Untouched Desires#5 (Thread 6 Link @ Pg 152) - Page 18

Omg mona da way u have potrayed geet's hallucination is awesome dear👏

To depict an imagination visually and mounting tension on da viewers is possible for directors but da amount of tension u mounted on da readers by penning down such a script is beyond imagination

I'm spellbound how to react to dis prt u cant imagine how my eyes were running 2 read each word as fast as possible due 2 pressure wt nxt & wt nxt

According 2 me dis is da best prt( 52) of ur writing in UD 👍🏼

Gud going dear plz cont soon

U r a blessed writer my dear 👏

awesome update

so geet told evrything abt what happen with her in orphanage

and now y dis is naina apologizing to geet???

Originally posted by: dhamigeet

Omg mona da way u have potrayed geet's hallucination is awesome dear👏

To depict an imagination visually and mounting tension on da viewers is possible for directors but da amount of tension u mounted on da readers by penning down such a script is beyond imagination

I'm spellbound how to react to dis prt u cant imagine how my eyes were running 2 read each word as fast as possible due 2 pressure wt nxt & wt nxt

According 2 me dis is da best prt( 52) of ur writing in UD 👍🏼

Gud going dear plz cont soon

U r a blessed writer my dear 👏