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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia



didu updating ka board laga ke kaha gayab ho gaye
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one more hour jaan will update three stories in a row mhh, nasha and this one😉
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welcome to ai😉
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sia where are you?? nishu updatinng😉
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PART 11:

aatishein means fire works ishq means love title mean love which sets everything into fire!! thik hai??

you will not leave me right?? Making the pleats he tugged them in the saree skirt, she watched his eyes which had a tale. His hands got the dori tying them while geet hugged maan close letting all the insecurities to wash away jab tak mera jaan hai main aapke paas rahongi she said out while maan's grip tightened around her waist possessively


Maan neeche jaana hai hume please sab kya sochenge?? She pleaded while maan buried himself more into her not ready to leave geet not even for a while


Teri baahon mein mili
Aisi rahat si mujhe


We will come back maan I am not going anywhere, dadima ko bura lagega she wriggled trying to let herself free from maan who was nowhere to leave her


Ho gayi jaan-e-jahaan
Teri aadat si mujhe


He kissed her lips slamming geet on the bathroom wall, all her protests went in drain when both of them forgot about the happenings around.


Dekhun main jab tujhko toh
Tab mera din yeh dhale


With the phone ring, the reality sunk, he left geet saying just an hour we will be back now go down he said leaving to collect the phone. Geet wiped his lips and left down, he understood about the lipstick marks, smiled again


Deewana kar raha hai
Tera roop sunehra
Musalsal khal raha hai


As geet stood beside dadima maan came down, his heart swelled with proud seeing how much she got attached to dadima. Geet was just sticking to her like a bubblegum like a kid.


Mujhko ab yeh sehra
Bata ab jaayein toh jaayein kahaan


Few women approached dadima, kya baat hai savitri ji aapki choti bahu abhi bani nahi aap toh isse chod bhi nahi rahe

Dadima: kya karon?? Maan ne itni achi ladki laake dediya mere godh mein, bahu nahi meri beti jaisi hai ab yeh sirf rishta dadisaans ka hai she said kissing geet's cheeks


Deewana kar raha hai
Tera roop sunehra


As maaneet came forward for the pooja after dev and sam backed all the people watched them praising the couple, few were actually shocked with the way maan and sam separated from each other. Sam seemed to be effected with the presence of geet, the way both of them stood behind after the arti holding each other. If everything worked out well she would have been with maan now which can never ever happen.


Musalsal khal raha hai
Mujhko ab yeh sehra
Bata ab jaayein toh jaayein kahaani


After the whole pooja maan came back to room and remembered he had an important meeting with the clients just had an hour. He was started to gather things from here and there, and finally started to leave only to be blocked by geet.


Dard ka aalam hai har dum
Tere bin o mere hum dum
Aankhon mein dikhti hai maausiyan


Breakfast karke hi jaana hai aapko, she stepped inside pushing him back, bachpanaa chodo geet I have to rush for a meeting, she held the file and threw it away pehle khayiye aur phir jayiye she said making maan to sit on the bed and fed him breakfast as he watched her, the care, the affection which he never got never in life.


Jahaan bhi jaaun tere bin
Badi mushkil se guzre din


As the meeting ended, aadi and sasha got the designs to maan for a final check who was in a rush to go back home, to his geet. Even though its been just three hours he was finding it difficult to stay there, but this was really important to destroy dev. He somehow immersed himself into the work till late night.


Chubti hai dil ko teri khamoshiyan
Raaz gehra jo hai tera
Darr hai kaisa tu hai mera aa


The moment maan came, geet ran into his arms like a kid, pata hai I was waiting for you like a mad person kitna der kar diya she complained cutely


Deewana kar raha hai
Tera roop sunehra


No saying this he grabbed geet into his lap kissing he insanely kissing her, but she only protested first have your food maan poora din office mein rahe pata nahi lunch kiya ya nahi stop it she stuffed the food inside maan's mouth


Musalsal khal raha hai
Mujhko ab yeh sehra
Bata ab jaayein toh jaayein kahaan


Somehow geet fed him food and both of them finally started the night of passion which did not seem to end. The lust maan had for geet slowly began to change into LOVE which he isn't aware off.


Deewana kar raha hai
Tera roop sunehra


So did the day start for maan with geet feeding him food and then a little make out session in the morning before he leaves for office


Musalsal khal raha hai
Mujhko ab yeh sehra
Bata ab jaayein toh jaayein kahaan


Even the office work seem to run smooth, things started to fall back, actually more than the normal way. Geet turned out to be an angel of his life. After the night he spent with her, he got a profit for the company and now he is setting himself to take over dev's business


Dhul gaye dil ke saare ghum
Kushi se aankhein hai yeh namm


Geet seemed really happy though maan was getting busier with his work every day he never sleeps without making love to her, he started to teach her during the weekends almost for the whole day not once stepping out of the bed. Geet could not do much other than blushing. She reads everything during weekdays


Zindagi mein tu meri jab se aa gaya
Dil ka armaan bana hai tu


It was maan's birthday today and geet prepared his favorite dishes decorating their room beautifully reminding him of the night for the first time when they made love, actually lust to be precise things changed, now its not the same maan, not the same geet


Meri pehchaan bana hai tu
Saanson mein rooh bann ke tu sama gaya


When maan found out the decorated room all he had to do is getting on the bed along with geet. For her it seemed as if this unending desire of maan was his love to express himself.


Jaan bhi teri, dil bhi tera
Tujhse hai mera sawera oo..


The best birthday gift ever both of them snuggled closer to each other all naked under the spread sitting near the window watching the rainy evening

Deewana kar raha hai
Tera roop sunehra


Thanks for coming into my life geet. You have changed it completely!! Those were the words finally came out from his mouth and geet blushed hiding herself into his arms


Musalsal khal raha hai
Mujhko ab yeh sehra
Bata ab jaayein toh jaayein kahaan


Magazines got published BUSINESS MAN OF THE YEAR MAAN SINGH KHURANA, the newspapers main page filled with praises for maan. Geet kissed his pic in the paper


Main hoon tumhare saamne tum newspaper pakadke baith gayi, kiss me instead, she went red in embarrassment badly caught this way!!

Deewana kar raha hai
Tera roop sunehra
Musalsal khal raha hai


Geet got the books into hand and tried concentrating, maan knew she was struggling, he smirked and sat beside her, kissing her


Mujhko ab yeh sehra
Bata ab jaayein toh jaayein kahaan


Geet screamed out... maan aap agar kuch time mujhe chodenge toh main kuch seekhongi na?? you are just making it tuff for me, then geet threw the books aside and sat infront of him throwing her hands inviting him into her arms turning around, baaki ka kal padh lena after I leave to office with that both of them landed on the bed.


Bata ab jaayein toh jaayein kahaan..


Precap: will the love paradise break?? Twist ahead!!


Next update after I get 250 likes strictly girls coz I guess I gave a lamba sa update


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Posted: 12 years ago
Itne ache dino ke baad koi twist sehen nai hota ... fab update ...cont soonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
SuperB one:-)dear
loved it to d core
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Posted: 12 years ago
i want twist i hope maan would be 1st to realize love
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oh nooo twist hope good twist ho

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