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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
hu..who is it..
is it maan r someone else
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
How can we not like it dear
Normally I wouldn't read teasers but yours I shall
Wonder how when how will this come in
Is the devil in
Great Geet is doomed for sure
Cheers for pm
Kya teaser hai boss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
teaser k ilaawa update de do ll b waiting for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54



very interesting teaser...

when will u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
I have never read such a bold Os.. Wow... Waiting for your update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
So this is d jhalak of devilicious monster.Yippee,i m so excited jst to read d teaser.Pls jaldi update kardo.I m dying to read d devil's intro.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG TEASER 😲
WHAT WILL HAPPEN ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Part-2( Laid Eye On Her)



" come on, we have reached , come on girls and boys.." said the lady

geet stood up and elegantly walked towards the exit of the bus, she was going to fall down when pair of arm catches her and helped her

"thank you rahul, if you hadn't been their than i would have fallen, so thank you" said innocently

"friendship mein no sorry and thank you.." said rahul

"oh ya, i forgot...sorry..opss..." said geet cutely

while rahul laughed and geet gave a baby pout

"arre, my geet is angry now, what to do, a chocolate.." said rahul , he was acting, he fall for her beauty when he saw her, but after knowing her, he had fallen more, he wanted to voice his feeling but he know she couldn't understand all this, for her love was mom-daughter love, father ' daughter love and brother- daughter love, some time he used to wonder how will she survive in this world

rahul was in the same dancing group as geet, they share good friendship, geet used to love all the gang member, she has no selfish motive, care for everyone beyond limit, and group member used to pamper her lot. they loved her innocence..

" chocolate!! please please rahul give it to me , i will not be angry, promise" said geet excitedly

rahul took chocolate out from his pocket and stretched his hand high, so that geet couldn't easily take it.

geet started jumping , but couldn't take it. and showed her fake anger and moved away and stood there, complaining to baba ji. oh baba ji, geet's best friend , to who geet share every secret , her rano maa told her that he is the best.

geet(st)- dekh baba ji, he is showing me attitude, i will not talk to him, katiii

rahul gave a baby pout also, because all other group member was laughing. rahul moved towards geet

rahul held his ears and said " sorry geet, plz forgive me, see here is your choclate.."

geet quickly took it and rahul asked " now i am forgiven?? sorry"

geet gave an angry glare, rahul was not able to understand

"friendship mein no sorry and thank you.." said geet

rahul smiled, all gang came out of the bus and went to their changing room

geet was dressed as she was the lead , she was looking beautiful as always..

they went back stage , their performance was going to start

and finally the performance started,

(music..)

Gopiyon sang ghoome Kanhaiya
Raas rachaiya Ragha na jaaye re
Abb saanwra na bhaaye


she took her postion, the stage was dim, light was on geet and other girl, geet back was facing the audience.. and she started dancing..


Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)


she showed her face and moved according to rythm, the stage light came back, all were dancing..


Panghat pe aake saiyyan marode baiyaan
And everybody crazy on Radha
Chhedde hai humka daiyaan bairi Kanhaiya
And everybody crazy on Radha
Hoga woh lakhon dil ka chor
Humka toh laage woh
Hua hai aise baawla jo kehta jaaye:

she was elegantly dancing , when rahul and boy named satish came inside and stated dancing as per the lyrics..

"O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya" (x2)

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)


rahul and satish was pulling her to themselves , as per the lyric, geet pushed them away and started dancing

O o...
Maathe pe pankh more
Kehte hain makhan-chor
Bajaye bansuri
Bada aaya chitt-chor
(But Radha wants more)
Dhoondungi charon aur milega koi aur
Dungi main haathon me mere dil ki ye dor
(Cuz Radha wants more)


she said, while giving her hand to other boys, but rahul came and sang and dance as per the lyric..

O Radha Radha bholi deewani hai
O Radha Radha do pal jawani hai
O Radha ko sambhalo koi isey bata do
Ki milega na koi Sanwariya

O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya


geet pushed both of them away and moved to girls side and started dancing, showing she didn't care..

Hey Radha Radha kaahe itna guroor bhala
Chhodo bhi nakhre ye kaisi ada
Tune kya socha ek tu hi mash.hoor yahaan
Laakhon hain Gopiyan bhi humpe fida

satish and rahul came sand these line, while pushing geet and hugging other girl, while geet gave an angry glare, they moved away


Ho saari hi duniya ye naari hai
Shuru humse teri kahaani hai

both of them sat on their knees and said to geet, geet cutely said and danced



O rehne de re Kanha
Bhoolega tu sataana
Jo girungi main ban ke Bijuria

and all of them started dancing together, unknown to the danger was seeing them from far..while sipping his drink

O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya

all of them danced together, making pattern , rahul was admiringly seeing geet, while was enjoying to her fullest. and the danger was hating this all...



Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

O panghat pe aake saiyyan marode baiyaan
And everybody crazy on Radha
Chhedde hai humka daiyaan bairi Kanhaiya
And everybody crazy on Radha
Hoga woh lakhon dil ka chor
Humka toh laage woh
Hua hai aise baawla jo kehta jaaye:

"O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya" (x2)

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)


the song finished and audience gave a round of applause and they moved to their changing room and quickly changed.

geet was going out, when she dashed to someone

" how much you charge.." said the man

" one dance performance 1000 rupess, you also want our group to dance, than contact to our company.." said geeet innocently

the man was shocked, when rahul came and said geet to go away, geet was confused but went away

" aj to bol diya, but say it were, we are poor but we have dignity that cannot be sold unlike u all, samjhe" said rahul angrily

he was unknown that someone was carefully watching everything, he saw his hand, dripping in blood and smiled

and went away in his car..

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next- teaser

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plz plz tell me you are liking it or not??😕

first time i am writing something like this..

need your support

want big big comment..

next update after seeing the likes and comment, till then bye bye..

and thank you so much for likes and comment..😳

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Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
poor geet is sooo innocent...wonderfull update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Awesome update...Loved it
Aww geet s so innocent
continue soon
thankx for pm


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