Life partner 2,ch-20-pg131,Jan 2nd - Page 66

where do you get these ideas from , huh? they are so unique...

Early in the morning Around 4am...the train stops at your station and you finally are back home. The first thing you do is check your mobile and all the way back home from station, you'd this silly grin on your face. Why oh why, you may wonder. Because you're reading the stories of a mystery solver and get to picturize Amrish Puri. What else can be a better way of being welcomed home? Palin, amazing as always. And i loved when Maan had went ahead and acted and infact felt a childish pleasure at Maya aunty's scared face. You know in this journey of mine I met a girl who's very much like this Geet, who also hadn't let the child inside her grow up. This again reminded me of her. Aww<3

Awesome one..
It was hilarious one
loved it..

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Palin, before I comment on the update, I'd like to say you've become one of my favourite writers here. You have a great style of writing everything, comedy in Main Tera Hero, the depiction of colors in Colors, thriller and suspense in Obsession, deep understanding of love in Beauty and now a very lighthearted story in Life Partner.. I have loved each and every one of these! All credit goes to your portrayal of all the topics! 👏

As for this update, I didn't feel it was short, perhaps because I was laughing so hard throughout! 🤣

Maan toh aasmaan se gira aur khujoor mein atka!! Dancing manzoor nahin toh acting karo! Ab pata chala what was the Nagina thing! 😆 Poor Maya! 🤣

Kiran and Mamta are so up for fun at all times! I love them for that! 😃

The maa-beta scene was heart touching! Especially his confession! 😳

Why is Geet sad? Some problems at her mayka, I guess..? Well, will wait to find out! 😊

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Early in the morning Around 4am...the train stops at your station and you finally are back home. The first thing you do is check your mobile and all the way back home from station, you'd this silly grin on your face. Why oh why, you may wonder. Because you're reading the stories of a mystery solver and get to picturize Amrish Puri. What else can be a better way of being welcomed home? Palin, amazing as always. And i loved when Maan had went ahead and acted and infact felt a childish pleasure at Maya aunty's scared face. You know in this journey of mine I met a girl who's very much like this Geet, who also hadn't let the child inside her grow up. This again reminded me of her. Aww<3

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

where do you get these ideas from , huh? they are so unique...

i really really cant imagine Maan doing these things...i mean he seems such a simple guy and making him do these awkward and mad things is definitely "naughty"...

Maya aunty was seriously scared this time and I loved it!

well, waiting for the revelation behind Geet's sadness..

Originally posted by: palindrome

Thank you so much mariam..Its fun to write in different ways or may be Its my weakness that I myself get bored so soon writing in same way..!!!Believe me I can get bored of "Comedy" too...😆You would find this in next chapter of LP..Bus bahut comedy ho gayi ab...!!!!

Keep reading dear..

always seeking your feedback..

palin..

That's a gift, you know, to be able to steer the story wherever you wish to in the most natural ways..! I wouldn't call it weakness. And as for me reading and giving feedback, it's a give and take world, you write and give us the chapters and we'll read and give you our feedback! 😉

When you mentioned the movie name, I actually googled it out to know what story can come up!! but never expected this!!! OMG!! MSK was hilarious😆

That leaves me with an option of meeting Beauty Maan and Obsession' Putul in my coming journeys. Don't you think? 😆 I missed you all too. 🤗

Originally posted by: TheBrat

That leaves me with an option of meeting Beauty Maan and Obsession' Putul in my coming journeys. Don't you think? 😆 I missed you all too. 🤗