'Lyf Starts Where It Ends'#4 ....URGENT NOTE @148 - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago
Gals! M absolutely f9.. M at my maasi's place nd here network is quiet low... I m returning back after a week nd den will gve updates :-D :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Gals! M absolutely f9.. M at my maasi's place nd here network is quiet low... I m returning back after a week nd den will gve updates :-D :-)


ohhh tho ye hai bath its ok


take your time


me waiting here jaldi aana 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
when r u going to update dear its been so long now
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Hey all! K i knw dat m very very late in updating bt as mst of u knw dat i gt a new job which i had joined immediately after cuming back, my mst of the tym went in dat along wid my studies.. My days r too mch hectic nw a days giving me v less tym to type.. Sorry to make u all wait bt i promise dat i'll try to update as soon as i can.. Sorry once again :-( ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Hey all! K i knw dat m very very late in updating bt as mst of u knw dat i gt a new job which i had joined immediately after cuming back, my mst of the tym went in dat along wid my studies.. My days r too mch hectic nw a days giving me v less tym to type.. Sorry to make u all wait bt i promise dat i'll try to update as soon as i can.. Sorry once again :-( ...

Congrats Akku
Happy that some problems are sorting out
Take your time
Will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Gals! M absolutely f9.. M at my maasi's place nd here network is quiet low... I m returning back after a week nd den will gve updates :-D :-)



Hey! Thanks for the note. I just opened it to say for update. Waiting desperately...
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heyyy akku comesoon plz

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PLZ this one laso update
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Waiting for it 😳 please update this too soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

TEASER:

She never knew that Maan had this playful side of his too but to think she didn't knew him at all. She knew him as her Boss, She knew him as a kind Person who took care of everyone including his Employees, she knew him as a person who had given her strength nd support with his warmth when she was so much emotionally wrecked, she knew him as her Seher's Mishter Khulana who didn't even hesitate to give away the single drop of his blood when she was fighting between her lyf nd Death; but it seems that as much as she was able to know him, there's still lots more that has been left for her to know about him nd probably she's the fortunate one who has been able to see so many colours of her otherwise Rude, Arrogant nd Shrewd Boss, she thought as she looked at the duo who was busy in their own world.

Seeing Maan holding Seher so tenderly making sure that she won't get hurt even after so much being engrossed in their playing session was a totally emotional moment for her. Kuldeep didn't even got a chance to hold her in his arms nd even if he would have got then she was not sure how he would have behaved with her, probably he would have hurted her too in his possessiveness nd the fear in which she was living at that tym nd probably now too, her too must have been growing up with the same. But here Maan was showering so much Love on her little angel even after having no relationship with her no cut that he did have a relation with her which is far beyond any name, she thought as she felt herself promptly burst into tears at this tender display of affection but then she hastily wiped away her eyes not wanting to spoil the serenity of the moment. Maan nd Seher however were too engrossed nd absorbed in each other to notice anything.

She just stood over there transfixed, looking at the two of them being lost in their own world laughing nd playing. Seeing Maan Laughing si freely was indeed a sight which was rare for anyone to see nd she's the lucky one to witness it, she thought as she admired his laughing face that was indeed looking so good at this moment that she wanted to capture this moment for forever making the tym to get freeze, who knows that whether she'll ever be able to witness this same sight before.

At that very moment an unwanted thought crawled into her mind like a stealthy urchin sneaking off with a loaf from Baker's cart. A thought that said, "If only Maan was the father of Seher; they are so perfect together, probably then she too would have a perfect family like others" she didn't know from where this thought crawled in her mind but for the first tym she didn't felt loathing herself for being this selfish. For once, just once she wanted to be selfish enough to think of anything like that keeping all her logics nd ideologies at bay nd she don't even know why she wanted so, probably she had become too tired nd exhausted by fighting away with these alien feelings nd emotions Everytym they arise nd wanting them to seep through her vein for once, she thought as she gazed at both of them for a long tym, too afraid to even move, in case she disturbed the serenity. And it was then she realized that for the first tym in these many years, she had experienced something so strange, an emotion she had never felt before.

It was hard to put a name to feeling, but it was so blissful, so calming nd so soothing, that she found herself craving for it more nd more by every passing second. Was she really falling for him as Teji said, a part of her asked her to which she has no answer or probably she don't want to answer as it could probably ruin the that calming nd soothing feeling that she was feeling right now after god knows how long nd hence for once, just once she wanted herself to get with the flow before the harsh face of reality could again bring her back to the place where she actually is, but still the thought lingered somewhere at the back of her mind "Is she really Falling for him?"


Is she really Falling for him?😳...


Wat say guys! kya lagta hai... Enjoy the teaser until i update next😛... Have typed half of it will update in a day or two...


nd ya i am highly disappointed with the no. of likes nd comments i got in the last update... i dont even feel like to update but i am updating just for some of my friends who have been waiting for so long... please guys so need your opinion about whatever you feel like as they are really very important for me


P.S.S Also i had created a new page for the notification of my updates of all FFs as i was having some problems while accessing the Group... Kindly like it to get the quick notification of my update... here's the Link


Aakriti's Magical Maaneet World


Like it ok...


Luv you all

Aakriti😊




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