'Lyf Starts Where It Ends'#4 ....URGENT NOTE @148

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mayashri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

really happy akriti yar ur back with lyf starts where its end i just loved this story lot yar maaneet were right on there placed but whats wrong sehar done yar y she get punishment cause of all this n maan also wat his fault that he just love both of them unconditionally yar now this time geet to understood him yar hope she will understood him before that devil cums again their life

thanks for update and pm

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Plzzz...update...

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

kab update milega...??

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

pls update the next part soon.cant wait..pls pls

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

ok dear

its my little try for your ff

hope you like it

and i m able to do justice with my thoughts

and as it is coming after so much part

so starting main sorry

it going to be long

yeh duniya

kya khel hai uss khuda ka

har pal yaha

har din yaha

sab kuch hai badal raha

jo baandhe the khuda ne,

woh dhaage tut gaye

aur kuch rishte nanhe haatho ke

har jung jeet gaye

woh dono

chale jaa rahe the

zindagi ki raah par ,

the ruth gaye khud se ,

jaane kis mod par !

khush the ,

par khud ke liye nahi ,

unke liye ,jo ban gaye the maksad

jeene ka unke ,

is zindagi ki doud par !

geet : jee rahi thi main ,apni yeh zindagi

uske liye jisse ,

diya to tha janam maine ,

par woh ban gayi

meri zindagi !

jo rishte khuda ne likhe

apno ne joode ,

jab woh hi dagaa de gaye !

to ab , kyu yeh dil mera

kah raha hai ,karle yaki isspe

jise ,

meri zindagi ki dor hi ,

ab mujh se joode !

kyu hai yaki is dil ko ,

yeh hum saaya hai mera !

rakhe ga yeh yu sambhal ke meri khushiyo ko ,

jaise woh ,khuda ka barsaya

karam ho uss par !

par kya

yeh sahi hai , ke du main inhe woh gum bhi

jo hum saaya hai mere !

khushiya mujhe haasil nahi

au inhe gum de saku ,

itna main qaabil nahi !

to dur jaana hi unse , bahta hoga

kuch na haasil unhe ,mere saath chalne se hoga

maan : kis mod par ,

zindagi badal gayi ,

aisa nahi tha , ke woh abhi aayi thi

jo ab mujh par sarur ban kar chaayi hai

shaamil to woh ,meri zindagi main kab se thi

bas ab kissi nanhi pari ke aane se ,

woh abhi mujhe nazar aayi hai

sorry dear its done in speed

one more due

pakka promise

that will come soon

hope you like this one

please reply

me waiting.

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
ok dear
its my little try for your ff
hope you like it
and i m able to do justice with my thoughts
and as it is coming after so much part
so starting main sorry
it going to be long

yeh duniya
kya khel hai uss khuda ka
har pal yaha
har din yaha
sab kuch hai badal raha
jo baandhe the khuda ne,
woh dhaage tut gaye

aur kuch rishte nanhe haatho ke
har jung jeet gaye

woh dono
chale jaa rahe the
zindagi ki raah par

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