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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing Intro...
Do cont Soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
CONGRATES on new story dear.
wowww amazing intro yar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start ...nice intro ll wait for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part -1 ( Scream of death)



a lady came out and said

" bring the hot water and some towel fast"

"ahhh" came a loud cry,

the other lady send a person to bring it

"madam ji, she will be ok na?"said the other lady

"see, before only i told you both that this pregnancy is not safe for her, but she wanted this child, now i can't say anything" said the lady doctor

a women came with hot water and towel

and lady doctor went inside, the screaming was still their

"ahhh, ahhh"

the other lady folded her hand

"babaji, what have this poor done to you, why are you making her suffer like this.." a tear escaped from her eyes

there they were, in a small village named hoshiyarpur, a small cottage in the outskirts of city, the road were totally quiet no voice, nothing, just the scream

few minutes passed, when a baby's cry was heard

" ahaan aaahaaan.."

the other lady smiled and congratulated everyone present..

the doctor came out panicking

" come fast , she want to same something to you, she has very less time left.." tear escaped from the other lady eyes

the other lady came inside and sat beside the new mother

"raaanoo deee"

"yes dear, i am here"

" promise me, ahhh, promise me thattt you will loook after my daughter, you will never leave her to suffer and keep her away from the dirtiness of the world"

"promise dear, promise..."

the child was brought and kept beside her mother, she patted her.

"you were the reason of my living , my aim, my happiness, my melody, my GEET"

And atlast closed her eyes forever

"Parineeetaaa..." and the other lady cried

" she has left us.." said the doctor and went way

the baby was given to rano

" tu geet hain, parineeta ki geet, meri geet.." and hugged her

" jo teri maa ke saath huin, voh mein tera saath kabhi nahi hona duingi..."

the baby geet was sleeping , not knowing and understanding that her mother has left her forever

...

18 Years after


"geet sun, tera ko madam bula rahi hain.."

geet smiled and went to meet madam

" sun geet ek rich ghar pe performance deni hain, they have contacted us for it, you have to handle it.."

"ji madam ji.." said geet

"gud hain ji.."

and went away

she went back to her room, can't be said a room also, a store room, didn't have even proper place

she didn't know who they all are , she know that her rano maa gave her responsibility to her uncle and her uncle send her here.. she never asked where she was, this is right or wrong, its her wish or not just following everything that is happening

and sat in front to mirror and take out her mother's photo

"i miss you maa, when will you come to your geet, apki geet apko bahut miss karti hain.." and put the photo back..

and went away

...

ok buddies, here it is

additional info- geet is in dancing agency , where certain group are sent to perform on different shows..

tell me please you are liking the story or not??

do comment and hit like button

thanks to all who joined me now,

and thanks for likes and comment..

give big big comment... TELL ME YOUR VIEWS ABOUT THE STORY TILL NOW, ITS REALLLY IMPORTANT TO KNOW...

next update- after seeing the like and comment, because if you all are not liking it, then it is of no use, till then bye bye...

and yes, don't forget to comment and hit like button..

don't worry devil's entry will be soon..

...

Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wait her mother died giving birth to her huh
and she gave her daughter to her sister rano
who seemed to have left her to her uncle
am getting confused here but thats beside the point
but what happened with her mother
and where is her rano ma now
and how the hell is the devil gonna come into all this
so she is a dancer huh
cheers for pm
dying to know more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO GEET IS JUST A DANCER
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh Geet is orphan...her mother died giving her responsibility to Rano...

but why rano gave her to some Uncle...who is that Uncle...

very interesting start...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Awesome Start 👏

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