VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 02 - Page 66

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Wwooowww...Maaneet ki shaadi..
Sameera ka Maan ko challenge...
Precap is ssooo scaryyy...
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Note-Guys am going for training for 3 months and will be available in the weekends only.I thought will type my ff's in weekend and continue u guys entertaining..lekin jab meri ud's ko koi padne waala hi nahin hai toh mein kya karoon...Agar aap logon ko meri stories padna pasand nahin hai toh kehdiya hota mein kiseeko bhi nahin bhejti PM...but yun aise silent readers banke mat baithiye...now i cant tolerate this silent war.Mere loyal aur regular readers..am sorry for stopping this story abruptly here but am truly hurted with the like and responses.Mere regular readers aap log agar haan kahoge toh mein isse continue karoonga mere blog pe..ab se mere saare works will be shifted to my blog as no one is here to read my stories and am sure my loyal readers u have interest to read my story and am sure u will support me in my blog too.Now i cant continue my any of the stories here...jahan sirf read karte ho like aur comment karna toh door ki baat hai meri PM kholne ka bhi patience nahin hai...My favourite writers..am keeping this account for u guys so please dont stop PMing me i will read ur updates and comment here..so u wont be having any one shot of ur loyal reader...My ongoing stories Venomous Desire,Colors Of Love,Shaitan Ki Pari,Do Sapne,Jannat,Romeo and Juliet unedited part,Enchanted Devil(started a new dark story in my blog,will give u guys the link below this post)will continued in my blog and here is the way to follow my ff's...I have created a page in FB-https://www.facebook.com/SMaanGeetFanfictions or u can join my group-https://www.facebook.com/groups/105839309573487/ or u can join my blog-https://srirmg.wordpress.com/ or u can follow me in twitter too-https://twitter.com/maaneet0887



Here is the last part of my story in IF...😳










RECAP

Maaneet finished their dinner and Maan started kissing Geet giving his intentions and Geet cutely give in embracing him inside her warmth.Both carried away to the level of ecstacy and felt themselves each other as complete.

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PART 24

Maaneet spent some quality time with each other drowning themselves in their passion.Maan dint leave a second to love her while Geet was blessed to have him as her husband.Time after time Maan became more and more naughty and would love her there and then making her blush furiously.Maaneet were enjoying in their own world when in SM,Sameera was scheming to stop the marriage.She was thinking and thinking and thinking but every time her good conscious tried to stop her by doing this.But still Sameera thought of destroying her innocent sister's life.She was thinking about this when she slept on the couch only gradually on that time she dreamt a dream''Maaneet wedding''.Sameera stood holding the gun and said,"Geet..tumhaare hote huve mein Maan ke kareeb nahin jaa sakti isiliye tumhe marna hi behtar hoga'..!"Geet was scared and pleaded,"Dee please meine aapse kya cheena hai ki aap mere upar itni bura bartaav karti hai'.please dee agar aap mujhe maaregi toh aap phasegi'..aur aap jail mein sadne ki naubat aayegi'please dee'.!"Sameera recoiled the gun and pulled the trigger.Bullet travelled in the light speed and..it pierced Geet's heart which said only one name,"Maan'.!"Maan screamed,"Gggeeettt''.!"Maan held Geet's collapsing body and Maan saw Sameera with blood red eyes who saw him with victorious smile.

Maan came forward dragging the unconscious Geet and said snatching the gun from Sameera,"Jab meri Geet nahin hai toh tum bhi nahin rahogi'!"And before Sameera move she too was shot in her head and she too collapsed and here the sleeping Sameera got up sweating badly.Sameera saw around her and clutched her chest to calm herself.Sameera was scared of Maan and she wanted to take the plan very slowly.Sameera said to herself,"Nahin Geet mein tumhe itni asaani se nahin maaroongi..mein toh tumhe tadpa tadpaakar maaroongi..tumhe itna majboor kardoongi ki tum mere paas hi aana padega marne ke liye'mere pyaar ko cheena hai tumne'mein tumhe nahin chodungi'..!"Sameera said herself but was addressing Maan,"Maan..tum jo chaahe tum karo..jitni Geet ko apne baahon mein sambhaaloge sambhaalo..lekin mein usse humesha humesha ke liye nasht karke rakhdoongi..usne mere pyaar ko cheena hai..mein use khush nahin rehne doongi'.!"Saying this Sameera slept back but on that time only Maan got up feeling totally restless.He felt restless as if someone squeezing his neck making him out of breath.

