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Hinal.94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
poor maan he is worried n he has to bring geet out of the shock

waiting to see how he does that?
Ash1991 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
geet in the state of shock n needs to cry...
waiting to see how maan brings her out of this shock...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful dear its really great work
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update my poor Angel still in shock... Maan doing well to bring back her to normal life.
I hope she will b fine soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago


Geet is in shock of her father's death...

Maan is worried for her health...

very painful update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
he has started to feel for her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice ff
just read all the parts in one go
interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-10

Maan sat near the unconscious geet caressing her hair,thinking about her & her loss.it was almost 2 hrs n still there was no movement in geet.maan got up n went to doctor

"excuse me ''

''mr.khurana pls aaye na kahiye mai aapki kya help kar sakta hun??''

''doctor geet its been more than 2hrs but wo abi tak hosh mai nai aayi h n uski condition mai bhi koi improvement nai hai''

''relax mr.khuranna,mrs.khurana kaffi week h n humne unhe neend ka injection b diya hai jiski wajah se wo abi so rai hai,there is nothing to worry about t who jald hi hosh mai aa jayengi''

''okh so doctor mai geet ko apne saath ghar le jana chahunga''

''ji???''

''Yes doctor aap pls discharge papers ready karwaiye I want to take my wife home''

''but…''

''don't worry doctor mai uska pura dhyan rakhunga''

''okh fine mai discharge papers ready karwata hun''

''thanx doctor''

Maan went back to geet's room when nurse came n told him that the discharge papers were ready n he need to sign them.

Maan went to sign the papers,after completing all the discharge formalities maan came back n took geet in his arms n settled her in the backseat of the car.as maaneet reached home daddima sat there worrying about geet….

''Maan geet kaisi hai ab n yeh apne unhe aise kyun uthaya hua hai???kya hua hai inhe bte???''

''Daddi ma relax geet abi behosh hai abi thodi der mai hosh aa jaega use.mai isse room mai le jaa raha hun,aap bhi pls room mai jaa kar arram kijiye''

''but maan geet???''

''daddima aap phikar mat karo mai hunb geet ke liye mai dhyan rakhunga uska aap pls apna khyaal rakhiye n room mai jaiye u need rest daddima''

''Theek hai bte lekin agar aapko kuch bhi chaiye ho toh hume bataiyega n agar geet ko hosh aaye toh hume jarur bataiyega''

Maan just nodded n n took geet towards there room ,maan settled geet on the bed n adjusted the comforter on her n sat beside her caressing her head looking at her pale face,it was after sometimne that when geet again started feeling restless n started moving in her sleep murmering something

''dad,dad pls don't leave me!!!''

''How will I live without you dad,dad dad….''

Due to geet's continuous murmerring n mnoving maan's sleep broke he looked towards her n caressed her head,

''geet geet realx see its me maan,geet open ur eyes see itys me maan here''

That's when geet screamed dad see maan dad maan dad kahan hain??? Unhe roko na maan ,maan see dad abhi yahin the pls maan maan pls unhe rokona unhe bolona k who muje chod k nai jaa sakte pls maan maan kuch karona maan tum kuch bolte kyun nai maan pls

Maan shook geet geet geet relax n listen to me tumhare dad yahan nai hai

''nai maan tum nai jaante dad abi yahin the'' wo abi said get pointing towards the door

Maan just closed his eyes to control his temper n helplessness seeing geet geet in such state,he looked towards her n gave her a hard shake,shutup geet just shutup n listen to me very carefully

Geet stopped speaking n looked towards maan with her doe shaped eyes

''geet ur dad is not her n he will never come back do you get me geet he will never come back bcoz he is no more''

''DO U GET ME HE IS NO MORE''

''nai tum,,,saying this geet completely broke down crying maan mere dad maan,mere dad muje mere dad wapis la do maan muje mere dad wapis la do pls,

Maan just hugged her while geet completely brokedown crying,the loss of her dad was very big for geet,geet dis everything just to save her dad she even married maan to save her dad but now accepting that her dad was no more was difficult for her he was her whole world n she lost him today forever.geet cried cried whoile nihht while maan sat there hugging her consoling her.

He knew what it meant to loose ur close ones n specialy ur parents,he has also faced the same stage once in his life when he lost his mom n dad he remembered how broken he felt but he had dadi to console him n stand by him,but geet was alone n one was there for her to console her to understand her pain her lss….it was in the early hours of the morning when geet slept on maan's chest only getting totally exhausted.maan looked down n noticed her tear stained pale face,finally geet has slept.he setteled her in the comforter n went to his exercise room

With his every move he remembered geet n her tear stained face,he kept on thinking what was it about geet that he cared for her soo much why the hell those tears effect him soo much why why he was feeling helpless seeing her state why dammit why????why he cared soo much about her feelings about her loss.no it s nothing its just nothing main yeh sab sirf insaaniyat k liye kar raha hun kyunki usne meri dadi k liye itna kuch kiya hai sirf isliye mai yeh sab kar raha hun uske liye haan sirf yahi waha hai,are koi wajah nai hai…maan was not ready to accept his feelings the change in his life.

Main use apni zindagi mai koi bhi badlaw nai karne dunga,who koi nai lagti meri koi bhi nai.maine bhi apni zindagi mai akele ladna seekha hai n use bhi seekhna hoga.main uska sahara nai banuga nai banuga mai uska sahara.aaj nai toh kal who apni jindagi me akele jina n sambhalna seekh jaegi…

Haan yai sajhi hai main use apni zindagi ka hissa nai bane dunga use koi badlaw nai karne dunga,muje koi farak nai padta use koi farak nai,mai use apni zindagi uske hissab se nai chalane dunga bilkul nai kabi nai

Okhg guys that's it for now

ll b waiting for ur response

pls press like n comment if u like the update

thanx everyone for all ur precious likes n comments they really mean alott to me

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Posted: 12 years ago
I just love it..

Maan and geet are awesome

Update thes next part ASAP.
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow lovely emotional update.. te way my maan bringing his geet to home and te way he is taking care of her and te way geet ki nightmare and my maan making his geet to realize tat her dad is no more and geet is breaking down was so lovely emotional.. te wya gete sleeping on my maan i chest and my maan soothing her was lovely.. now my buddhu maan started to fight between his heart and mind..i love te update

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