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Prem

@PremDutta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Amazing update...di...i luved it...and yeah make this one as long story because i just the concept of the story:-)

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#802

its a sin to have known you
its a sin to have seen you
its a sin to be in your company
its a sin to have desired you
its a sin to be in love with you
yet i see myself committing this sin
this sin is unstoppable
its inescapable
and no matter how much i deny
its pleasureful
whats a sin?
its a mistake which you are made to commit
its a mistake you willingly commit
its a mistake you lovingly commit
its a mistake i love to commit
it it means breaking the rules
so be it
for you
so be it

yours always

geet handa
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this maan is so full of mystery
he is mysterious personified
and that acts as an magnet and attracts geet towards him
loved the update
each of the words held so much sensuality and heat that i almost melted
you cast spell with your updates
a magical one
continue soon
will be waiting for more

b it a ss or an ff
am game for both
whatever you write its magical
so waiting for more of your magic!

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Eza_analyst

@Eza_analyst

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#803

STILL conphuse 😕😕😕 with these sins
kyaa karu but except itt whatvere I understood was damn good
loved those lines annie baaji 😆 please write such lines more often heheh

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#804

aww lovely update dear and sloth is an animal who always be very lazy right so the sin is named after the animal as some thoughts start to swoop in our mind and we act just like a sloth...wow lovely dear so now geet ha lost bus...so maan is gonna save her or not...well he's gonna do that but what will be the next sin????do continue soon dear...👏

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soniaz121

@soniaz121

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#805

nice update i really don't know sloth is a sin thanx to u the story is so good well i will love to read it as a ff

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#806

Brilliant simply amazing

Every word is so magical.. Mesmerizing taking me t o different world

Every update is so in sync with the title👏

Now question of SS or FF

Um confuse now

Let me think🤓

Supernatural mm.. Interesting😆

But still confused

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ylaraib

@ylaraib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

AWESOME UPDATE

there trip and geet left behind

ab kya ho ga will maan come there or not ?

LARAIB

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ETRIKA

@etrika

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Awesome updates well for me make it a long ff with supernatural elements it would be interesting to read something of this type.havent read maaneet with supernatural element.and i know u will do complete justice to it.

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Dolly

@kptl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#809

m really loving this ff wid supernatural elem.:)
Luv maaneet Convo...bt wat does he ment by saying
knowing more abt him pol will hate him...:(
no one can hate him...nd geet commuted her second
sin...interesting...nd ooh no they left her behind...
no one cared enough to get her...:(
hp maan is there as always..;)

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mila1

@mila1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#810

Aniee🤗

Guess I'm really late for commenting. But nice update n when he was caressing her face n his eyes went darker i was☺️...

So its SLOTH after Greed whats next Envy, Pride, Rage or Lust?

@Parinain:After reading Aniee's updates the next thing i do is read ur lovely n spicy comments in her each thread😛. How come u r always the first 1 to comment? Do u stalk Annie like a Devil😆? Another thing YES all the SINs have their individual Colour.

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