Maan opened his shirt buttons to expose his chiseled chest and greek god body.He turned and saw that Geet had slept peacefully beside him smiling in her sleep.He saw her swollen lips which was the mark of his passion and her slender neck which was full of love bites.Maan chuckled seeing her glowing face and slept pulling her inside his embrace and seeing her angelic innocent face.Maan softly pecked her forehead while Geet stirred in her sleep more clinging to him.Next morning both Maaneet got up early and got ready for wedding.Veer had sent the wedding attire for them. Maaneet who were wearing the dress in different rooms in farm house.



Geet's Lehenga''.


Geet's jewellery


Maan's sherwani''..



Dadimaa was made come to the temple straight from Amritsar so she was accompanied by her relatives.Maan came out of his room and stood waiting for Geet to come out.When she came out then he was mesmerised seeing the swelling beauty which was oozing out due to that traditional dress.Her Orange lehenga was adding up more beauty to her face.She was looking like an angel descended from heaven and her full mounts and curvaceous waist was thinking Maan to be yummy.He had the urge to grab her and eat her alive and his whole body shivered with the desires seeing her in that attire.How can a girl look beautiful in a simple wedding attire made him so wonder and he stood staring at her hungrily.Geet saw his intense dark eyes and knew what he was thinking and blushed more furiously.



Now Maan was more mesmerised seeing her red hue on her chubby cheeks which added up the beauty of her face.Maan walked towards her as if he has been hypnotised and pulled her soft frame to his hard frame.He so much wanted to swallow that blushing lips but resisted and whispered softly biting her earlobe which made her blush more and she hid her face inside his chest.Maan chuckled seeing her blush but on that time Veer came and he cleared his throat.Veer too had wore a maroon color sherwani.







Geet try to free herself from Maan's grip but he tightened his grip and glared at Veer saying it from eyes,"Galath time pe entry liya!"Veer smiled teasingly and said,"Chaddo na mere behen ko yaar'aaj uski shaadi hai aur tu usse chipkaa raha hai'!"Geet's eyes welled up and saw Veer gratefully as she was called his sister by him.

Veer was a bit far away from emotions and said seeing Geet's grateful eyes,"Woh'.woh panditji ne kaha ki shaadi ke liye bhai bhi hona chaahiye ladki ko toh mein bhai ban raha hoon shaadi tak'.!"Maan smiled teasingly and said,"Tu uski moo bola bhai bhi nahin banoge shaadi ke baad bhi?"Veer said,"Agar mein iska bhai shaadi ke baad bhi banoonga toh tumhe apne room me paavoge aur tum us waqt biwi ke saath romance kaise karpaavoge?"Maan glared at him while Geet cutely giggled seeing Maan's glare.Maan saw her giggle and pouted,"Ye lo'bhai behen ek ho gaye'!"Geet muffled her giggle seeing his pout'she wanted to eat him alive seeing his pout but resisted.Veer saw Geet seeing Maan lovingly and spoke,"Geet..tumhaare pati ko tum baad mein ghoorna ab shaadi ka muhoorat shuru hone waala hai..chalo abhi humein wahan pahunchna chaahiye'.!"Geet blushed when Maan gave a lovely stare to her and both walked towards the car which Veer had brought.

Maaneet and Veer reached their puchtaini mandir and got down but still both Maan and Veer were tensed expecting the obstacle on the way which was noticed by Geet.But when they reached the temple on that time their fear vanished into thin air but not so long when they saw Sameera there.Sameera stood smiling pleasantly seeing Maaneet and Veer getting down from the car.Geet was surprised seeing Sameera there and she clutched Maan's hands in the meaning that she wont let him go.Maan sensed this and immediately cocooned her inside his embrace pulling her to his left side.Geet felt home as she felt the warmth fill up and stood shocked.Sameera came and smiled pleasantly and said,"Wahi rukiye'!"Both Maaneet and Veer was shocked and expected the outburst from her but her next action made them all shock rooting to the spot.

