sabse pyaari cheez cheen chuka ho,uske diye iss tofe ki kadar karna seekhiye maan zindgai dusra mauka baar bar nai deti..saying this ddai ma left maan;s hand n maan went deep in his thought recalling all days events n specially there morning meeting n his hurtfull words n her tears thinking about which his heart pierced maan closed his eyes in regrett n left the room to see geet

Maan rushed out of the room n went towards there room to apoligies,when he entered what he saw made his heart pierced with pain n guilt,geet sat there sleeping near the window with her head on the window pain with tear marks on her face...it looked like she had been crying from a long time

Maan went towards her n touched her shoulder but seeing no response n geet's condition he decided to not wake her up

Maan thought to wait till morning thenn he ll talk to get n will apoligies to her for all his mistakes,he went ahead n picked get in his arms n bought her near the bed n made her sleep n left the room...

Maan sat on the swing in the ggarden thinking about all the things all the words he said to get n realised how wrong he was to say all that,he realised that it was not geet but he himself was the one who acted like an insensitive jerk,he knew how sensitive geet was towrads her fathers death n today he has hurted her alott by bringing that topic

Maan sat there thinking n pondering over all the events n thinking how will he face geet next day how will he appoligies to her...

The next morning when geet got up she felt weird when she looked around her that's whn she realised that she was sleeping on her bed n wondered how come she came here,geet was just lost in her thoughts when she saw maan coming in the room n smilling n wishing her goodmorng,she wanted to smile back wish back but something in her stopped her,she sat there like a zombie without replying him n looking at him starangly

Maan came n sat beside her looking down not knowing how to start n ask sorry,geet looked at him for a while but seeing no response from him she decided to leave,geet was about to get up when maan held her hand n gestured her tto sit taking a deep breath he started,geet u kno I m not really good with words n I don't know how to say it but I knw what ever I said yesterday was wrong n m m really sorry...geet cut him short n got up facing her back to him she said

U u were not wrong u don't hav to apoligies it was not ur mistake it was mine...I forgot where I stand,I forget that for what m here...n most importantly I forget that m no one to u guys n m alone in this world n I m just here coz of a deal n I understand that I shouldnot hav forgotten my limits n m sorry for that,u need not worry now I ll take care of the fact that I ll not cause u or ur family nay pain from now on...m really sorry maan...said geet controlling hher tears n rushed out of the room while maan sat there like a statue hearing all that she said,its now he realised how deeply he has hurt her,but now the damage was done n there was no point n sitting n mourning over it now what he needed to to do was to appligies for his mistakes n maan made his mind that he ll do whatever it will take to manofy geet

While geet went to terace n cried her heart out

Dad y y u left me alone dad y??/ u knew I loved u soo much I just don't wanat to stay alone dad pls take me with u plss papa...I feel soo alone here I hav no one here pls take me away I don't want to stay hhere...plss plss take me way... cried geet sitting on the teraace n didn't knew when she lost her concious due to fatigue n weekness

Maan sat on the breakfast table lost in his thoughts waiting for geet when nakul bought his brkfast

Saab brkfast

Nakul geet madam kahan h??

Saab pta nai maine une subah se dekha nai

Theek hai jao jaak une brkfast k liye bula k lao

Ji said nakul n went to call geet

After 5 mins nakul came back

Kya hua geet kahan h

Chote saab get madam toh room mai nai h

Room mai nai h matlab

Nakul stood there looking down not knowing what to reply

When maan got up n rushed to there room to see geet,he checked the whole room washroom but geet was no were,getting worried he started to search in in the mansion when suddenly sumthing flashed his maind n he ran towards the terace n what he saw the made his heart stopped geet lyed the unconcious on the terace floor maan ran towards her n patted her cheeks

Geet geet getup geet,getting no response he picked her up in his arms n bought her down to there room n called doctor

Maan stood outside there room wating for doctor to come

After checking geet as doctor came,maan saked

Doctor ab geet kaisi h ye use achanak se kya ho gaya

Maan lagta h geet ne 24 hr se jada se kuch nai khaya h n the lack of rest n stress ki wajah se uski ye condition h

I knw k wo kitni careless h wahjan hospital mai bhi beehi ka dhyaan rakhne k chakkar mai many toimes I saw bher neglecting her meals n not sleeping but ghar aane k baad asa kyun kiya usne

Maan stood there having no words to express his grief...

Ab wo theek toh h na

Haan ab chinta ki koi baat nai h maine use injection de diya h she gain her concious in sumtime n then pls just feed her something light with juice n the give her these medicines n please try to keepp her aay from stress

Ji doctor uncle thanku

Doctor patted maan's shouldr n left while maan sat near geet totally asahmed of himself thinking aboout his allegations n his accusations while there geet took such a good care of daddi forgetting about her health n what he gave her in return just nothing but accused her for bieng irresponsible...

that's it for now

ll b waiting for ur response

thanx alott guys such a wonderful comments n llikes,really thanx alott it really means alott to me


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Posted: 11 years ago
Feeling soo bad for geet when she said she has no one
Maan did very big mistake
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Posted: 11 years ago
Feeling bad for geet
Maan wanted to apologize but geet said that she kniws her place & won't bother him
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kamina abb gaya sorry bolne huh!
Grr..
Me so much angry on maan
He always comes in the conclution witout reading any description
Poor geet...he has hurt her so deeply
Now she fainted!!
She eat anything in taking care of dadima :

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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan's words have caused deep scars on Geet's heart and her calling herself alone shows it now
Its going to be very difficult for Maan to get her out of it all

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