~Kashmakash~ Maaneet SS Thread2 pt10 pg139 jan11 - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago
when he wants to satisfy his physical need she is not kid but to have one she is kid...how convenient for him to think according to his needs...I hate Maan...
Edited by adorablerujul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muski, u r super as usual my dear, miss u a lots aaj kal in the forum, hope u r doing well...


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Posted: 12 years ago
omg this is so heart wrenching her pain so unbearable truly depicting kashmakash in every sense
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


na hum bewafa the
na tum bewafa the
kasoor tha to,bas tha uss faasale ka
jo pahle pal se hi
hum dono ke darmiyaan the


tum ne kabhi kuch bhi to mujh se kaha nahi
aur agar kabhi kuch kaha hoga toh
un faasalo ke kaaran maine kabhi kuch bhi sunna nahi
aur kua sunti,
kyu sunti,
mai uss kahi gayi baat ko
kyoki jab maine huch sun na chaaha aapse
tab to kabhi ,aap ne kuch kaha nahi

aur ab
jab aap ne kaha ki
hum aapke hai
jism se rooh tak
din se raat tak
dil ki aakhiri saas tak
dhadkan ki aakhri aawaz tak

to mai chah kar bhi ,sun na saki
saare sapne dobaara dekhu
aisi himmat,khud mai bun na saki
ab
yeh sab jaan kar
teri har baat maan kar
ek ajeeb si kashmakash mai phas gayi hu ki


na tum bewafaa the
na hum bewafaa the
kasoor tha to tha
bas uss faasale ka
jo hameesha se,hum dono ke darmiyyan the


beautiful

pain clearly oozes out.. in words..geet ke dil ka hal
thanks



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Posted: 12 years ago
maan is soo selfish 😡
he jus came fo bis conclusions
he dint even ask geet wat went wrong
he dint even notice geet taking pills 😡
and wat is that he is the sole desicion maker. :/
and he felt geet matured all of a sudden wen she came to doc ff yearly checkup 😡
i really hate dis maan geet
plzz dont make me hate maan 😔
update soon
luvyaa diii ❤️
huggss n kisses to munchkins 🤗❤️🤗.
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a fab update!!!!

So much of pain... Its not that Maan has not felt for her... he had realized her pain... But just that he was never there to soothe her pain... he never expressed his care... and though he thinks he decided everything for her good, his decisions without consulting her views were wrong...
There has been so much of communication gap.. infact no communication that has led to so much of kashmakash... He still doesnt seem to understand he real pain.. again he is doing the same mistake of assuming it in his own way...
Very beautifully written update muski.. especially the part where he holds her hand for comfort and Geet's longing for that soothing for so long... omg... it was just brilliant...

Loved the update to bits... cant wait for the next.. .continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Each n evry line in Geet's POV is a reality.

Its as if m reading abt realities dat almost evry woman has to go thru in India n othr developing countries.

Its a reality check.

Hatsoff to u.
U hav writtn it in such a manner dat fiction n fact has blended awesomely.


Thank u, A BIG THANK YOU for writing on dis concept.


Applauds...!!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
hi muskan di,i m sonia.i m new 2 this forum.i was unable 2 be in this forum just bcoz of my medical admission test.but i always used 2 read all ur post and peep into ur blog.2day 4 the 1st time iam going 2 tell u that u r such an amazing writter.love u.


oh,one thing more.pls think abt aparichit.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful dear... poor geet ...idiot maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz update dear
waiting dear

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