Sameera did the aarti and kept the teeka to both and said,"Ab aap ander chal sakte hai'!"Both Maaneet and Veer stood there totally shock while Sameera said,"Geet..jab mein Maan se jagda karke ghar lauti toh meine iske baare mein bahut kuch socha'aur yeh socha ki mein jo bhi kar rahi hoon woh galath kar rahi hoon'tujhse tumhaara pyaar cheen kar mujhe kabhi chain nahin milega'isiliye aaj un saari galathiyon ka pashchaataap karne aagayi'.Maan kal tak ki mera bartaav ke liye mujhe maaf karoge kya?"Both Maaneet stood totally shocked hearing her polite words and Sameera showed her innocent eyes.Veer who had seen the enemies in his war never trusted anyone who are bad and today he dint trust Sameera too.Veer thought that she's scheming some plan to destroy Maaneet's life and that's why she has come back into their life.

Veer came closer to Maan and whispered,"Ye kya ho raha hai Maan'.yeh Sameera aise kyun behave kar rahi hai?"Maan too said totally confused,"Mujhe bhi kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha hai Veer'yeh aise kaise palat gayi..kal toh isne awaaz lagaakar gayi thi yeh keh kar ki hum dono se badla legi'toh fir kal se aaj tak aisa kya ho gaya ki yeh palat gayi'!"Sameera immediately held Geet's feet and said crying,"Geet'mujhe maaf nahin karogi kya'meine jo bhi kiya jalan mein kiya lekin mujhe ehsaas ho gaya kal jab meine Maan ke saath raat bitaane ki koshish kee tab'unhone saaf mana kardiya aur kaha ki woh sirf tumhaare hai'.!"Maan was shocked with this piece of words and immediately roared like a lion,"Bas karo Sameera'mein kab tere saath tha'mein toh Veer ke saath tha'bolo Veer!"Veer immediately said,"Haan Geet..Maan sirf mere saath tha..ussi waqt Sameera aayi thi humese milne ke liye'!"Geet was now getting the picture that why Maan said her to prepare pasta and where he went telling that he wants to attend a very important call.

Geet's eyes welled up thinking that he dint tell her that Sameera had come there to meet him and she thought that he dont trust her that's why he dint tell her.Sameera noticed the hurt and tears in her eyes and turned that side as her plan was working up and Geet gonna shout on Maan but her smile wasnt last long when she heard Geet's words.Geet said resisting her pain,"Haan mujhe maaloom hai aur aapne mere pati par chillaaya tha aur uske wajaise woh raat bhar so nahin paaye'.woh bahut hi uljhan mein the ki unhone jo kiya sahi hai ya nahin..aur aaj subah bhi woh ussi uljhan mein the jiske wajaise woh mujhse theek se baat bhi nahin kee'.!"Maan was astonished seeing her ability to lie to her sister and dint even stop supporting him on that situation.Maan once again fell for her and he stared at her lovingly for not giving the oppurtunity to the outsider to shoot their mouths off about them.Geet said politely,"Dee'aapne jo kiya woh galath tha..lekin ab woh mere saath khush hai'aur mein bhi khush hoon unki khushi dekhkar'isiliye meri vinti hai ki aap unki khushiyon mein baadha mat baniye'!"Geet folded her hands in front fo Sameera which bothered Maan who saw Sameera with disgust.Geet said folding her hands,"Please'!"

