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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATING TOMORROW

TWO UPDATES...😉
AND THEN THREE...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-10





The hospital was having unknown silence, the silence that speaks volume. It was a silence before the thunder storm. All attendant was scared to death , after all terror was standing before them. Yes terror of the devil Mr Maan Singh Khurana. He was standing before the emergency room of the hospital. The doctor came out of the room and said huskily "sir she is weak, actually she took dairy product and as you know she is allergic to such item. She need some rest". Maan smiled and said "pack her belonging and take her home". Doctor was shocked "sir she need rest and..".

He said "she belong to me and my things are perfect and not weak..she has to learn to be strong". Doctor said "but siiirrr'" . adi heard the convo and said"sir she need to be here'please" . maan said "adi don't you remember I don't like any interruption in my decision.." and started him angrily.

He walked out without even seeing her once. Adi felt helpless on this situation. And ordered doctor to wrap up everything. Geet was brought back home. She was very weak and wasn't able to walk properly. She entered the house. She started walking but after sometime she lost her strength and balance and was going to fall when adi was going to support her. But maan , who entered the scene ,signaled adi not to support her. She fell and shouted "ahhh". Nurse was going to help her when maan gave an angry galre to her. She with great difficulty stood up and looked towards adi with numbness in her eyes . and then saw maan and she got scared.

Maan said "I want everyone to leave right now'". geet turned to leave but maan added "leaving you geet". Geet was scared she wanted to run away but she can't. everyone left .

Leaving her there, she started to cry and said "please mujhe vooh nahi kahana, it has cheese in it and I am allergic to it, please mujhe mat khilao..". maan smiled and said "oh god !! my baby is hurt, I am sorry princess". He came closer to her , very near to her. His breath was fanning on her neck and he whispered " you are in devil's den, even if you don't like to do something you have to do it, because here my rules are followed" he shouted and started to laugh. Maan took a stick which was kept on table and said "rule 1: never ever say no to me". Geet was continuously crying.. maan continued "rule 2: never be weak, I hate weak people", geet started sweating . maan said "rule 3: this is not your fairyland where a prince will come and give you everything you wanted, it's a devil house where you are caged and happiness are not meant here". Geet started shivering . she heard "remember geet this devil never forgive nor forget". Geet weeping voliently and she heard " do you get it?". Geet was scared and quickly nodded. Maan shouted "I haven't heard you?". Geet whispered " yeeesss".

Maan dangerously came close to her and caught her hair tightly "what I didn't hear you?". Geet said "yesss..". maan threw her on the floor and went away. Geet was continuously crying. She was missing her friends and mom. Never I her life she has seen such manhandling. She didn't know what to say, what to do, she was totally blank. She was fully trapped, what to do and what not. She with great difficultly stood up and dragged herself to the room. Let see what god had stored for her..

Leaving a spot of blood on the floor. Blood was coming out of her head, she was changing from a sensitive doll to a zinda laash.. one person was seeing all this but he can't do anything because he was trapped ..it was none another than adi. He closed his eyes in helplessness'and quietly went away'.

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Hey buddies,

Next part coming soon..

I hope you like it

Do comment and hit like button..

Waiting for replies'

A small teaser

"sir this number is booked in name of ravindra singh".

"lets go.."

Who is this ravindra singh??

''''''''..

Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey, pls do pm me,when u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!!a real devil...poor geet...also poor adi who seeing all the torture but cant help geet...continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh man she is doomed for sure
he is gonna make sure she shall become just a numb body and nothing else
so brutality right but what else can be expected from the devil
and this is just the start hai na which means things will only get worse from here
he is not gonna let her recover properly
which will in turn make it worse for her
man why did she ever come before him
and now there is nothing she can do to be free from here
and no one can help her either
well with the devil being there of course not
poor geet she has no hope now
lets see what happens next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part
OMG!!! Why Maan is behaving like heartless man Now, how will Geet cop up with him😲

waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanks for giving it after a loong time
why maan is behaving like this to geet
why he want geet to stay with him
nd don't want geet to turned into lifeless soul
i want her bubbly nd chirpily self
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg poor GEET..3d smiley 053
KAMINA MAAN
awesome update yar
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHAT A DEVIL IS MAAN
HE WANTS TO TURN HER INTO A PERSON WITH NO THOUGHTS AND FEELINGS
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Posted: 12 years ago
feeling like strangling neck of maan
indeed bad boy n me w8ing for his falling in love

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