~Kashmakash~ Maaneet SS Thread2 pt10 pg139 jan11

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Makpie

@Makpie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

MAAAN😔.Q Q Q?
y Maan did like ds?he cdn't rmbr anything? whn he realise it ll b worst 2 digest.

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sweetie_flowers

@sweetie_flowers

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

thank u thank u thanksss alot for the diii😃😃

ufff...maan didnt even remember that he slapped😲

poor geet...😭😭

waitng for moree updates diii😊

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DoItAlready

@DoItAlready

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

jus read all da parts... luvin it<3

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Next part on the way. YAY.

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maureen84

@maureen84

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

wow!!!!!!!!!!congrates for new thred muski...
such a beautiful SS...i,m spellbound...
i wanna point out to a minor mistake in the poem.
in the last stanza.it shud be talkh haqaiq,not talaq haqaiq
talkh haqaiq means bitter thruth...correct it n keep going lots of love to munchkins
waiting eagarly for more to come

Edited by maureen84 - 12 years ago

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Dia

@--Dia--

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Awesome update muski.. You wrote the difference in thoughts very well..
Waiting for the next.. 😊

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

congo for new thread...
n nyc part...
geet was right maan never cared... he never cared abt hr emotions, her feelings, or any other thing...
he never paid attention to her... tabhi toh he thinks ki aaj tak aisa.kuch hua he nai jiski wajah se geet ne yeh decision liya...