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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

u r actually the real devil😡😈...don't u dare think of quitting again or u r gone for sure... 😡😆😈😉...and happy new year to u too sweetie...😛

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

U don know Isha I hav broken leg so plz sorry for late reply and short comment...Its great update as always plz bear my short reply as lots of pms pending ..all parts r awesome

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

double update tho dena hi chahiye tha aap ko
itna dara jo dia tha aapne hum sab ko yeh keh karr ki main no more updates
aisa koi karta hai kya
that was absolutely naughty of you angel
well double update and what updates
so rahul managed to get the police involved huh
and the entry of rajveer as the inspector
but will it make a difference as maan is the one who has geet
and there is no way in hell he will let her go at any costs right
so the police had geet's aunt and uncle locked up and beaten
for what they did to geet thats nothing right
but i guess thats the best thing done to them for the time being anyway
wow he sure scared the hell out of geet even more
oh hello how can get used to violence being an innocent cute and such a adorable bachi
well at least not the level of violence that you are capable of
and what did ya really think she would jump in your arms when she saw you
hello any normal human being who sees someone who is this violent would run away from that person not go to them
and devil she aint a thing but a person
but who am i saying this to he aint gonna change is he
good lord am very afraid fro geet now having to be with maan
wow she sure does trust adi huh
well she knows him only and has established some friendly rapport with him so it wasnt surprising that she went running to him to hide from maan
but adi cant do anything dear no really he cant
they are all helpless against the devil
cheers for pm
hope this is long enough
and dont play such pranks again please you gave us such heart attack

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

awesome part...

loved adi n geet. ..

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Little_Mermaid.

@Little_Mermaid.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

awesome update

i hope maan adi ko kuch na kahe

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

i am waited the part when maan realised that geet is so innocent like a child and she didnot do any acting to be innocent

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Hey, this is nt fair. We do read ur works n also like n comment on them n we really like ur stories so pls pls don't quit writing pls.

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Oh god, u scared me sayng tht u'll quit writng bt thank god tht was a joke. Nyways, the update was lovely. Rahul searchng geet with help of rajveer n also geet's uncle n aunty told them tht they sold geet. Lets c how they'll find geet. Next part 8 was superb. Poor doctor became clerk. N geet getting so scared of maan, then adi consoling geet where don't like it. Waitng for nxt. Do update soon as a new year gift. Also don't know y bt lyk tab is nt working.
A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU.

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

superb double update

loved it

waiting for next part

thanx for the pm dear

cont soon

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: angelwords
buddies,

ok ok!! please stop... lol lol 😆

i was joking, 😆😆😆...i was just you know Teasing you all 😆
after all 2012 is ending, etna tho banta hain.. 😉 😉 😆 😆

i like it,, oh god.. i can never leave , varna my di's and readers will kill mee 😆
after all i promised i will never leave...then
salam dialouge 'ek baar jo mein commitment kardiya, tho mein bagwaan ki bhi nahi sunti' 😆😆

ok god, you all really thought i will...

maza agaya..acha now plz don't kill me...i am scared😳

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