Sameera stood there with total shock.She thought Geet gonna confront Maan on that time only and gonna make her angry but Geet's action made her so shocked.While Maan saw Geet more lovingly as she covered up his mistake but also dint give the hint that she's angry on him.Maan had noticed the uncomfortableness when he saw her welled up eyes and stony expression when Sameera announced the so called lie.Sameera gave the forced smile as her first plan had flopped and said,"Geet..mujhe bhi maaf kardo'Maan please'.!"Sameera too folded her hands when Geet held her hands and lowered it and said,"Dee please aap badi hai mujhse'meine aapko maaf kardiya hai'aur mein aapko aamantrit karti hoon is shaadi ko sampann karne ke liye'.!"Sameera gave a forced pleasant smile and said,"Sure Geet'..!"

Both Maaneet and Veer went from there while Sameera lagged behind cursing her plan has been flopped but she dint know that her plan was super hit as Geet was thinking that she's not worth of Maan as he hid the truth.Sameera went back to attend the marriage while Geet's chacha and chachi also came.Pammi had a very smug expression seeing the arrangements while Chachaji was happy that they are gonna marry in front of everyone now.Sanjay dint know about Sameera's plan as he had believed when she pretended to be remorsing her sins in front of him.Both Maaneet sat on the mandap in front of havan kund while Geet came to her chirpy self..or have to say pretended to be in chirpy self.Maan had noticed her reluctance when panditji actually said Geet to keep her hand on his hand for kanyadaan.

Maan cursed Sameera in his mind for spoiling his wedding and decided to manofy his jaan as she had made her face bigger than gol gappa.On the time of Jaimala,Veer pulled Maan so that they play a game but Geet pouted and Maan bowed his head in front of her.Geet cutely put the garland around him and then she dint even play the game and she too bowed her head which bothered him so much.Everyone teased Geet that she's desperate but only Maan knew her turmoil.Maaneet sat back and threw rice grains inside the havan kund and then panditji said to put the mangalsutra around her neck.Maan put the mangalsutra around her neck and all the people blessed them by showering the rice grains on their heads.Then panditji gave Maan vermilion to smear it on Geet's forehead.Maan took it and smeared it on her forehead.Everyone clapped while media clicked some pics of their wedding.Sameera stood in corner seething with anger as she thought her plan has been flopped.

After that both Maaneet stood to take pheras when he put the silver ring on her toe once again along with the old ones.Now came the time of pheras where Sameera thought of the plan and she tied their palloo very loosely and thought it loosens then they blame Geet but on that time Maan held the knot and tied it more tightly glaring at Sameera.Geet dint saw this part while she was busy in her la la land and dint know what was going on around her.Both Maaneet took the 7 pheras and panditji declared that they both are man and wife and told them to take the blessings of the elders.Maaneet went towards Dadimaa and took her blessings.Dadimaa was so happy to have Geet as her DIL so she kissed her forehead lovingly while they went towards Geet's chacha and chachi.Sanjay chachu wholeheartedly gave blessings to them while Pammi chachi pretended to give the blessings while she cursed Geet in her mind.Geet went to Sameera and touched her feet while she pretended to bless her with fake pleasant smile.

Both Maaneet and the relatives went towards the car and Geet hugged Chachu and cried as she had got love from him only while Chachi pretended to pat her back.Sameera cudnt do anything now as the wedding had finished and Geet went to her sasuraal.Both Maaneet came to KM along with their relatives after having lunch in the mandir only.Geet got busy showing their relatives the guest rooms and left Maan alone to be left to think like devil.Just like the proverb-"An idle mind is a devil's workshop",Maan sat alone with his cousins who teased him to the core taking the subject Suhaagraat.Geet was providing the necessity of things to guest while Maan was pouting seeing her gol gappa face in his mind.Veer had seen their silent war and decided to talk to Geet but dadimaa gave some work which he cant refuse and left the KM.

Precap-Maaneet's quarrel on the eve of their official Suhaagraat'..To read my further updates follow in my blog or in my facebook

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The ff which i had started in my blog as mentioned above-ENCHANTED DEVIL-https://srirmg.wordpress.com/2013/01/24/enchanted-devil/Please read it and comment there.

meee also waiting for update

awesome update

di me loving the precap more..

uff ye sameera😡 aur uska sapna😡..lol khud ki sapne khud dar haye😆..

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